DE JAA. sheba

by Sheba on August 18, 2010, 10:16:58 AM
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                     meri mohabbat ko nafrat ki saughaat de jaa,
                     iss naacheez ko magar ek auqaat de jaa,

                     wajood ko mere sehra na banaa iss tarah,
                     meri ankhon ko tu ek barsaat de jaa,

                     na laut khaali ke kabhi aaya hi na tha,
                     yaad rakhoon tujhe aise halaat de jaa,

                     sajaaun ghazal abb kis alfaaz se main,
                     bahut nahin to  kuch khyalaat de jaa,

                     jawaab nahin paas tere iss berukhi ka to,
                     zindagi ke safar mein kuch sawalaat de jaa,


                     nahin chalna saath gar raah -e- wafaa tujhe,
                     mohabbat-e-sheba ko ek jazbaat de jaa..............!!!


                    
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«Reply #1 on: August 18, 2010, 10:25:44 AM »
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Wah wah bahot khoob likha hai sheba ji. Khayalat ki parwaaz bahot uunchi hai. Agar behr mein likha hota to aur bhi khoobsurat kalaam hota ye aapka. Phir bhi it is a nice creation.
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«Reply #2 on: August 18, 2010, 10:36:38 AM »
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wowwwwwwww mastam poem sheeba ji....
isi tarah k aur bhi kai mast mast saugaat de jaa
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«Reply #3 on: August 18, 2010, 10:56:57 AM »
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sheba ji Killer shayari ki hai  Crying
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«Reply #4 on: August 18, 2010, 05:52:46 PM »
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bahot khoob,har sher pe daad qubool kijiega ..bahot umda ,khass kar yeh sher to dil ke bahot qarib raha..sajaaon kaise ab  ghazal. bahot achhe khayalat paish kiye hain aap ne ..aage bhi aise hi umda ashaar ki umid ke saath daad deta hoon.
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«Reply #5 on: August 18, 2010, 07:27:40 PM »
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Janab E Aala AadaaB o Tasleem

Aapki is pur kashish aur dilfareb taqleeq per nazar kiya padi bus khayaaloN ke aur aapke word play meiN kho se gaye hum...... Behad umdaa lagi aapki puri kalaam ...... Dil se daad hazir hai... Kabool kijiye.. Usual Smile..
 

                     meri mohabbat ko nafrat ki saughaat de jaa,
                     iss naacheez ko magar ek auqaat de jaa,

Wah kia khayaal hai... Paheli marta padhe to sher khul nahi paya tha bad meiN dohraye to ajeeb si tiss lagi dil ko.. Daad...

                     wajood ko mere sehra na banaa iss tarah,
                     meri ankhon ko tu ek barsaat de jaa,

Masha Allah Manga bhi to kya manga... khayaal behad khoobi se kaha hai aapne... Dil se daad..

                     na laut khaali ki kabhi aaya hi na tha,
                     tujhe yaad rakhoon aise halaat de jaa,

Behad umdaa Khayaal aur behad gehrai liye hai yeh sher.... Daad Janab.. bahut umdaa ..


                     sajaaun ghazal abb kis alfaaz se main,
                     bahut nahin to kuch apne khyalaat de jaa,

Masha Allah ...... Masha Allah... DheroN daad is sher per... har dil azeez sa hai yeh sher......

                     jawaab nahin paas tere iss berukhi ka to,
                     zindagi ke safar mein kuch sawalaat de jaa,

Kia Baat hai ... bahut khoob ek dum badiyaa khayaal aur umdaa bayaani .....

                     saath nahin chalna gar raah -e- wafaa tujh ko,
                     mohabbat-e-sheba ko ek jazbaat de jaa..............!!!

                     
Aapne maqte meiN bhi behad khubi se apna takhallus istemaal kiya hai..... Aur maqta bhi lajawaab.... Daad aur Daad..

Aapki is kalaam ko padhker behad achcha laga....
IltejaaeN bhi aisi kii jati hai dil ko chubsi gayi dil meiN ghar kar gayi...

Is umdaa kalaam per sekdoN daad...
Aise hi likhate rahiye....
Khush rahiye....
Khuda Hafez...... Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: August 19, 2010, 08:53:03 PM »
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bahut khoob shebaji..
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«Reply #7 on: August 25, 2010, 06:16:00 PM »
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Wah wah bahot khoob likha hai sheba ji. Khayalat ki parwaaz bahot uunchi hai. Agar behr mein likha hota to aur bhi khoobsurat kalaam hota ye aapka. Phir bhi it is a nice creation.

shukria reyaz ji
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«Reply #8 on: August 25, 2010, 06:17:54 PM »
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wowwwwwwww mastam poem sheeba ji....
isi tarah k aur bhi kai mast mast saugaat de jaa

thank you kasak ji
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«Reply #9 on: August 25, 2010, 06:18:51 PM »
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sheba ji Killer shayari ki hai  Crying

thank you arif ji
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«Reply #10 on: August 25, 2010, 06:19:36 PM »
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bahot khoob,har sher pe daad qubool kijiega ..bahot umda ,khass kar yeh sher to dil ke bahot qarib raha..sajaaon kaise ab  ghazal. bahot achhe khayalat paish kiye hain aap ne ..aage bhi aise hi umda ashaar ki umid ke saath daad deta hoon.

shukria nazar sahab
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«Reply #11 on: August 25, 2010, 06:22:38 PM »
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Janab E Aala AadaaB o Tasleem

Aapki is pur kashish aur dilfareb taqleeq per nazar kiya padi bus khayaaloN ke aur aapke word play meiN kho se gaye hum...... Behad umdaa lagi aapki puri kalaam ...... Dil se daad hazir hai... Kabool kijiye.. Usual Smile..
 

                    meri mohabbat ko nafrat ki saughaat de jaa,
                     iss naacheez ko magar ek auqaat de jaa,

Wah kia khayaal hai... Paheli marta padhe to sher khul nahi paya tha bad meiN dohraye to ajeeb si tiss lagi dil ko.. Daad...

                     wajood ko mere sehra na banaa iss tarah,
                     meri ankhon ko tu ek barsaat de jaa,

Masha Allah Manga bhi to kya manga... khayaal behad khoobi se kaha hai aapne... Dil se daad..

                     na laut khaali ki kabhi aaya hi na tha,
                     tujhe yaad rakhoon aise halaat de jaa,

Behad umdaa Khayaal aur behad gehrai liye hai yeh sher.... Daad Janab.. bahut umdaa ..


                     sajaaun ghazal abb kis alfaaz se main,
                     bahut nahin to kuch apne khyalaat de jaa,

Masha Allah ...... Masha Allah... DheroN daad is sher per... har dil azeez sa hai yeh sher......

                     jawaab nahin paas tere iss berukhi ka to,
                     zindagi ke safar mein kuch sawalaat de jaa,

Kia Baat hai ... bahut khoob ek dum badiyaa khayaal aur umdaa bayaani .....

                     saath nahin chalna gar raah -e- wafaa tujh ko,
                     mohabbat-e-sheba ko ek jazbaat de jaa..............!!!

                    
Aapne maqte meiN bhi behad khubi se apna takhallus istemaal kiya hai..... Aur maqta bhi lajawaab.... Daad aur Daad..

Aapki is kalaam ko padhker behad achcha laga....
IltejaaeN bhi aisi kii jati hai dil ko chubsi gayi dil meiN ghar kar gayi...

Is umdaa kalaam per sekdoN daad...
Aise hi likhate rahiye....
Khush rahiye....
Khuda Hafez...... Usual Smile


janab parwaaz sahab
 tasleem

this iz owesome appeciation which in yoindia i have ever received....shukria janab iss qadar hausla afzai ka
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«Reply #12 on: August 26, 2010, 06:21:18 PM »
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«Reply #14 on: August 31, 2010, 01:45:51 AM »
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                     meri mohabbat ko nafrat ki saughaat de jaa,
                     iss naacheez ko magar ek auqaat de jaa,

                     wajood ko mere sehra na banaa iss tarah,
                     meri ankhon ko tu ek barsaat de jaa,

                     na laut khaali ki kabhi aaya hi na tha,
                     tujhe yaad rakhoon aise halaat de jaa,

                     sajaaun ghazal abb kis alfaaz se main,
                     bahut nahin to kuch apne khyalaat de jaa,

                     jawaab nahin paas tere iss berukhi ka to,
                     zindagi ke safar mein kuch sawalaat de jaa,

                     saath nahin chalna gar raah -e- wafaa tujh ko,
                     mohabbat-e-sheba ko ek jazbaat de jaa..............!!!

                     

Good one Sheba Ji
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