CHOONE SE BIKHAR JAUNGA....

by pandit on May 13, 2009, 12:48:34 AM
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«Reply #15 on: May 13, 2009, 03:42:34 AM »
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FRIENDS...!..AGAIN THIS IS ONE OF MY FAVOURITE.....!!!!!!!! (INSPIRED BY GHULAM ALI)..


ITNA TOOTA HOON KI CHOONE SE BIKHAR JAUNGA,
AB AGAR AUR MUJHE TADPAAOGE TO MAR JAUNGAA.

DEKH LE MERA HASHAR EK BAAR MERI KASHTI ME AAJA,
TERI KASAM HAI MUJHE, TU JAHA KAHEGI MAIN UTAR JAUNGA.

NA KAR FIKRA TU MERE BARBAADI KA,MUJE AAWAZ TO DE,
KHUD APNI KABRA SE BHI NIKAL K AA JAUNGAA.

MIT GAYA HOON TERE MOHABBAT ME,TUJHE ILM HO GAR,
EK JANAM TO KYA, SAOO BAAR BHI MAR JAUNGAA.




....PANDIT.......








wah bohat khoob Pandit ji dil ko chu liya hai lafzon ne...
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honeyrose
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«Reply #16 on: May 13, 2009, 03:43:20 AM »
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Waah Pandit Ji, kya likha hai, kya dedication hai
Very Good.  Matla to wakai bada khubsurat hai. 
Isi per apni ek ghazal yaad aa gai:

JAHAN KI HAR KHUSHI KO CHHOD SAKTA HUN JO TUM CHAHO
HAR EK TOOFAN KA MUH MOD SAKTA HUN JO TUM CHAHO

YAHAN TO PYAR KI BHI HAD MUKARRAR KI ZAMANE NE
ZAMANE KI HADON KO TOD SAKTA HUN JO TUM CHAHO

ZAMIN SE AASMA TAK KA SAFAR MUMKIN NAHIN PHIR BHI
SITARE TODNE KI SOCH SAKTA HUN JO TUM CHAHO

UMAR AB TAK GUZARI BAS BAHARON KI GULAMI MAIN
BACHI JO SHESH TUMKO SAUP SAKTA HUN JO TUM CHAHO

SUNA HAI ZINDAGI KE SAAZ KI DUSHWAR SANGAT HAI
KOI NAGMA SURILA CHHED SAKTA HUN JO TUM CHAHO

KABHI BHOOLE SE HUMKO BHOOLNE KI YAAD AA JAYE
TUMHARI BHOOL PER MAIN JHOOL SAKTA HUN JO TUM CHAHO

SARVESH RASTOGI


bohat khoob Sarvesh ji...
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pandit
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«Reply #17 on: May 13, 2009, 04:49:31 AM »
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wah bohat khoob Pandit ji dil ko chu liya hai lafzon ne...


Thanks Honey Rose ji..
aapko accha laga hume bahut khushi hui... hello2
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Roja
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«Reply #18 on: May 13, 2009, 04:53:06 AM »
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ROJA JEE..
AAPNE HUME APNE KADRA SE NAWAZA, BADI MEHARBAANI JEEE...


THNAKS YAAR.. icon_salut

Welcome dear
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pandit
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«Reply #19 on: May 13, 2009, 04:56:29 AM »
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Welcome dear

kidher ho roja jee aaj kal aap?
dikhtee nahi?
kya bata hai?
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Roja
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«Reply #20 on: May 13, 2009, 04:57:35 AM »
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kidher ho roja jee aaj kal aap?
dikhtee nahi?
kya bata hai?

Kahan jaungi aap jaise doston ko chod kar? mai yahi hu... sirf aap ke nazer nahi lagti mujhe pe... mai kya karu?  tongue3
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pandit
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«Reply #21 on: May 13, 2009, 04:59:21 AM »
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Kahan jaungi aap jaise doston ko chod kar? mai yahi hu... sirf aap ke nazer nahi lagti mujhe pe... mai kya karu?  tongue3

Today m here, but hav to write research article..
so, bit busy hoon..

but aap k liyea thoda sa free time hai..

aap sunaao jee..
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Roja
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«Reply #22 on: May 13, 2009, 05:00:39 AM »
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Today m here, but hav to write research article..
so, bit busy hoon..

but aap k liyea thoda sa free time hai..

aap sunaao jee..

See PM tongue3
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Sager4u
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«Reply #23 on: May 13, 2009, 05:10:14 AM »
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Pandit ji jai shree ram
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khamosh_aawaaz
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«Reply #24 on: May 13, 2009, 05:18:49 AM »
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FRIENDS...!..AGAIN THIS IS ONE OF MY FAVOURITE.....!!!!!!!! (INSPIRED BY GHULAM ALI)..


ITNA TOOTA HOON KI CHOONE SE BIKHAR JAUNGA,
AB AGAR AUR MUJHE TADPAAOGE TO MAR JAUNGAA.

DEKH LE MERA HASHAR EK BAAR MERI KASHTI ME AAJA,
TERI KASAM HAI MUJHE, TU JAHA KAHEGI MAIN UTAR JAUNGA.

NA KAR FIKRA TU MERE BARBAADI KA,MUJE AAWAZ TO DE,
KHUD APNI KABRA SE BHI NIKAL K AA JAUNGAA.

MIT GAYA HOON TERE MOHABBAT ME,TUJHE ILM HO GAR,
EK JANAM TO KYA, SAOO BAAR BHI MAR JAUNGAA.




....PANDIT.......










KYAA BAAT HAI PANDIT JI ZABARDAST MOHABBAT DIKHAAYAA HAI...!!!
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pandit
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«Reply #25 on: May 13, 2009, 05:36:32 AM »
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See PM tongue3

U TOO
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pandit
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«Reply #26 on: May 13, 2009, 05:37:02 AM »
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Pandit ji jai shree ram

JAI SHREE RAM SAGAR JEE..
KAISE HAIN AAP K MIZAAZ?
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pandit
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«Reply #27 on: May 13, 2009, 05:38:12 AM »
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KYAA BAAT HAI PANDIT JI ZABARDAST MOHABBAT DIKHAAYAA HAI...!!!


DHANYAWAAD KHAMOSH JEE..

AB KYA KAREIN YE MOHABBAT BHI AAPKI TARAH KHAMOSH HAI.....
HAHAHA
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«Reply #28 on: May 13, 2009, 05:48:21 AM »
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bohut khoob pandit ji kya khoob likha hai aapne  Applause
aapne bhi khoob saath nibhaya hai sarvesh ji Applause
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«Reply #29 on: May 13, 2009, 06:47:56 AM »
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Subhan_allah kya mehfil sajayee hain sabne. Bohat bohat khoob Pandit and equally beautiful addition by Sarvesh....sabhi ne achcha likha hain Maza aa gaya.  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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