Complete The Shair... :)

by Anique on December 21, 2006, 10:56:23 AM
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Pooja
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«Reply #30 on: February 20, 2007, 04:54:10 PM »
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Yah mathe per sindoor laga, hatho main chuda pehan
Saj gai main teri dulhania, jhuke ab tere samne yah nayan

Bandha aise bandhan main, her janam hua tere hi arpan
Tham kar hath mera, le chal ab apni nagaria main sajan


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Gumo ke saye main, din dhal jaata hai
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salil2002
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«Reply #31 on: March 26, 2007, 08:04:49 AM »
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ghamo k saaye main din nikal jaata hai
har lamha jaise kucch gungunata hai
jan bhi chahta hoon main tere sath rehna
hawa k jhaunka mujhe kahaan oodaa le jata hai

next line is

mujhe mohabbat ne qatl kiya hai
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #32 on: March 26, 2007, 08:09:47 AM »
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mujhe mohabbat ne katl kiya hai..
tadapata hua beech raah mein chod gaya hai....

humne tho sanam se pyaar manga tha...
par woh dard ka jaam de gaya hai....

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Kiski raah dekh rahi hai ankhe
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salil2002
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«Reply #33 on: March 26, 2007, 03:22:57 PM »
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kiski raah dekh rahio hai aankhen
teri saanson se judi hai ye meri saansein
main kaise yaki kar loon kii tu nahi hai
abhi tak chal rahi hai meri saansein

next line is

tum mujhe dekh kar muskura dete
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #34 on: March 27, 2007, 04:28:02 AM »
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Tum mujhe dekh kar muskara dete
Tho mere sanso ko thoda sukun mil jata

hum bhi thoda sarma dete...
Fizao ko ikraar karne  ka naya bahana mil jata...

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Tum hote sang mere tho
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salil2002
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«Reply #35 on: March 27, 2007, 09:52:06 AM »
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tum hote sang mere toh main muskura deta
tum hote sang mere toh main phir gunguna deta
tanhaayi se ab akele ladaa nahin jaata
jo tum sang hote toh mehfilein phir saza deta

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toota hua dil aur ye sooni dhadkan


sorry but please i want this line to have an stanza relating to 'dastaan' please try this
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Talat
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«Reply #36 on: March 28, 2007, 11:48:19 AM »
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Just a try...dont know how it will come..

Toota hua dil aur yeh sooni dhadkan
Jaane kaunsi daastaan sunaate hain
Tanhaaiyon main ghire ye shab-o-roz
Jaane kise har pal yaad kiye jaate hain
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #37 on: March 28, 2007, 12:14:35 PM »
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talat Di koi Next line nahi Di aapne...
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Talat
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«Reply #38 on: March 28, 2007, 12:17:58 PM »
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Sorry,,bhool gayi :oops:

Kyun mere dil se khela tune..
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #39 on: March 28, 2007, 12:21:24 PM »
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kyun Mere dil se Khela tune..
Kyun iskadar mujhe ruswa kiya hai..

Dar dar badak rahi hun pyar ki talaash mein
Kyun iskadar tune mujhe bebas aur lachar kiya hai

Yea Dard kyun hota hai
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Talat
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«Reply #40 on: March 28, 2007, 12:25:35 PM »
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Yeh dard kyun hota hai,
Dil apna,
aur zakhm auron ke diye sehta hai
Kyun bhar aati hain aankhain
Jab koi apna dukh deta hai !!

Khizaan ka mausam hai dil par
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Pooja
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«Reply #41 on: March 28, 2007, 01:11:44 PM »
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Khizaan ka mausam hai dil par
Udasi ka anchal hai fiza par
Behati hai dheere dheere
Dard ki nadia, hum par

Dil ko skonn nahio atta
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Talat
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«Reply #42 on: March 28, 2007, 01:59:15 PM »
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Dil ko sukoon nahin aata
Tera ghum saha nahin jata
Dushwar hai jeena mera ki,
Ishq-e-ghum sehna nahin aata !!

Yoon badliyon se nikla chaand
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #43 on: March 29, 2007, 03:59:54 AM »
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yoon badlyon se nikhla Chaand..
Shyad kuch kehna chahta tha...
Phir chup gaya Sharma kar dekh mere Sanam ko..
par anko hi ankho me kuch keh gaya tha..

Fizaye kuch keh gai..
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salil2002
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«Reply #44 on: March 29, 2007, 09:00:36 AM »
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fizaye kuch keh gayi aaj humse
hum oon baaton par gaur karte hain
na todte tera dil na tujhko daga dete
ye bhula beithe thay oos pal ki hum tujhpe marte hain

nami hai aaj aankhon par aur dil main gami hai
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