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Meena
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« on: July 29, 2005, 07:30:54 PM »
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hello dosto,
shadiyan kis ko achi nahin lagti...music hota hai, masti hoti hai...meri yeh poem ek shaks ki soch hai jo ke ek shadi me sirf beti ke father ko dekhta hai. uske khayal, uski soch kuch lafzo me likhne ki koshish ki maine:

Kitna bebas lag raha hai yeh baap kismat ke aage,
Jis phool ko itne pyar se pala usse de raha hai kisi aur ke haath me,

Kushi to bohot hai ke beti ja rahi hai apne ghar,
Par ansowon ki barsat to hone hi lagi soch ke judai ke jazbaat me,

Juka jo ser sirf Ishwar ke aage, aaj insaaon ke aage bhi juk gaya,
Ankh ke moti mang rahe te Upparwale se beti ki kushiyan khairat me,

Dekho, aaj door ja rahi hai woh jo hogi na kabhi uske dil se door,
Ashirwad ke kawaj se raksha karega ek baap apni beti ki apne khayalat me,

Lakon duaon se sajayi hai doli apni ladli ki usne aaj,
Aur babul ke sanskar kaanda de rahe hai usko saath me!

umeed hai aap sab ko pasand ayi hogi!
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« Reply #1 on: July 29, 2005, 07:33:23 PM »
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wonderfull Meena sis ....such a beautifull poem..no words for tareef sis
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« Reply #2 on: July 29, 2005, 07:37:27 PM »
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hm thank u nikki! :D  bas ek koshish hoti hai kuch jazbaato ko lafzo me likhne ki! tume acha lage to me is happy!

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« Reply #3 on: July 29, 2005, 07:45:54 PM »
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always welcum sis...

jab beti ki shadi ho rahi thi...to...

woh sama hi kuch aur tha
woh jazbaaton ka daur tha

woh ghadi bhar ki khushiyan
woh pal do pal mein badalne wala sama

woh armaano se bhare dil
woh kissi se milne ki khushi
aur sabse bichadne ka gum
woh waqt kabhi na lautkar ayega
jaante hain sab

fir bhi na-jaane kyun
beti ki shadi ho jaye
woh apne ghar jaye
uski doli uthe aur baap ka farz poora ho jaye
yahi dua maangte hain sab
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« Reply #4 on: July 29, 2005, 07:48:04 PM »
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Very Nice Meena and Nikki...... bohot achcha likha hai...... !!! Bohot Khoob !! Usual Smile
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« Reply #5 on: July 29, 2005, 07:50:10 PM »
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thank u talat aur bohot hi acha nikki tumne!!!

vidai ki gari bih bohot anmol hoti hai,
kuch kushi ke to kuch gum me ansoon mile hote hai,
lak duayen hoti hai par kehta kuuch nahin,
yeh lafz ansoowon se bayna hote hai, hoont sile hote hai!
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« Reply #6 on: July 29, 2005, 07:50:15 PM »
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thanx Talat sis............................................................
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« Reply #7 on: July 29, 2005, 11:26:09 PM »
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hello dosto,
shadiyan kis ko achi nahin lagti...music hota hai, masti hoti hai...meri yeh poem ek shaks ki soch hai jo ke ek shadi me sirf beti ke father ko dekhta hai. uske khayal, uski soch kuch lafzo me likhne ki koshish ki maine:

Kitna bebas lag raha hai yeh baap kismat ke aage,
Jis phool ko itne pyar se pala usse de raha hai kisi aur ke haath me,

Kushi to bohot hai ke beti ja rahi hai apne ghar,
Par ansowon ki barsat to hone hi lagi soch ke judai ke jazbaat me,

Juka jo ser sirf Ishwar ke aage, aaj insaaon ke aage bhi juk gaya,
Ankh ke moti mang rahe te Upparwale se beti ki kushiyan khairat me,

Dekho, aaj door ja rahi hai woh jo hogi na kabhi uske dil se door,
Ashirwad ke kawaj se raksha karega ek baap apni beti ki apne khayalat me,

Lakon duaon se sajayi hai doli apni ladli ki usne aaj,
Aur babul ke sanskar kaanda de rahe hai usko saath me!

umeed hai aap sab ko pasand ayi hogi!
 :D


wow wow meenu...........   nice  wordings.............  nice  works  all  friends.......sabhi  logon  ne  bahot  accha likha hai............tongue3
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« Reply #8 on: July 30, 2005, 03:07:23 PM »
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thank you talat aur bohot hi acha nikki tumne!!!

vidai ki gari bih bohot anmol hoti hai,
kuch kushi ke to kuch gum me ansoon mile hote hai,
lak duayen hoti hai par kehta kuuch nahin,
yeh lafz ansoowon se bayna hote hai, hoont sile hote hai!


thanx Sis...n very nice n touching again...........
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« Reply #9 on: August 15, 2005, 11:52:07 PM »
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wah meena sis,aapki to baat hi alag hai,dimag hi alag hai tongue3 ,kya khoob likha hai,and very well nikki sis also.
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« Reply #10 on: August 16, 2005, 12:30:04 AM »
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WOW...........kya likha hai..... MIND BLOWING.....this is so true......beti ke shadi main khoob masti hoti hai but no one cares ke parents par kya beet rahi hoti hai!!!..........GOOD JOB u all!!!
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« Reply #11 on: August 16, 2005, 01:11:56 AM »
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thanx Isha n Nidhi sis..............

aaj fir kissi ki doli uthne ko hai
aaj fir kissi ke ghar se shehnayi ki awaaz aa rahi hai

babul kanya daan kar raha hai koi
jo uski umr bhar ki poonji hai

dil main khushi hai
aankhon mein aanson

yeh kaisa mauka hai
isse main kya naam do

sapne babul ke sab sakaar ho gaye
beti ki shaadi hogi , uska ghar bas jayega
yeh baat sochkar ghar wale shadi ke liye taiyaar ho gaye

woh dekho beti dulhan bankar ja rahi hai
maa ki aankh mein aanson hai
bhayi ki bhi awaaz ladkhda rahi hai

yeh woh ghadi hai jo ehsaas dila rahi hai
............woh dekho beti paraye ghar ja rahi hai
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« Reply #12 on: August 16, 2005, 10:47:15 PM »
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thanx Isha n Nidhi sis..............

aaj fir kissi ki doli uthne ko hai
aaj fir kissi ke ghar se shehnayi ki awaaz aa rahi hai

babul kanya daan kar raha hai koi
jo uski umr bhar ki poonji hai

dil main khushi hai
aankhon mein aanson

yeh kaisa mauka hai
isse main kya naam do

sapne babul ke sab sakaar ho gaye
beti ki shaadi hogi , uska ghar bas jayega
yeh baat sochkar ghar wale shadi ke liye taiyaar ho gaye

woh dekho beti dulhan bankar ja rahi hai
maa ki aankh mein aanson hai
bhayi ki bhi awaaz ladkhda rahi hai

yeh woh ghadi hai jo ehsaas dila rahi hai
............woh dekho beti paraye ghar ja rahi hai


hmmmmmmmm   wonderfullllllllll   Nikki.......................  bahot  accha  likha  aap  ne  Nikki................ tongue3   keep  it  up..................
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« Reply #13 on: August 16, 2005, 11:09:58 PM »
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wah nikki sis......mindblowing.....kya baat hai  Usual Smile  !!!!!!!!!!!!
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« Reply #14 on: August 21, 2005, 07:38:39 PM »
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shukriya waheed, nidhi, ishu...and nice one nikki !!!!!!!!!!

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