Boodha ho gaya tha jab wo

by NETRAPAL on May 01, 2007, 04:18:55 PM
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bekar hai wo aaj,  tan se bhee hai lachar sa
dil mai hai umang bhoot par  tan hai bekar sa

nahi rahgaya hai aaj wo ban gaya bitta hua kal
haste hai uske apne, dekh kar veeraniya uskee
man bhar jata nafrat se unka, jhuriya dekh kar jiskee

kal banya tha jisne unhe, jo kamaya tha un par hee lootaya tha
lut gaya tha sab kuch jiskaa ek taj mahal banane me
ban bhee gaya tha taj uske par kya wo taj dekh paya tha

kya hai uske paas, ab jiskee aash liye baithe hai apane uske
maas tak to nuch gaya tha uskaa,  ab bacha hai ek dhacha sa jskaa

chod gaye sab apne uske, bhool gaye wo pyar,  loriya uskee
sab ko intjaar hai bas usee pal ka,  kab jalege chita iskee

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«Reply #1 on: May 02, 2007, 02:21:52 PM »
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Nice..
Your subjects are really nice. !
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«Reply #2 on: May 02, 2007, 09:38:42 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai Netra ji... apke Topics bahoot ache hote hai..
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«Reply #3 on: May 03, 2007, 09:56:18 AM »
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well Its really diffrent & a a good topic.. Zingai ke safar mea ak aiisa bhi pdav aata hia jise bhudapa kehte hai... Har rang samaj aa jata hi zingai ka... Is sfar ko badi nbakubi se pesh liya hai aapne apne sabdo se... Bahoot khoob Netrapal Ji
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«Reply #4 on: May 03, 2007, 03:58:52 PM »
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Thanks Ricky sir, pooja ji, deepaka ji,

jaroorat jamane kee ban nahi sakta mai ab
tha jo kabhee  nahi rah gaya hoo mai ab

naye tarane, ooche khawabe peeche chod diye hai
lambe safar se thak gaya hoo, safar or bhee bakee hai

jamanaa dekha hai umar bhar ka tajurba liye baitha hoo
nahi kadar karta hai koi tajurbe kee bekar lachar sa baitha hoo

baha kar khoon paseena bee ek ek tinke se mahal banaya tha
pnah dunga parindo ko mahal me sapna ghar sansaar ka dekha tha

parende bhee the mahal me bachpan me chichiyate the
bade hooe par ate hee ood gaye n jane kha tnha chod gaye the


netra....
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«Reply #5 on: May 06, 2007, 10:04:05 AM »
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Thanks Ricky sir, pooja ji, deepaka ji,

jaroorat jamane kee ban nahi sakta mai ab
tha jo kabhee  nahi rah gaya hoo mai ab

naye tarane, ooche khawabe peeche chod diye hai
lambe safar se thak gaya hoo, safar or bhee bakee hai

jamanaa dekha hai umar bhar ka tajurba liye baitha hoo
nahi kadar karta hai koi tajurbe kee bekar lachar sa baitha hoo

baha kar khoon paseena bee ek ek tinke se mahal banaya tha
pnah dunga parindo ko mahal me sapna ghar sansaar ka dekha tha

parende bhee the mahal me bachpan me chichiyate the
bade hooe par ate hee ood gaye n jane kha tnha chod gaye the


netra....


tanha ho gaye jamane se wo, har mafil ke shama the jo kabhi
aashna nahi jala sakte to kya, bakee hai roshni jigar me abhi
n rahe kadardaan to kya,  hunarye tajurba hai wo bhee abhi

thukarya tha jine jawno ne,  n kadar karpayee the jinkee kabhi
aaj mayoos hai hare hooee dhundha tha jine wo n mile abhi

jhalkta hai boodhapa chehere se tej hai hai peshanee par ajeeb sa
ankhe ka oj kuch or hee kahanee kahata par samjhe nahi wo nadan abhi

netra.....
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«Reply #6 on: May 09, 2007, 09:42:19 AM »
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bhoola baithe the sachhayee ko jawanee ke josh me tab
hosh me ayee hai wo joshe jawanee beetane ke bad ab

maloom nahi tha unko har roshnee ke bad shyam atee hai
abhee to shyam hoyee hai bekhabar andhera to ana bakee hai

karna chata hai ab too, jab nahi rah gya kisee kabil too
dekhna chahta is duniyaa ko ab jab andhaa hogya hai too
tab josh tha bhoot par hosh bhool gaya tha josh me too

bageecha to lagya tha toone, nahi smay tha seechne ka tab
ab seechana chahta hai too use, ujaad hai jo hara hone se pahale
hee ab


netra.....
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«Reply #7 on: May 09, 2007, 02:24:31 PM »
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ek pusp kee bhee hayee kahanee thee
kali se full banne tak uskee jawanee thee

ek dal par khila bagiya ko mahkaya tha
fed dya tha use jab wo murjhya tha

kahanee whai hai fark pushp or insaan ka hai
bachpna hai pyara hai, jawani hai jaroorat hai
budhapa hai n pyara hai n kisi lo raroora hai

in dono kee aaj bhee or kal bhee yahi kahani thee.

netra.
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«Reply #8 on: May 09, 2007, 03:55:43 PM »
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Aap nae toh kaafi kuch likh diya aage !

Nice words.
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«Reply #9 on: May 10, 2007, 10:11:16 AM »
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Aap nae toh kaafi kuch likh diya aage !

Nice words.


thanks sir jee,

netra...
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«Reply #10 on: May 10, 2007, 02:41:02 PM »
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tujhe chalna tha, chal liya aye mushafir
manjil bas hai kareeb teri aye mushafir
paaro ke chale ab shookh jayenge tere
ayega ek farista le jayega tujhe aye musafir

kuch nahi tha tera jo chod kar jaaye gaa
ayaa tha khali haath, khali haagth he jayega
kamaya hai gar kuch to yad jamana karega tujhe
nahi to ek gumnaam see tasveer bankar rahjayega

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