bebasi-bekaari

by bekarar on June 04, 2008, 06:28:10 PM
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Akhbaaron me ishtehaar ko,
Noukriyon ke khule bazaar ko,
Interview ke har sawal ko,
“Call karenge” is jawab  ko,
Dekha maine... aah bhari... muskaraya...chal diya

Maa ke kumbhlaye chehre ko,
Baapu ki sooni aankhon ko
Kahe-Ankahe har sawal ko,
Tuta-ti hui har aas ko,
Dekha maine....aah bhari....muskaraya..... chal diya
 
Ghar me pasari lachari ko,
Maa ki surat bechari ko,
Bahan ki shaadi ki chinta ko,
Dahej mangte besharmon ko
Dekha maine....aah bhari...muskaraya....chal diya

Uski zulfon ke baadal ko
Lahraate uske aanchal ko,
Apne badkismat hathon ko,
Dil ko chubhati uski baton ko,
Dekha maine...aah bhari....muskaraya....chal diya

Barish ki rimjhim boondon ko,
Sawan ki madmast pawan ko
Bachchon ke nanhe haathon ko
Tutlati unki baton ko,
Thele pe kulfi wale ko
Dekha maine....aah bhari...Muskaraya... chal diya
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«Reply #1 on: June 04, 2008, 09:13:49 PM »
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wah kay abaat hai, bahoot khoob bekarar ji!!! Good creation!! Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: June 04, 2008, 10:31:54 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Bekara..bohot achchi rachna ki hai aapne...Aapki rachnayen jevan ke kadwe sach ko ujagar karti hain. Bohot khoob  Applause
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«Reply #3 on: June 05, 2008, 07:37:44 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on June 04, 2008, 06:28:10 PM

Akhbaaron me ishtehaar ko,
Noukriyon ke khule bazaar ko,
Interview ke har sawal ko,
“Call karenge” is jawab  ko,
Dekha maine... aah bhari... muskaraya...chal diya

Maa ke kumbhlaye chehre ko,
Baapu ki sooni aankhon ko
Kahe-Ankahe har sawal ko,
Tuta-ti hui har aas ko,
Dekha maine....aah bhari....muskaraya..... chal diya
 
Ghar me pasari lachari ko,
Maa ki surat bechari ko,
Bahan ki shaadi ki chinta ko,
Dahej mangte besharmon ko
Dekha maine....aah bhari...muskaraya....chal diya

Uski zulfon ke baadal ko
Lahraate uske aanchal ko,
Apne badkismat hathon ko,
Dil ko chubhati uski baton ko,
Dekha maine...aah bhari....muskaraya....chal diya

Barish ki rimjhim boondon ko,
Sawan ki madmast pawan ko
Bachchon ke nanhe haathon ko
Tutlati unki baton ko,
Thele pe kulfi wale ko
Dekha maine....aah bhari...Muskaraya... chal diya


bahoot khoob sir jee samaj kee ek jawalnt samsya ko kis khoobee se aapne batayaa hai uska jawab nahi daad deta hoo aapkee soch ko
...........kuch mai bhee koshish kartaa hoo

dekhtaa hoo dubte bawishy ko
bebas lachaar saa
bekarr haath pair maartaa hoo andhero me
nit nya savera hota hai
sirf yahee suntaa ayaa hoo
andkaar hai bikaree lachaaree ka
mai to doob rahaa hoo
kitnee aashaao ko duba raha hoo
bas ek aas hai
hosaktaa hai koi pal aajaye
roshnee kee ek hee kiran mil jaye..

netra....

netra...
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«Reply #4 on: June 05, 2008, 12:27:46 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on June 04, 2008, 09:13:49 PM
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wah kay abaat hai, bahoot khoob bekarar ji!!! Good creation!! Clapping Smiley

dhanyawad poojaji....aapko achcha laga ye jaan kar mujhe bahoot khushi hui
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«Reply #5 on: June 05, 2008, 12:32:47 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on June 04, 2008, 10:31:54 PM
Bohot Khoob Bekara..bohot achchi rachna ki hai aapne...Aapki rachnayen jevan ke kadwe sach ko ujagar karti hain. Bohot khoob  Applause

thanku talat ji.... hume to lagta hai poora jeevan hi kadava sach hai.....ya fir sirf kadavahat hi hai.....

thanks for appreciation and valuable comments...
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«Reply #6 on: June 05, 2008, 12:38:02 PM »
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Quote from: NETRAPAL on June 05, 2008, 07:37:44 AM
bahoot khoob sir jee samaj kee ek jawalnt samsya ko kis khoobee se aapne batayaa hai uska jawab nahi daad deta hoo aapkee soch ko
...........kuch mai bhee koshish kartaa hoo

dekhtaa hoo dubte bawishy ko
bebas lachaar saa
bekarr haath pair maartaa hoo andhero me
nit nya savera hota hai
sirf yahee suntaa ayaa hoo
andkaar hai bikaree lachaaree ka
mai to doob rahaa hoo
kitnee aashaao ko duba raha hoo
bas ek aas hai
hosaktaa hai koi pal aajaye
roshnee kee ek hee kiran mil jaye..

netra....

netra...


netra ji
mujhe achcha laga aapke comments padh-kar....
aur aapka zawab bhi bahoot achche shabdon ka sunder sanyojan raha.. dhanyawad
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«Reply #7 on: June 05, 2008, 12:48:31 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on June 04, 2008, 06:28:10 PM

Akhbaaron me ishtehaar ko,
Noukriyon ke khule bazaar ko,
Interview ke har sawal ko,
“Call karenge” is jawab  ko,
Dekha maine... aah bhari... muskaraya...chal diya

Maa ke kumbhlaye chehre ko,
Baapu ki sooni aankhon ko
Kahe-Ankahe har sawal ko,
Tuta-ti hui har aas ko,
Dekha maine....aah bhari....muskaraya..... chal diya
 
Ghar me pasari lachari ko,
Maa ki surat bechari ko,
Bahan ki shaadi ki chinta ko,
Dahej mangte besharmon ko
Dekha maine....aah bhari...muskaraya....chal diya

Uski zulfon ke baadal ko
Lahraate uske aanchal ko,
Apne badkismat hathon ko,
Dil ko chubhati uski baton ko,
Dekha maine...aah bhari....muskaraya....chal diya

Barish ki rimjhim boondon ko,
Sawan ki madmast pawan ko
Bachchon ke nanhe haathon ko
Tutlati unki baton ko,
Thele pe kulfi wale ko
Dekha maine....aah bhari...Muskaraya... chal diya


Bohat khoob bekarar ji.. Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: June 05, 2008, 12:51:49 PM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on June 05, 2008, 12:48:31 PM
Bohat khoob bekarar ji.. Clapping Smiley


thank you Honey ji.....
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«Reply #9 on: June 06, 2008, 02:14:48 PM »
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bohot khoob bekarar ji..very very realistic..keep writing!!
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«Reply #10 on: June 06, 2008, 02:29:41 PM »
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good work bekarar ji
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«Reply #11 on: June 07, 2008, 04:14:59 PM »
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thanks sania & bhawna ji
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