ChiriyaaN Ka Ghar Tuta Tha......masoom

by Masoom Shahzada on April 17, 2013, 09:31:32 AM
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Unko bhulaake, ak baar soch gayaa, Kyaa buraa kiyaa.
Saaree raat ibaadat kee, sahree me so gayaa, Kyaa buraa kiyaa.
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Daadaa ne kahaa tha, baraa aadmee bankar hee waapas aana.
MaiN baraa ban na sakaa, so yaheeN ka ho gayaa, Kyaa buraa kiyaa.
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Shahar me rahna tha so seekh lee chalakii, makkaarii.
MaiN gaanv ka bholaapan bhol gayaa, Kyaa buraa kiyaa.
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Chupchaap tamaashaa dekh rahe the sab larkiyoN se cher-chaar ka.
Jo bheer dekhii, maiN bhii thahar gayaa, Kyaa buraa kiyaa.
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Sabka sawaal tha, es baar chhuttiyoN mein jana kahaaN chahoge.
Dil mein Madeena tha, Gaanv nikal gayaa,, Kyaa buraa kiyaa.
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Mujhko mila bachpan se kamjor dil ka tamgaa.
ChiriyaaN ka ghar tutaa tha, maiN ro gayaa, Kyaa buraa kiyaa.
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«Reply #1 on: April 17, 2013, 10:27:18 AM »
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waaah waah bahut dino ke baad aaye tumhe khoob miss kiyaa
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«Reply #2 on: April 17, 2013, 10:30:36 AM »
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Mujhko mila bachpan se kamjor dil ka tamgaa.
ChiriyaaN ka ghar tutaa tha, maiN ro gayaa, Kyaa buraa kiyaa.

Bahut badhiya masoom
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«Reply #3 on: April 17, 2013, 10:32:21 AM »
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Unko bhulaake, ak baar soch gayaa, Kyaa buraa kiyaa.
Saaree raat ibaadat kee, sahree me so gayaa, Kyaa buraa kiyaa.
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Daadaa ne kahaa tha, baraa aadmee bankar hee waapas aana.
MaiN baraa ban na sakaa, so yaheeN ka ho gayaa, Kyaa buraa kiyaa.
.
Shahar me rahna tha so seekh lee chalakii, makkaarii.
MaiN gaanv ka bholaapan bhol gayaa, Kyaa buraa kiyaa.
.
Chupchaap tamaashaa dekh rahe the sab larkiyoN se cher-chaar ka.
Jo bheer dekhii, maiN bhii thahar gayaa, Kyaa buraa kiyaa.
.
Sabka sawaal tha, es baar chhuttiyoN mein jana kahaaN chahoge.
Dil mein Madeena tha, Gaanv nikal gayaa,, Kyaa buraa kiyaa.
.
Mujhko mila bachpan se kamjor dil ka tamgaa.
ChiriyaaN ka ghar tutaa tha, maiN ro gayaa, Kyaa buraa kiyaa.


Wah beta bahut dino baad damakedaar entry... excellant shayri
last four lines are vry vry good.
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«Reply #4 on: April 17, 2013, 11:27:13 AM »
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bht khoob
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«Reply #5 on: April 17, 2013, 12:35:34 PM »
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Unko bhulaake, ak baar soch gayaa, Kyaa buraa kiyaa.
Saaree raat ibaadat kee, sahree me so gayaa, Kyaa buraa kiyaa.
.
Daadaa ne kahaa tha, baraa aadmee bankar hee waapas aana.
MaiN baraa ban na sakaa, so yaheeN ka ho gayaa, Kyaa buraa kiyaa.
.
Shahar me rahna tha so seekh lee chalakii, makkaarii.
MaiN gaanv ka bholaapan bhol gayaa, Kyaa buraa kiyaa.
.
Chupchaap tamaashaa dekh rahe the sab larkiyoN se cher-chaar ka.
Jo bheer dekhii, maiN bhii thahar gayaa, Kyaa buraa kiyaa.
.
Sabka sawaal tha, es baar chhuttiyoN mein jana kahaaN chahoge.
Dil mein Madeena tha, Gaanv nikal gayaa,, Kyaa buraa kiyaa.
.
Mujhko mila bachpan se kamjor dil ka tamgaa.
ChiriyaaN ka ghar tutaa tha, maiN ro gayaa, Kyaa buraa kiyaa.



bahut bahut Khooob Masoom Ji..

Gehre Khayalaat....

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«Reply #6 on: April 17, 2013, 01:51:54 PM »
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bahut khoob , masoom sahib. bahut achcha
kalaam pesh kiya hai . bahut mubarakbad.
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«Reply #7 on: April 17, 2013, 01:52:45 PM »
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chiriyaaN ka ghar toota tha, maiN ro gaya kya bura kiyaa.....

wah saaheb was, bas mazaa aa gaya, bahut hi umda, is aakhiri sher pe meri taraf se ik rau... par thoda intezaar karna padega... Usual Smile likhte rahiye saaheb aur bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
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«Reply #8 on: April 17, 2013, 10:41:29 PM »
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Masoom Pyaare Aadaab...!


KahaaN gum ho janab, bade dinoN baad haazri lagayi.. ?
Bade achche ashaar jode haiN aapne... waise toH sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe.. par hume aakhri ke dono ashaar laa jawaab lage.. Usual Smile

HazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye.. Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile


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«Reply #9 on: April 18, 2013, 10:00:39 AM »
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wowwwwwwwww. masoom kitni pyaari ghazal likhi hai tumne. kya khoob ashaar hai. kisi ek ki tareef kya karoon sabhi hi lajawaab hai. dil se mubarkbad qubool karo.
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