*~*Daag Lag Jane Diye*~*

by Roja on February 25, 2009, 05:49:08 AM
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Jab bi chidiyon ko bhulakar pyar se dane diye,
Is nayi tehjeeb ne is per kayee taane diye.

Jin ujalon ne kiya andhi gufaon se riha,
Bediyan pehnake humne unko tehkhane diye.

Humne mangi thi, zara si roshni ghar ke liye,
Aapne jalti huyi basti ke nazrane diye.

Hadse bhi guzre unke aur mere darmiyan
Lab rahe khamosh aur aankhon ne afsane diye.

Zindagi khushbu se ab tak isliye mehroom hai,
Humne jismon ko chaman, roohon ko veerane diye

Zindagi chadar hai dhul ke saaf ho jayegi fir,
Isliye humne bhi ismein daag lag jane diye

Haat mein tezab ke faahe they merhum ki jagah
Doston ne kab hamare zakham murjane diye.

Zindagi ka gam nahi, gam hai hame is baat ka,
Usne murde bhi nahi kabron mein dafnane diye

 sad7
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«Reply #1 on: February 25, 2009, 06:11:09 AM »
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bahut accha Roja jee...

Har taraf tere he charche, naare tere naam k,
Zindagi bhi apni hum naam tere kar diyea...

Na tha pata manzil ka, na tha koi bhi thikana,
Bus naam tera le k hum to safar pe chal diyea...

Bebasi ki dhoop aur mazbooriyaan the har taraf,
Khud ki ashqo ka samander hum paar kar k chal diyea..

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«Reply #2 on: February 25, 2009, 06:56:35 AM »
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Very nice Roja sis Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: February 25, 2009, 07:41:08 AM »
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Fabulous Rojaji
Too Good
Har Line Me Bahoot Khoobsurat Labz aur Ehsas Piroye hain
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«Reply #4 on: February 25, 2009, 08:11:35 AM »
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kia baat hai roja ji


bahut hi umda nazm hai

khayalat aur nuqat pasand aaye




javed
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«Reply #5 on: February 25, 2009, 09:24:30 AM »
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roja ji bohut acha likha hai aapne
pandit ji aapne bhi bohut acha likha hai
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«Reply #6 on: February 25, 2009, 05:04:37 PM »
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Quote from: pandit on February 25, 2009, 06:11:09 AM
bahut accha Roja jee...

Har taraf tere he charche, naare tere naam k,
Zindagi bhi apni hum naam tere kar diyea...

Na tha pata manzil ka, na tha koi bhi thikana,
Bus naam tera le k hum to safar pe chal diyea...

Bebasi ki dhoop aur mazbooriyaan the har taraf,
Khud ki ashqo ka samander hum paar kar k chal diyea..



Shukriya Pandit ji, and nice lines  Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: February 25, 2009, 05:05:10 PM »
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Quote from: salma786 on February 25, 2009, 06:56:35 AM
Very nice Roja sis Clapping Smiley
Shukriya salma dear
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«Reply #8 on: February 25, 2009, 05:06:19 PM »
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Quote from: pankshivam on February 25, 2009, 07:41:08 AM
Fabulous Rojaji
Too Good
Har Line Me Bahoot Khoobsurat Labz aur Ehsas Piroye hain
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Pank ji, bahut bahut shukriya aapne hame pada..
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«Reply #9 on: February 25, 2009, 05:06:58 PM »
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Quote from: javedarshad on February 25, 2009, 08:11:35 AM
kia baat hai roja ji

bahut hi umda nazm hai

khayalat aur nuqat pasand aaye


javed

Shukriya Javed ji
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«Reply #10 on: February 25, 2009, 05:07:39 PM »
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Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on February 25, 2009, 09:24:30 AM
roja ji bohut acha likha hai aapne
pandit ji aapne bhi bohut acha likha hai

Thanks Bhawna ji ..
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«Reply #11 on: February 25, 2009, 05:22:17 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on February 25, 2009, 05:49:08 AM
Jab bi chidiyon ko bhulakar pyar se dane diye,
Is nayi tehjeeb ne is per kayee taane diye.

Jin ujalon ne kiya andhi gufaon se riha,
Bediyan pehnake humne unko tehkhane diye.

Humne mangi thi, zara si roshni ghar ke liye,
Aapne jalti huyi basti ke nazrane diye.

Hadse bhi guzre unke aur mere darmiyan
Lab rahe khamosh aur aankhon ne afsane diye.

Zindagi khushbu se ab tak isliye mehroom hai,
Humne jismon ko chaman, roohon ko veerane diye

Zindagi chadar hai dhul ke saaf ho jayegi fir,
Isliye humne bhi ismein daag lag jane diye

Haat mein tezab ke faahe they merhum ki jagah
Doston ne kab hamare zakham murjane diye.

Zindagi ka gam nahi, gam hai hame is baat ka,
Usne murde bhi nahi kabron mein dafnane diye

 sad7


WAH ROJA, BAHUT KHOOB , VERY VERY NICE ....

JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #12 on: February 25, 2009, 05:23:01 PM »
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Quote from: pandit on February 25, 2009, 06:11:09 AM
bahut accha Roja jee...

Har taraf tere he charche, naare tere naam k,
Zindagi bhi apni hum naam tere kar diyea...

Na tha pata manzil ka, na tha koi bhi thikana,
Bus naam tera le k hum to safar pe chal diyea...

Bebasi ki dhoop aur mazbooriyaan the har taraf,
Khud ki ashqo ka samander hum paar kar k chal diyea..



WAH PANDIT, wah

jasbir singh
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«Reply #13 on: February 25, 2009, 05:49:53 PM »
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bahoot, bahoot, bahoot khoob Roja!! bahoot achi Rachna ki hai apne... good work, good creation!!!

Pandit ji apne acha sath diya hai Roja ki rachna ko!!!
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«Reply #14 on: February 25, 2009, 06:09:36 PM »
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Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on February 25, 2009, 09:24:30 AM
roja ji bohut acha likha hai aapne
pandit ji aapne bhi bohut acha likha hai

Thanks Kaushik jee...
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