pal......sheba

by Sheba on May 04, 2011, 08:46:20 AM
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                                 diyaa zakm jisne kaisa wo chehraa thaa..,
                                 nashtar se na poocho zakm kitna gahraa thaa..,


                                 labo.N ko kya pataa abb wajah khushqi ki,
                                 wo mehfil jo choar aaye ajeeb sehraa thaa,


                                 bhigi palko.N mein koi hasrat nahin baaqi,
                                 sangin toofaan mein bhi paani thaheraa thaa,



                                 chooo na sako tum mere phoolo.N ko aaj,
                                 gulistaan mein bhawro.N ka pahheraa thaa,

                              
                                 dilaati hai yaad shamaa andhere ki apni sheba...!
                                 pal wo yaado.N ka kitnaa sunhairaa thaa,
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«Reply #1 on: May 04, 2011, 09:22:47 AM »

                     
                                 diyaa zakm jisne kaisa wo chehraa thaa..,
                                 nashtar se na poocho zakm kitna gahraa thaa..,


                                 labo.N ko kya pataa abb wajah khushqi ki,
                                 wo mehfil jo choar aaye ajeeb sehraa thaa,


                                 bhigi palko.N mein koi hasrat nahin baaqi,
                                 sangin toofaan mein bhi paani thaheraa thaa,



                                 chooo na sako tum mere phoolo.N ko aaj,
                                 gulistaan mein bhawro.N ka pahheraa thaa,

                             
                                 shamaa apne andhere ki dilaati hai yaad sheba...!
                                 pal wo yaado.N ka bahut sunhairaa thaa,


Bahut Bahut Khooob Shebaji, Har Lafz Mein Gehraai Aur Dil Ko Chuta Hua,Mujhe Kam Lafzon mein Kisi kalaam Ki Tareef karne Nahi Aati,Isliye Shayad Kabhi Kabhi Zyaada keh Jaata Hoon..Par Aapne Bahut Hi Acha Likha Hai..Yuhi likhte Rahiye..Bahut Ache..

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Gustaaki muaaf, Kuch Likh raha Hoon..


Ashkon ka Samundar Palkon par Tehra Tha
Naa Dikhne Wala Zakhm Hi Sabse Gehra Tha

 Yahan Waqt Ke Mutaabik Har cheez Badalti Hai
Par Kaise Badal Gaya Woh Aaena jisme Apna Chehra Tha

Kuch Palon Ko Samet Kar Khush Rehta Hai "Khwaish"
Yakeenan Guzra Hua Woh Daur Bahut Sunehra Tha

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«Reply #2 on: May 04, 2011, 09:54:00 AM »
kya kammal likha hai sheba.. dil main gahre tak utar gahai.. khub..

khwaishji aapne bhi kamaal ki bat kahi hai..
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«Reply #3 on: May 04, 2011, 12:51:24 PM »
sheba…
superhitt ghazal…
isse jada mai kuch nahi kahunga

khuaish ji…
well support
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«Reply #4 on: May 04, 2011, 01:21:05 PM »
bht bht khoob sheba ji...
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«Reply #5 on: May 05, 2011, 02:13:20 AM »
Bohat Khoob Sheba Ji
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«Reply #6 on: May 05, 2011, 05:36:41 AM »
Bahut Bahut Khooob Shebaji, Har Lafz Mein Gehraai Aur Dil Ko Chuta Hua,Mujhe Kam Lafzon mein Kisi kalaam Ki Tareef karne Nahi Aati,Isliye Shayad Kabhi Kabhi Zyaada keh Jaata Hoon..Par Aapne Bahut Hi Acha Likha Hai..Yuhi likhte Rahiye..Bahut Ache..

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Gustaaki muaaf, Kuch Likh raha Hoon..


Ashkon ka Samundar Palkon par Tehra Tha
Naa Dikhne Wala Zakhm Hi Sabse Gehra Tha

 Yahan Waqt Ke Mutaabik Har cheez Badalti Hai
Par Kaise Badal Gaya Woh Aaena jisme Apna Chehra Tha

Kuch Palon Ko Samet Kar Khush Rehta Hai "Khwaish"
Yakeenan Guzra Hua Woh Daur Bahut Sunehra Tha




very nice khawaish ji and thanks
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«Reply #7 on: May 05, 2011, 06:52:43 AM »
wah. kya baat hai.  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: May 05, 2011, 08:12:31 AM »
kya kammal likha hai sheba.. dil main gahre tak utar gahai.. khub..

khwaishji aapne bhi kamaal ki bat kahi hai..

thank you manjum
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«Reply #9 on: June 05, 2011, 10:58:49 AM »
Kya Kehne Bahut Bahut Khub Sheba Ji...Dad

Khwaish Bhai Aapne Bhi Rep Men Barhiya Likha Hai


Shad o Aabad Rahiye...

~Shihab~

SHUKRIYA SHIHAB JI
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«Reply #10 on: June 05, 2011, 11:37:00 AM »

                     
                                 diyaa zakm jisne kaisa wo chehraa thaa..,
                                 nashtar se na poocho zakm kitna gahraa thaa..,


                                 labo.N ko kya pataa abb wajah khushqi ki,
                                 wo mehfil jo choar aaye ajeeb sehraa thaa,


                                 bhigi palko.N mein koi hasrat nahin baaqi,
                                 sangin toofaan mein bhi paani thaheraa thaa,



                                 chooo na sako tum mere phoolo.N ko aaj,
                                 gulistaan mein bhawro.N ka pahheraa thaa,

                             
                                 shamaa apne andhere ki dilaati hai yaad sheba...!
                                 pal wo yaado.N ka bahut sunhairaa thaa,


Bahut Khoob Ashaar Bayaan Kiye Hai ... Sheba Ji !
Tamaam Ghazal Asardaar Lagi Mujhe ...
Dil Se Daad Hazir hai ... Qubuul FarmaayeN ... !
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«Reply #11 on: June 12, 2011, 06:53:59 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: June 14, 2011, 12:44:24 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: June 20, 2011, 11:28:13 AM »
Bahut Khoob Ashaar Bayaan Kiye Hai ... Sheba Ji !
Tamaam Ghazal Asardaar Lagi Mujhe ...
Dil Se Daad Hazir hai ... Qubuul FarmaayeN ... !


shukriya anshu ji
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«Reply #14 on: September 13, 2011, 10:41:20 AM »
Applause Applause Applause

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