Complete The Shair... :)

by Anique on December 21, 2006, 10:56:23 AM
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syednaami
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«Reply #60 on: April 29, 2008, 03:12:02 PM »
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Saanso main bas kar dil se un tera chale jaana
Aise laga jaise shaakh se patton ka jhad jaana
Tu jo nahin iss duniya men ab par tere saanson ki mahek
Aaj bhi mere jism men rachi hai wohi khushbu-e-jaanan

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Kaash woh beeta lamha mujhe koi lota dey
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Pooja
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«Reply #61 on: April 29, 2008, 11:11:43 PM »
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Quote from: syednaami on April 29, 2008, 03:12:02 PM
Saanso main bas kar dil se un tera chale jaana
Aise laga jaise shaakh se patton ka jhad jaana
Tu jo nahin iss duniya men ab par tere saanson ki mahek
Aaj bhi mere jism men rachi hai wohi khushbu-e-jaanan

New:: Start from here:
Kaash woh beeta lamha mujhe koi lota dey


wahg kaya baat hai... yah line dene ke baad maine yah likha tha:
wait kar rahi thi kon kaya likhta hai is line ke sath!!

Saanso main bas kar, dil se tera un chale jaana
Ajj bhi yaad atta hai tera mera wo afsaana
Kasak hai ajj bhi kahin ander, per zindagi hai chal rahi
Na samjh ayya bin kahein tera un meri zindagi se chale jaana!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #62 on: April 29, 2008, 11:14:26 PM »
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Kaash woh beeta lamha mujhe koi lota dey
tamam zindagi ke badle , wo kuch pal louta de
khayalo mai jee jee kar jinhe phir bhi na jee paaye
haqeeqat main ek baar phir se, un lamho ko mila de!!

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Rooth kar jo mujhse, tum chale jaate ho
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syednaami
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«Reply #63 on: April 30, 2008, 06:36:08 AM »
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Rooth kar jo mujhse, tum chale jaate ho
Mere baar baar manaane par bhi ithhlate ho
Kitne bhi jatan karun tujhe behlaane ke
Har jatan par tum aur bhi itraate ho.

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Uthha khadaa hai insaan inqalaab laane ko
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yoshiki
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«Reply #64 on: June 29, 2008, 05:11:56 PM »
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@uthha khada hai insaan inqlaab laane ko...
 apne hakk ke liye mauke behisaab laane ko..
 par jaag ke bhi aise kya lena.. jab yahan jagaane wale bhi soye hai..
 kon uthhega apni neend se yeh halaat benqaab laane ko???
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sarthika
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«Reply #65 on: June 30, 2008, 02:05:43 AM »
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kon uthhega apni neend se yeh halaat benqaab laane ko
raat bhar na soi jo ankhia, unko kuch samjhane ko
dil ka dard samjhe, dard sahne wala
kon khole lub, phir se usse rulane ko

Line for next person: dil main wo aor unka diya dard
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Sonia01
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«Reply #66 on: June 30, 2008, 02:11:32 AM »
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dil main wo aor unka diya dard
agar mai aah baru, yeh sara sansar jal jaye
Yeh zameen jal jaye, aakash jal jaye
Magar itna bi dardse dil jalaya nahi karti
Kahi mere sajan ka ghar na jal jaye..

Next Line : Wo na aaya,unka yaad sataya
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sarthika
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«Reply #67 on: June 30, 2008, 02:16:14 AM »
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Wo na aaya,unka yaad sataya
humne saat din se kuch nahi khaya
koi to batla de ajj mujhko yah bhaya
le ke dil mera, wo kyun wapis nahi ayya (sorry, just in funny mood today)

Line for next person: dil le ke wo kyun wapis nahi ayya
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Sonia01
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«Reply #68 on: June 30, 2008, 02:27:54 AM »
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dil le ke wo kyun wapis nahi ayya
na aane ka bi nahi batlaya
kisi bahane unka pyar mil jata
mere tadapte dil ko araam mil jata

(Sarthika me not a good writer dear. Just pulling myself with lines..hehehe Giggle )

Next Line... Unke bina dil udas raha
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sarthika
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«Reply #69 on: June 30, 2008, 02:31:36 AM »
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You are doing very good.. But I am totaly out of line today.. so just bear me dear!!

Unke bina dil udaas raha
wo to nahi, magat khayal unka sath raha
ansoo bhi aa aa kar sook gaye
phir na kabhi hansi se humara sath raha


Next line: dil bhatka aor khayal bhatkte chale gaye
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Sonia01
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«Reply #70 on: June 30, 2008, 02:39:43 AM »
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dil bhatka aor khayal bhatkte chale gaye
dil ki aarzoo kabi tabahi na gaye
hasratein apni mitayi na gaye
woh juda ho gaye
unke khayalon ne pagal bana gaye
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sarthika
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«Reply #71 on: June 30, 2008, 02:42:20 AM »
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unke khayal pagal bana gaye
jab chaha mere jahan per cha gaye
ruk gai saanein aor zindagi chalti rahi
sab kuch hote bhi, zindagi veeran bana gaye

next line: Veerano mai dil ko samjhate hai
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Sonia01
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«Reply #72 on: June 30, 2008, 02:46:56 AM »
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Veerano mai dil ko samjhate hai
Toot gaya dil toh kya hua doston
dunia main pehla hadsa toh nahi hai
Yu dil todne wale, is jahan, mein bahut hai
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sarthika
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«Reply #73 on: June 30, 2008, 02:59:06 AM »
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Yu dil todne wale, is jahan, mein bahut hai
mere liye sajan ek tu he hai bahoot
dil laga kar , torr diya, jaise main insaan he nahi
tere jaise haiwaan, is dunia main hai bahoot
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Shikha12
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«Reply #74 on: June 30, 2008, 07:21:13 AM »
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Aapne Naya Misra toh diya hi nahin...


Khair...

Is Duniya mein hai bahut, humare hi jaise,
Apni hansi mein Gum ko chhupaane waale..
Jaan ke bhi anjaan rahe jhoote dilaason se,
Unki ek aawaaz sunn kar behal jaane waale...


Start from : "Kuch lamhe, jinki jarurat thi bahut"
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