Darakht-just a sher

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       Doston 2-4 din se ek sher zehen me ghoom raha tha,pura kalaam banane ki koshish ki par jane kyun ban nahi paya to masoom ko tanha hi post kar rahi hoon. Aaj kal har taraf development k liye trees bahut tezi se kaate ja rahe hai usi par ye sher hai.
 
             
                   Kya kahoon k kaisi khudgarzi pasri hai hartaraf,
                   Basaane ko ghar insaano ka,parindo ka basera toot gaya.
                   Poochhte hai bachho k ye utre hue chehre,
                   Ek Buzurg to baaki tha yahan,uska bhi saya chhoot gaya.
 

                           
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«Reply #1 on: June 03, 2010, 11:09:01 AM »
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WAH WAH KYA BAT HAI        TAMANNA PT JI.....

KUDRAT KI HARIYALI KAAT KE HAR TARAF BANAATE JAA RAHE HAI EENTON KE MAKAN
KUCH SAAL BAAD PUCCHTE HAI YAHAN BAARISH KYUN NAHIN HOTI YEH HI INSAAN

KUDRAT KI HAWA KE BADLE CHAL PADI HAI AAJ KAL INKI AC KI DUKAN
AUR KHUD HI KHOJ ME LAGE HAI KYUN ITNA BEEMAR PAD RAHE HAI AAJ KAL INSAAN

PADH LIKH KAR INSAAN BAHUT AAGE JAA SAKHTA HAI
PAR KUDRAT KE AAGE KABHI NAHIN JAA SAKHTA HAI..
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«Reply #3 on: June 03, 2010, 03:28:51 PM »
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Bahaut khoob likha hai sabhi nee...Tamanna jee, Salma jee & Cara jee.. Applause
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«Reply #4 on: June 03, 2010, 04:28:29 PM »
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Bahot achha likha hai Tamnna ji. Sach kaha development ke liye bedardi se darakhton ko kaata ja raha hai. Iske bure nataaej bhi saamne aa rahe hain. Zaroori hai ke is par rok lage.
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«Reply #5 on: June 03, 2010, 06:37:25 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bahut khoob likha hai aapne Tamanna ji...!!!


       Doston 2-4 din se ek sher zehen me ghoom raha tha,pura kalaam banane ki koshish ki par jane kyun ban nahi paya to masoom ko tanha hi post kar rahi hoon. Aaj kal har taraf development k liye trees bahut tezi se kaate ja rahe hai usi par ye sher hai.
  
              
                   Kya kahoon k kaisi khudgarzi pasri hai hartaraf,
                   Basaane ko ghar insaano ka,parindo ka basera toot gaya.
                   Poochhte hai bachho k ye utre hue chehre,
                   Ek Buzurg to baaki tha yahan,uska bhi saya chhoot gaya.
 

                          
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«Reply #6 on: June 03, 2010, 06:38:30 PM »
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bahut khoob Salma ji...!!!

Bahot bahot khoob likha apne tamanna Applause Applause Applause

apki shayri padke kuch likhne ka man kiya to likh rahi hu... umeed hai aap ise pasand karengi Thumbs UP

Shikayat kare bhi to kis se,
Matlabi hai ye duniya,
Jis se basera banaya tha kabhi sabne,
Aaj usi ko sara jahan loot gaya!

Taazi hawayon ki mithash thi kabhi,
Tha aasra roohani saye ka,
Ab banjar hai dharti saari,
Wo saya hum se rooth gaya !!

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«Reply #7 on: June 04, 2010, 07:22:33 AM »
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Shukriya Salma Behen or Bahut khoobsurat likha hai aapne bhi. wave
Bahot bahot khoob likha apne tamanna Applause Applause Applause

apki shayri padke kuch likhne ka man kiya to likh rahi hu... umeed hai aap ise pasand karengi Thumbs UP

Shikayat kare bhi to kis se,
Matlabi hai ye duniya,
Jis se basera banaya tha kabhi sabne,
Aaj usi ko sara jahan loot gaya!

Taazi hawayon ki mithash thi kabhi,
Tha aasra roohani saye ka,
Ab banjar hai dharti saari,
Wo saya hum se rooth gaya !!

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«Reply #8 on: June 04, 2010, 07:24:10 AM »
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Shukriya Cara ji. N Nice lines. Usual Smile
WAH WAH KYA BAT HAI        TAMANNA PT JI.....

KUDRAT KI HARIYALI KAAT KE HAR TARAF BANAATE JAA RAHE HAI EENTON KE MAKAN
KUCH SAAL BAAD PUCCHTE HAI YAHAN BAARISH KYUN NAHIN HOTI YEH HI INSAAN

KUDRAT KI HAWA KE BADLE CHAL PADI HAI AAJ KAL INKI AC KI DUKAN
AUR KHUD HI KHOJ ME LAGE HAI KYUN ITNA BEEMAR PAD RAHE HAI AAJ KAL INSAAN

PADH LIKH KAR INSAAN BAHUT AAGE JAA SAKHTA HAI
PAR KUDRAT KE AAGE KABHI NAHIN JAA SAKHTA HAI..
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«Reply #9 on: June 04, 2010, 07:25:27 AM »
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 Shukriya Rahim Ji. Usual Smile
Bahaut khoob likha hai sabhi nee...Tamanna jee, Salma jee & Cara jee.. Applause
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«Reply #10 on: June 04, 2010, 07:27:37 AM »
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Shukriya Riyaz ji, Behad khushi hui k aapne mere khayalat ko samjha.Aur mere sher ko pasand kiya. Usual Smile
Bahot achha likha hai Tamnna ji. Sach kaha development ke liye bedardi se darakhton ko kaata ja raha hai. Iske bure nataaej bhi saamne aa rahe hain. Zaroori hai ke is par rok lage.
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Bahut bahut Shukriya Kapil ji hamesha saath dene k liy. wave
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne Tamanna ji...!!!

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«Reply #12 on: June 04, 2010, 07:35:09 AM »
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 Shukriya Shihab ji sher ko pasand farmaane ka. Waise mera naam tamanna hai par koi gal nai ji tussi ne sher k picche chupi soch ko samjha itna hi kaafi hai hamare liy.Shukriya. Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: June 05, 2010, 10:01:47 PM »
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kya baat ahi tamanna ji bahut achche Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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          Sheba behen sher ko pasand farmane k liy behad shukrguzaar hoon. wave
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