**Be-parda** by Rahim

by dead heart on October 30, 2009, 07:46:53 PM
Pages: [1]
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 1204 times)
-Rahim-
Umda Shayar
*

Rau: 2
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
42 days, 2 hours and 6 minutes.
Posts: 5345
Member Since: Jun 2008


View Profile
Reply with quote
Kuch aisi sadgi se humne apni sharafat ka teer unke seene main chuboya Rahim,
Woh majboor hogaye khud ko be-parda karne ke liye...

~Rahim~
Logged
cara
Yoindian Shayar
******

Rau: 1
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
52 days, 4 hours and 20 minutes.
Posts: 2028
Member Since: Dec 2008


View Profile
«Reply #1 on: October 30, 2009, 07:57:39 PM »
Reply with quote
KYA BAAT HAI     RAHIM JI....

JAESE IK AJNABI NE DASTAK DI HO KISI KE DIL PAR
JAESE US AJNABI KA HI INTEEZAR HO USKO,
AUR USNE DIL KA DARWAAZA KHOL DIYA.
Logged
-Rahim-
Umda Shayar
*

Rau: 2
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
42 days, 2 hours and 6 minutes.
Posts: 5345
Member Since: Jun 2008


View Profile
«Reply #2 on: October 30, 2009, 08:04:48 PM »
Reply with quote
Wah Wah Cara jee..bahaut khoob... btw Shukrya...thnx for reading n appreciating
Logged
Roja
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 5
Offline Offline

Gender: Female
Waqt Bitaya:
48 days, 20 hours and 0 minutes.

Posts: 15972
Member Since: Dec 2006


View Profile
«Reply #3 on: October 30, 2009, 08:15:31 PM »
Reply with quote
Kuch aisi sadgi se humne apni sharafat ka teer unke seene main chuboya Rahim,
Woh majboor hogaye khud ko be-parda karne ke liye...

~Rahim~
Applause Applause
Bahut acche Rahim  Thumbs UP... Aajkal bahut kam dikhayi de rahe ho... be regular na
Logged
Roja
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 5
Offline Offline

Gender: Female
Waqt Bitaya:
48 days, 20 hours and 0 minutes.

Posts: 15972
Member Since: Dec 2006


View Profile
«Reply #4 on: October 30, 2009, 08:16:12 PM »
Reply with quote
KYA BAAT HAI     RAHIM JI....

JAESE IK AJNABI NE DASTAK DI HO KISI KE DIL PAR
JAESE US AJNABI KA HI INTEEZAR HO USKO,
AUR USNE DIL KA DARWAAZA KHOL DIYA.

Applause Applause Lovely  Thumbs UP
Logged
-Rahim-
Umda Shayar
*

Rau: 2
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
42 days, 2 hours and 6 minutes.
Posts: 5345
Member Since: Jun 2008


View Profile
«Reply #5 on: October 30, 2009, 08:18:48 PM »
Reply with quote
Applause Applause
Bahut acche Rahim  Thumbs UP... Aajkal bahut kam dikhayi de rahe ho... be regular na
Shukriya di...Arey ho sakta hai iske baad dikhai bhi na doun...my comp is spoilt and i am leaving Uganda hopefully forever so im nt going to but a new comp...Im going to chase my dream and maybe ill come back to yoindia after two months or so after settling where im going..Just pray for me...
Logged
Roja
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 5
Offline Offline

Gender: Female
Waqt Bitaya:
48 days, 20 hours and 0 minutes.

Posts: 15972
Member Since: Dec 2006


View Profile
«Reply #6 on: October 30, 2009, 08:40:27 PM »
Reply with quote
Shukriya di...Arey ho sakta hai iske baad dikhai bhi na doun...my comp is spoilt and i am leaving Uganda hopefully forever so im nt going to but a new comp...Im going to chase my dream and maybe ill come back to yoindia after two months or so after settling where im going..Just pray for me...

Dilse dua karte rahenge aapke liye. Jahan b jao naam kamao apna pehchan banalo and come back soon  icon_thumleft
Logged
Nysha
WeCare
Umda Shayar
*

Rau: 0
Offline Offline

Gender: Female
Waqt Bitaya:
60 days, 12 hours and 59 minutes.

I Love Yoindia !

Posts: 8353
Member Since: Jan 2007


View Profile WWW
«Reply #7 on: October 31, 2009, 09:34:26 AM »
Reply with quote
Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Rahim Bro ..

May God Bless u and fulfill your dreams Usual Smile
Logged
Rishi Agarwal
Umda Shayar
*

Rau: 14
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
28 days, 5 hours and 40 minutes.

साहित्य सागर

Posts: 6756
Member Since: Jul 2009


View Profile
«Reply #8 on: October 31, 2009, 01:06:23 PM »
Reply with quote
Kuch aisi sadgi se humne apni sharafat ka teer unke seene main chuboya Rahim,
Woh majboor hogaye khud ko be-parda karne ke liye...

~Rahim~

Nice line Rahim bro ApplauseApplauseApplause  aur hum bhi khuda se duaa krenge ki aapke her dream ko wo pura kre
Logged
Rishi Agarwal
Umda Shayar
*

Rau: 14
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
28 days, 5 hours and 40 minutes.

साहित्य सागर

Posts: 6756
Member Since: Jul 2009


View Profile
«Reply #9 on: October 31, 2009, 01:07:29 PM »
Reply with quote
KYA BAAT HAI     RAHIM JI....

JAESE IK AJNABI NE DASTAK DI HO KISI KE DIL PAR
JAESE US AJNABI KA HI INTEEZAR HO USKO,
AUR USNE DIL KA DARWAAZA KHOL DIYA.

Nice cara Ji man gaye aapko aap her reply me jarrur kuch na kuch isi tarah se reply krte rhte ho i like it ApplauseApplauseApplause
Logged
madhuwesh
Umda Shayar
*

Rau: 1
Offline Offline

Gender: Female
Waqt Bitaya:
62 days, 22 hours and 36 minutes.

Don't think who you are ~ Just Respect your self.

Posts: 8109
Member Since: Feb 2009


View Profile
«Reply #10 on: November 02, 2009, 02:42:53 PM »
Reply with quote
Wah bahut bahut khoob Rahim bhai and Cara ji,very touching n lovely creation.excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
Logged
Rajesh Harish
Khaas Shayar
**

Rau: 1
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
38 days, 16 hours and 37 minutes.
Posts: 10584
Member Since: Aug 2008


View Profile
«Reply #11 on: November 02, 2009, 03:39:43 PM »
Reply with quote
Kuch aisi sadgi se humne apni sharafat ka teer unke seene main chuboya Rahim,
Woh majboor hogaye khud ko be-parda karne ke liye...

~Rahim~
Very good one Rahim Ji
Logged
Rajesh Harish
Khaas Shayar
**

Rau: 1
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
38 days, 16 hours and 37 minutes.
Posts: 10584
Member Since: Aug 2008


View Profile
«Reply #12 on: November 02, 2009, 03:42:24 PM »
Reply with quote
KYA BAAT HAI     RAHIM JI....

JAESE IK AJNABI NE DASTAK DI HO KISI KE DIL PAR
JAESE US AJNABI KA HI INTEEZAR HO USKO,
AUR USNE DIL KA DARWAAZA KHOL DIYA.
Cara Ji aap ka bhi Jawaab nahi
Bahut khoob
Logged
Jamshed Humd
Guest
«Reply #13 on: November 04, 2009, 12:06:13 AM »
Reply with quote
yad aata hai tumhara har andaaz mujhe ,
Jabse bichre ho diye jaate ho awaaz mujhe ...

Rahim bhai jahan bhi raho ... Khush raho... icon_salut
Logged
-Rahim-
Umda Shayar
*

Rau: 2
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
42 days, 2 hours and 6 minutes.
Posts: 5345
Member Since: Jun 2008


View Profile
«Reply #14 on: March 05, 2010, 04:11:19 AM »
Reply with quote
Shukriy Divya di,Jamshed jee, Rishi jee, Madhu di aur Rajesh jee
Logged
Pages: [1]
ReplyPrint
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
November 13, 2019, 02:28:57 PM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
[November 13, 2019, 01:54:34 PM]

[November 13, 2019, 01:50:22 PM]

[November 13, 2019, 01:49:10 PM]

[November 13, 2019, 12:33:48 AM]

[November 12, 2019, 10:16:49 PM]

[November 12, 2019, 10:11:25 PM]

[November 12, 2019, 10:09:39 PM]

[November 12, 2019, 10:08:41 PM]

[November 12, 2019, 10:07:50 PM]

[November 12, 2019, 12:38:58 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.191 seconds with 25 queries.
[x] Join now community of 48403 Real Poets and poetry admirer