Dard Sehkar Bhi Khush Rehna Hai Yaaron "Khwaish"

by khwaish on December 22, 2010, 09:59:43 AM
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«Reply #15 on: December 29, 2010, 08:07:31 AM »
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un hooon nahin samajh aaya.
agar banda musafir hai jisse aap keh rahen hain to kashti kaise bande se compare ho sakti hai.ya to dono kashtiyon ko banda kahiye ya kashti ko kashti rehne dijiye.
Hahaha..Sureshji, Iss Misre mein Maine khud Ko Kashti Ka Roop Diya hai,Aur Kisi Musafir Se Yeh baat Keh Raha Hoon ke Eh musafir,Do kashtiyon Par sawaar Rahoge To Dooboge, isliye behtar hai ek Kashti Peeche reh jaaye, matlab Main peeche Hat Jaau,Aur Aap Ek hi kashti par Sawaar Raho..
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«Reply #16 on: January 02, 2011, 05:13:17 PM »
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Hahaha..Sureshji, Iss Misre mein Maine khud Ko Kashti Ka Roop Diya hai,Aur Kisi Musafir Se Yeh baat Keh Raha Hoon ke Eh musafir,Do kashtiyon Par sawaar Rahoge To Dooboge, isliye behtar hai ek Kashti Peeche reh jaaye, matlab Main peeche Hat Jaau,Aur Aap Ek hi kashti par Sawaar Raho..
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bahut khoob baat kahi hai aapne khwaish ji....musaafir na samjhe toh ek kashti ko toh peeche rehna hi hoga....mussafir ko doobne se bachane k liye...jo samajh paayi hu ussi samajh se khuch likha hai....aapki soch ka intzaar rahega.... Usual Smile

Do kashti mein sawaar uss raahi ko dekha hai
Shuruaati safar mein aayi,uske chehre ki muskaan ko dekha hai

Ek kashti se aage nikla,aur dusri kashti par sawaar hua
Har naye pehar mein uski badalti kashtiyon ko dekha hai

khud ki soch se badi kashti mein pahuche jb kadam achanak,
Apni karni par usse, pachhtaate dekha hai

Karne khud ki galtiyon ka paschataap
Sabse usse dur jaate dekha hai

Hawaaon ne chua uske chehre ko toh aansu nikal aaye aankho se
Inn aansuon mein uske dard k aansuon ko dekha hai

Tumne dekha hai kya??? Uss musaafir ko kashti k bina
Maine usse har kashti se utar k jaate dekha hai
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«Reply #17 on: January 02, 2011, 05:45:03 PM »
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Do kashti mein sawaar uss raahi ko dekha hai
Shuruaati safar mein aayi,uske chehre ki muskaan ko dekha hai

Ek kashti se aage nikla,aur dusri kashti par sawaar hua
Har naye pehar mein uski badalti kashtiyon ko dekha hai

khud ki soch se badi kashti mein pahuche jb kadam achanak,
Apni karni par usse, pachhtaate dekha hai

Karne khud ki galtiyon ka paschataap
Sabse usse dur jaate dekha hai

Hawaaon ne chua uske chehre ko toh aansu nikal aaye aankho se
Inn aansuon mein uske dard k aansuon ko dekha hai

Tumne dekha hai kya??? Uss musaafir ko kashti k bina
Maine usse har kashti se utarte dekha hai


Mashallah Bohat achcha likha hai aapne Nikhaar ji,.

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«Reply #18 on: January 03, 2011, 06:12:37 PM »
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Mashallah Bohat achcha likha hai aapne Nikhaar ji,.

Good one
bahut bahut bahut bahut shukriya Ajeem ji
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«Reply #19 on: January 03, 2011, 06:28:30 PM »
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nikhaar bht hi khubsurat aur satiik jawab diya h tumne...kashti aur musafir ka dard kya khub dikhaya h....dil k bht kareeb rahegi tumhari ye rachna....dil se shukriya ise share karne ka...
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«Reply #20 on: January 04, 2011, 05:03:57 AM »
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bahut bahut badhiya khwaishji

bahut khoob...
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«Reply #21 on: January 04, 2011, 02:52:25 PM »
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nikhaar bht hi khubsurat aur satiik jawab diya h tumne...kashti aur musafir ka dard kya khub dikhaya h....dil k bht kareeb rahegi tumhari ye rachna....dil se shukriya ise share karne ka...
shukriya kasak di....bahut bahut shukriya.....aapne saraha aur pasand kiya....meri mehnat safal ho gayi....
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