Dhoke Jo Doston Ne Diye

by suman59 on October 19, 2012, 02:11:49 AM
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Dhoke jo doston ne mujhe bajha diye
Dushman ne mere haal pe aansu bhaha diye

Tumne to aisa teer chala diye
Rasme-wafa ke saare hi deepak bhujha diye

Bimaar maa ne bete ki khushiyon ke vaste
Apni dawa ke badle khilauna dila diye

Baaton ke teer fhenke jo usne ada ke saath
Dil per lagi thi chot magar muskura diye

Mai chot khake apni hi tokkar pe jab hassi
To pattharon ne khud mujhe raste bata diye

Roye kisi gareeb ki halat pe ab kabhi
Kuch ashq humne haal pe apne baha diye

Lazim hai uska shukriya ada kare
Jisne nawajishon  ke khajane luta diye
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«Reply #1 on: October 19, 2012, 03:03:29 AM »
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bahut khub  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: October 19, 2012, 03:24:34 AM »
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Dhoke jo doston ne mujhe bajha diye
Aunty jee es bajha ka kyaa matlab hota hai.
Dushman ne mere haal pe aansu bhaha diye
Oh My God! Ye ulti Ganga Kab se bahnii suru ho gayi.
Bas ab se dosto kii katti.
Aur dushmano ke sang jamayenge mahfil
 

Tumne to aisa teer chala diye
Rasme-wafa ke saare hi deepak bhujha diye

arre bhaai ye kyaa light ki bachat karte to theek tha. Par ab tel bhii bachaane lag gaye.
Hii re ye garibi to ab jaan ko aa gayi hai... Aur jaane kyaa-kyaa din aur dikhane wali hai
 

Bimaar maa ne bete ki khushiyon ke vaste
Apni dawa ke badle khilauna dila diye
Es sher pe kyaa kahoN. Ye to Dil pe asar kar gaya. Aur mammii ki yaad aa gayi. Es sher pe aapko daad bhii dete hai aur Rau bhii. 
Baaton ke teer fhenke jo usne ada ke saath
Dil per lagi thi chot magar muskura diye

Aoye huye...
Aap aese naa muskuraayaa kijiiye.
Jakhm'ae-dil dikhaya kijiiye.

Mai chot khake apni hi tokkar pe jab hassi
To pattharon ne khud mujhe raste bata diye

Paththaro ko jubaan kab se mil gayi.
Hii re Bhagwaan ye to naa-insaafii hai. Pahle mere kutte ko jubaan denii thii fir paththaro ka khayaal karnaa thaa.

 

Roye kisi gareeb ki halat pe ab kabhi
Kuch ashq humne haal pe apne baha diye
Hasil-ae-gazal sher.
Espe no majaak

Lazim hai uska shikriya ada kare
Jisne nawajishon  ke khajane luta diye


Kitnaa maal milaa. Sona chaandee hi milaa ya , koi diamond wagerah bhii haath aaya.


Bahut achchii gazal.
Kuch sher to etne heart touching the ki kyaa bataao.
Ek saandaar gazal.
Bahut achchaa laga ese parke.
Har misraa apne aap me bahut gahraai liye hu'ae hai.
Bahut bahut mubarak ho Aunty jee
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«Reply #3 on: October 19, 2012, 03:52:36 AM »
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bahut hearttouching
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«Reply #4 on: October 19, 2012, 03:57:36 AM »
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Dhoke jo doston ne mujhe bajha diye
Dushman ne mere haal pe aansu bhaha diye

Tumne to aisa teer chala diye
Rasme-wafa ke saare hi deepak bhujha diye

Bimaar maa ne bete ki khushiyon ke vaste
Apni dawa ke badle khilauna dila diye

Baaton ke teer fhenke jo usne ada ke saath
Dil per lagi thi chot magar muskura diye

Mai chot khake apni hi tokkar pe jab hassi
To pattharon ne khud mujhe raste bata diye
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Roye kisi gareeb ki halat pe ab kabhi
Kuch ashq humne haal pe apne baha diye

Lazim hai uska shikriya ada kare
Jisne nawajishon  ke khajane luta diye


BAhut BAhut Khub Suman g Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: October 19, 2012, 05:27:31 AM »
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bahut khoob suman ji, dhero dad
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«Reply #6 on: October 19, 2012, 01:20:40 PM »
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Bimaar maa ne bete ki khushiyon ke vaste
Apni dawa ke badle khilauna dila diye

Mai chot khake apni hi tokkar pe jab hassi
To pattharon ne khud mujhe raste bata diye

Roye kisi gareeb ki halat pe ab kabhi
Kuch ashq humne haal pe apne baha diye

Waah Bahut khoob  Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: October 19, 2012, 01:23:40 PM »
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Bahut Khub...Applause
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«Reply #8 on: October 19, 2012, 05:16:33 PM »
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very nice thoughts
beautiful Applause
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«Reply #10 on: October 19, 2012, 06:59:24 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut khoob Suman ji....!!!
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