be-zubaa.n............sheba

by Sheba on June 09, 2013, 07:19:47 PM

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«Reply #15 on: June 11, 2013, 01:21:55 PM »

lajawab peshkash sheba ji. bahut hi umda ghazal kahi hai aapne. har sher khoob hai. hazaron dili daad qubool kare.


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Re: be-zubaa.n............sheba

«Reply #16 on: June 11, 2013, 01:56:53 PM »

kyaa kahoon is ghazal par mere paas words naheen hain bas itnaa hee ki behad khoobsoorat kalaam tumhaare jaisaa


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«Reply #17 on: June 13, 2013, 10:01:35 PM »

Wah Wah!!! Kya Kehne!!!! Very Very Nice And Meaning!!

Great Going!

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«Reply #18 on: June 17, 2013, 03:36:58 AM »

Quote from: laaiba on June 09, 2013, 07:36:02 PM

khoobsoora.t khayalat oomdaa ghaza.l sheba ,.............bohat c daad,............

shukria........!


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«Reply #19 on: July 08, 2013, 03:20:07 AM »

Quote from: sahal on June 09, 2013, 08:50:12 PM

ki jo chaahat falak ki main ne.
tukde-tukde mein aasmaa.n mila!

shakl shaitaan ki liye hue.
bade adab se insaa.n mila!

dekh kar, benoori chehre pe mere.
chaand bhi aaj paresha.n mila!

bohut khoob likha hai apne,,,ye 3 ashaar
lajawaab lage.
Applause

shukria.............!


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«Reply #20 on: July 17, 2013, 03:58:49 AM »

Quote from: khwahish on June 09, 2013, 09:01:46 PM

jitni Bhi Taarif ki jaaye kam hai.lajawaab ghazal pesh ki hai aapne Sheba Ji..Bahut Bahut Khooooooob

shukria.....!


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«Reply #21 on: July 17, 2013, 04:03:16 AM »

aailla tukde tukde meN aasmaan, interesting thought hai, bahut umda sheba ji rau to banta hai, par aap abhi waiting list 3 pe haiN so wait.... Usual Smile

aur likhti raheN, yuNhi bazm ko roshan karti raheN...!!


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«Reply #22 on: July 17, 2013, 04:05:25 AM »

Quote from: Sheba on June 09, 2013, 07:19:47 PM

khaamosh-khamosh sa kaarwaa.n mila!
nazro.n se bhi be-zubaa.n mila!!

ki jo chaahat falak ki main ne.
tukde-tukde mein aasmaa.n mila!

meri talkhi mein dooba hua.
ek-ek lafz hairaa.n mila!

shakl shaitaan ki liye hue.
bade adab se insaa.n mila!

dekh kar, benoori chehre pe mere.
chaand bhi aaj paresha.n mila!

kha kar thokar zamaane ki wo sheba!
mera pyaar mujh se badgumaa.n mila!!

jo bhi mila raaygaN mila Usual Smile

dotn worry .. take hounsla ... Usual Smile


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Re: be-zubaa.n............sheba

«Reply #23 on: August 01, 2013, 12:15:26 PM »

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