bhulaya jaye...

by manzil-e-ishq on November 25, 2010, 09:06:06 AM
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chalo manzilo ko bhulaya jaye
aaj raaho se dil ko bahlaya jaye
 
wo dil me base hai khayalo  ki manind
to kyu na unhe fir sataya jaye
 
agar kal mile to na ruswaiya ho
kuch yun shikwo ko mitaya jaye
 
bahut aazmaya hai isne humko
chalo zindagi ko aazmaya jaye

chalo manzilo ko bhulaya jaye
aaj raaho se dil ko bahlaya jaye
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«Reply #1 on: November 25, 2010, 09:19:45 AM »
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bahut badhiya..3rd one i like d most~

bahut khoob manzil ji..

dher saari daad...

likhte rahiye..
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«Reply #2 on: November 25, 2010, 09:27:34 AM »
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wow Priya ji...
mast likha hai or haan 3rd line to dil ko sukoon de gai:)
bahut khoob..
likhte rahiye or bhi
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«Reply #3 on: November 25, 2010, 10:01:22 AM »
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shukria abhi ji....
3rd one is my favourate also....

bahut badhiya..3rd one i like d most~

bahut khoob manzil ji..

dher saari daad...

likhte rahiye..
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«Reply #4 on: November 25, 2010, 10:10:57 AM »
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"Agar Kal Mile To Naa Ruswaiyan Ho
Kuch Yuh Shikwo Ko Mitaya Jaaye"

Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoob Priyaji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: November 25, 2010, 02:27:57 PM »
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wahh

janab wah

kya baat hai aap ki peshkash to rahi bhai ko sunni thi suna denge ham pakkaaa

bhut hi badhiya likha hai aap ne

hamen bhi likhna aap logon se sikhna padega
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«Reply #6 on: November 25, 2010, 02:38:04 PM »
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bahoot bahoot khoob priya ji...
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«Reply #7 on: November 26, 2010, 08:11:49 AM »
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thanx alot kb ji

 
wow Priya ji...
mast likha hai or haan 3rd line to dil ko sukoon de gai:)
bahut khoob..
likhte rahiye or bhi
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«Reply #8 on: November 26, 2010, 08:13:06 AM »
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is hausla afjai ka bahut bahut or bahut shukria khwaish ji......

"Agar Kal Mile To Naa Ruswaiyan Ho
Kuch Yuh Shikwo Ko Mitaya Jaaye"

Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoob Priyaji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

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«Reply #9 on: November 26, 2010, 08:13:43 AM »
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shukrai tkd ji....

wahh

janab wah

kya baat hai aap ki peshkash to rahi bhai ko sunni thi suna denge ham pakkaaa

bhut hi badhiya likha hai aap ne

hamen bhi likhna aap logon se sikhna padega

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«Reply #10 on: November 26, 2010, 08:14:43 AM »
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thanx alot sophi ji......

bahoot bahoot khoob priya ji...
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«Reply #11 on: November 26, 2010, 08:17:18 AM »
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ishq ko manzil mil jaye
     ufante saagar ko ik kasti mil jaye
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«Reply #12 on: November 26, 2010, 08:19:19 AM »
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ufnate saagar me to kashti doob jayegi... nahi kb ji...

ishq ko manzil mil jaye
     ufante saagar ko ik kasti mil jaye
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«Reply #13 on: November 26, 2010, 08:55:52 AM »
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ye lo humne aisi wesi nhi pyar ki ishq ki kasti ki baat kri thi...aapne chapakk se dubo dia usko ekdum se
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«Reply #14 on: November 27, 2010, 08:49:27 AM »
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bahaut acchey aashaar hain manzil-e-ishq ji. ek sukoon aur thehraav ka ehsaas karaatey hain. andaaz e bayaan bhi umda hai.
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