BUT-- Jazbaat ~~~ Saahil

by salil2002 on June 17, 2009, 12:26:36 PM
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aaj likhne beitha lekar kalam aur kaagaz
kii apne kucch khayalon ko bayaan karoon

khatam ho gaye Jazbaat ab dard, mohabbat k mere andar
kuch hai hi nahi main kaise ,tanhaayi ko bayaan karoon

kora kaagaz reh gaya ,likhne kii har koshish fizool gayi
koi ehsaas hi nahin jise shabdo mein bayaan karoon

dard do mujhe ya,tum ab mohabbat do,
kii main eik but hoon , kaise but k khayalon ko bayaan karoon
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Talat
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«Reply #1 on: June 17, 2009, 12:51:49 PM »
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Bohot khoob Salil...nice one !!
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«Reply #2 on: June 17, 2009, 12:53:15 PM »
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aaj likhne beitha lekar kalam aur kaagaz
kii apne kucch khayalon ko bayaan karoon

khatam ho gaye Jazbaat ab dard, mohabbat k mere andar
kuch hai hi nahi main kaise ,tanhaayi ko bayaan karoon

kora kaagaz reh gaya ,likhne kii har koshish fizool gayi
koi ehsaas hi nahin jise shabdo mein bayaan karoon

dard do mujhe ya,tum ab mohabbat do,
kii main eik but hoon , kaise but k khayalon ko bayaan karoon

TOUCHING SAHIL JEE,..
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«Reply #3 on: June 17, 2009, 12:57:03 PM »
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Wow very beautiful creation Saahil ji.keep it up. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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dead heart
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«Reply #4 on: June 17, 2009, 07:27:19 PM »
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Nice one Sahil bhaijan as usual...Too good
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«Reply #5 on: June 18, 2009, 04:35:23 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khooooooob Salil Bhai.. Lafzon Ko Bakhoobi Saja Kar Pesh kiya hai dost.. Lajawab Peshkash Hai.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #6 on: June 18, 2009, 07:55:01 AM »
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Bohot khoob Salil...nice one !!
TOUCHING SAHIL JEE,..
Wow very beautiful creation Saahil ji.keep it up. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Nice one Sahil bhaijan as usual...Too good
Bahut Bahut Khooooooob Salil Bhai.. Lafzon Ko Bakhoobi Saja Kar Pesh kiya hai dost.. Lajawab Peshkash Hai.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
thanks a lot talat di,rahim bhai, vicky bhai,madhu dear and pandit bhai
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shab
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«Reply #7 on: June 18, 2009, 08:50:14 AM »
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  BAHUT ACHCHE SALIL JI,
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«Reply #8 on: June 18, 2009, 08:51:36 AM »
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shukriya shabana dear.......aap meri har ek post padte hai...shukriya
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SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #9 on: June 18, 2009, 11:11:41 AM »
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Wah wah Saahil Ji
SARVESH RASTOGI
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salil2002
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«Reply #10 on: July 31, 2009, 07:39:34 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya sarvesh bhai
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«Reply #11 on: July 31, 2009, 09:26:02 AM »
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bahut khub Saahil ji.....padhte waqt laga jaise ek aise insaan k baare me likha gya hai jise gum ya khushi ka koi aehsaas hi nahi rha....jiske dil me koi armaan nahi rha.....dil ko chune waale alfaaz likhe hai aapne...
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