Dedicated to Sleep ~~Neend~~

by Ricky on May 05, 2008, 06:34:21 PM
Pages: [1]
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 1921 times)
Ricky
Yoindian Shayar
******

Rau: 8
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
4 days, 3 hours and 56 minutes.

Posts: 2455
Member Since: Dec 2003


View Profile
Reply with quote
Few lines talking about the sleep.

Chalo so jayen,
Chalo kho jayen,
Bhool jayen Zindagi ki jaddhojahad,
Ankhen band kar,
Kuch derr k liye hi sahi,
Dooor dushwarion se,
Khwabon ki duniya mein,
Gum ho jayen,
Chalo So jayen
Chalo kho Jayen !!

I hope kuch zyada ya kam nahi !!
Logged
Pooja
Guest
«Reply #1 on: May 05, 2008, 06:41:08 PM »
Reply with quote
Bahoot khoob Ricky..
Logged
honeyrose
Guest
«Reply #2 on: May 05, 2008, 06:42:15 PM »
Reply with quote
Very nice Ricky ji bohat hi khoob likha hai..Usual Smile
Logged
syednaami
Guest
«Reply #3 on: May 05, 2008, 11:18:54 PM »
Reply with quote
Bas yahan par meri bhi yehi haalat hai,
Chalo so jaayen...
Logged
Roja
Guest
«Reply #4 on: May 06, 2008, 02:29:44 AM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: Ricky on May 05, 2008, 06:34:21 PM
Few lines talking about the sleep.

Chalo so jayen,
Chalo kho jayen,
Bhool jayen Zindagi ki jaddhojahad,
Ankhen band kar,
Kuch derr k liye hi sahi,
Dooor dushwarion se,
Khwabon ki duniya mein,
Gum ho jayen,
Chalo So jayen
Chalo kho Jayen !!

I hope kuch zyada ya kam nahi !!

Bahut accha likha hai Ricky ji. toda zyada matlab 2/3 lines bada sakte the na.

Sapno main tum aa jayen
toda waqt pyar main kho jayen
chalo so jayen
aankhein band karke
tumhare yaadon me kho jayen..  tongue3
Logged
syednaami
Guest
«Reply #5 on: May 06, 2008, 07:08:33 AM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: Roja on May 06, 2008, 02:29:44 AM
Bahut accha likha hai Ricky ji. toda zyada matlab 2/3 lines bada sakte the na.

Sapno main tum aa jayen
toda waqt pyar main kho jayen
chalo so jayen
aankhein band karke
tumhare yaadon me kho jayen..  tongue3

Oh, but not in my fate this sort of sleep.
Short but too good.
Bravo!!
Logged
Ricky
Yoindian Shayar
******

Rau: 8
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
4 days, 3 hours and 56 minutes.

Posts: 2455
Member Since: Dec 2003


View Profile
«Reply #6 on: May 06, 2008, 10:31:13 AM »
Reply with quote
Thankyou Pooja and Honeyrose.

Thankyou Roja, well, I thought its better to be small, let people read it in no time and get reminded about importance of sleep.

Thankyou Syednami ji for your kind words !
Logged
Roja
Guest
«Reply #7 on: May 07, 2008, 08:21:19 AM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: syednaami on May 06, 2008, 07:08:33 AM
Oh, but not in my fate this sort of sleep.
Short but too good.
Bravo!!

Arre koshish karoge to you will surely have a sound romantic sleep... Winking

I think Mr Ricky just wanted us to read and go for a sound sleep without any dreams...hehehe
Logged
Roja
Guest
«Reply #8 on: May 07, 2008, 08:27:40 AM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: Ricky on May 06, 2008, 10:31:13 AM

Thankyou Roja, well, I thought its better to be small, let people read it in no time and get reminded about importance of sleep.

Welcome Mr Ricky..... but i think each and every one should sleep with
some romanctic dreams... so that the mind will be fresh next day... love4
Dont get upset..... It is purely my view.. drunken_smilie
Logged
syednaami
Guest
«Reply #9 on: May 07, 2008, 10:48:25 AM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: Roja on May 07, 2008, 08:21:19 AM
Arre koshish karoge to you will surely have a sound romantic sleep... Winking

I think Mr Ricky just wanted us to read and go for a sound sleep without any dreams...hehehe

Jab romance man men ho to neend to yunhi ud jayige na, aur dreams to khuli aankh dekhte rahna padta hai phir.  Shocked Even More
Logged
Shikha12
Guest
«Reply #10 on: May 08, 2008, 09:58:08 AM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: Ricky on May 05, 2008, 06:34:21 PM
Few lines talking about the sleep.

Chalo so jayen,
Chalo kho jayen,
Bhool jayen Zindagi ki jaddhojahad,
Ankhen band kar,
Kuch derr k liye hi sahi,
Dooor dushwarion se,
Khwabon ki duniya mein,
Gum ho jayen,
Chalo So jayen
Chalo kho Jayen !!

I hope kuch zyada ya kam nahi !!

Kuch jyaada ya kam nahin... Usual Smile Just Perfect..
Simple and Meaningful..
Logged
Pages: [1]
ReplyPrint
Yoindia ShayariAdab > Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari > Miscellaneous Shayri > Topic: Dedicated to Sleep ~~Neend~~
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
User
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
May 04, 2024, 11:45:41 AM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
Jaan Pe Jaan Ko
by Iqtedar
[April 23, 2024, 09:54:09 AM]
Firaaq - A deadly love ta...
by ASIF
[April 22, 2024, 01:50:33 PM]
Sab thik hain? -Charan
by Charanjeet_Kaur
[April 04, 2024, 04:49:28 PM]
Mutthi
by vivekpohre
[April 02, 2024, 12:27:12 PM]
Hifazat - a thriller love...
by ASIF
[March 24, 2024, 04:34:54 AM]
BEDARD - (A Romantic Thri...
by ASIF
[March 24, 2024, 04:30:44 AM]
Anjaan - A THRILL LOVE TA...
by ASIF
[March 24, 2024, 04:26:39 AM]
Geraft - (Sequel to "Beda...
by ASIF
[March 23, 2024, 08:50:46 AM]
Mar gaye Dil- e - Nadaan
by Abul Asad
[March 21, 2024, 07:59:38 PM]
जंगल में शबरी के (C-SET)
by MANOJ6568
[March 17, 2024, 02:01:29 PM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.361 seconds with 27 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8500 Real Poets and poetry admirer