Chal chalen (NM)

by vb on August 24, 2010, 12:41:25 PM
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«Reply #1 on: August 24, 2010, 02:08:52 PM »
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Behad khubsurat nazm likhi hai VB ji. Kamaal ka takhayyul, umdb alfaz ka intikhab ka natija  hai ke ek shandar purlutf nazm wajood me aai. Mubarakbad aur daad pesh hai.
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«Reply #2 on: August 24, 2010, 04:38:08 PM »
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bht hi pyara likha hai aapne VB ji....
bilkul naye naye lafz padhe hain aaj aur inhe bayaan karne ka tarika bhi naya ahi.....

bht pyari peshkash ji
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«Reply #3 on: August 25, 2010, 02:41:00 AM »
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bahut khoob Vb ji....!!!!
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«Reply #4 on: August 26, 2010, 08:03:04 AM »
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Chal chalen vb ab is gali say kahin
Chaar din hain kisi taur kat jain gay
Kub talak is jahan main rahaa hay koi
Gham k baadal kisi roze chhat jain gay

Is gali ko magar dakhe lain ik nazar
Sookhay paton ka urna, khizaan, ye shajar
Itnay veeraan, khaamosh, deewar-o-dar
Is gali k makeen, chhore kar apna ghar

Ab k aayay agar, tu palat jain gay
Chaar din hain kisi taur kat jain gay

Ik unhin ne jahaan main sahaara diya
Aye khuda un k jalway salaamat rahen
Khush rahen wo sadda musuratay rahen
Un ki baaten haseen taa-qayamat rahen

Hum rahen mat rahen, ghum tu ghat jain gay
Chaar din hain kisi taur kat jain gay



good one vb ji
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«Reply #5 on: August 31, 2010, 02:50:22 AM »
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Chal chalen vb ab is gali say kahin
Chaar din hain kisi taur kat jain gay
Kub talak is jahan main rahaa hay koi
Gham k baadal kisi roze chhat jain gay

Is gali ko magar dakhe lain ik nazar
Sookhay paton ka urna, khizaan, ye shajar
Itnay veeraan, khaamosh, deewar-o-dar
Is gali k makeen, chhore kar apna ghar

Ab k aayay agar, tu palat jain gay
Chaar din hain kisi taur kat jain gay

Ik unhin ne jahaan main sahaara diya
Aye khuda un k jalway salaamat rahen
Khush rahen wo sadda musuratay rahen
Un ki baaten haseen taa-qayamat rahen

Hum rahen mat rahen, ghum tu ghat jain gay
Chaar din hain kisi taur kat jain gay



Good one vb
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«Reply #6 on: August 31, 2010, 06:05:27 AM »
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wah sarkaar kya khoob kahi aapne... bahut khoobsurat andaaz me aapne dard ko bayaan kiya hai.. bahut bahut khoob ... aapki har kalaaam apne ap me ek misaal hai... dil khush ho jaata hai apko padh ke... bahut bahut umda likhte hain aap... yunhi likhte rahiye jisse humein bhi aapko padhne ka mauka milta rahe...!!!


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Ishq aur maut main fark bachta hay kya?
Jaan nikalti hay, saansen ruki jaatee hain
Ab k soen tu uthna nahi phir kabhi
Neend say aaj aankhen bujhi jaatee hain

Un k bazu khulay na hamaaray liyay
Maut k baazuon main simat jain gay
Chaar din hain kisi taur kat jain gay

Ik qadam un ko chalna gawaara nahi
Geet likh likh kar un ko bulaatay rahay
Har lafaz qasm khaata raha pyaar ki
Har lafaz say wo nazren churaatay rahay

Manzilen raaston say pashemaan sahi
Raastay manzilon say lipat jain gay
Chaar din hain kisi taur kat jain gay

Ik sharaabi ka duniya main jeena he kya
Us say paymaan-e-ulfat karay kya koi
Jis ki qismat nasha, marg-e-aawaargi
Aisay paagal ki chahat karay kya koi

Aaj may baykaraari main hay jis qadar
Jaam lagta hay saaray ulat jain gay
Chaar din hain kisi taur kat jain gay

Un say keh do k jaatay tu hain hum magar
Yaad aatay rahain gay unhen umr bhar
Aur ye keh do qazaa say k aa jayay abb
Is say pehlay k puhnchay koi chaara-gar

Jaan hay jab talak, uth na pain gay hum
Mar k is aastaanay say hat jain gay
Chal chalen vb ab is gali say kahin


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