|| Dhool khata raha......Priya..||

by manzil-e-ishq on May 09, 2011, 07:56:38 AM
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Rafta rafta hua yakeen, junun jata raha..
Meri haar ki khabar, karwan pata raha...

Pahle hua mushkil, fir namumkin hua
Wo bhi khuda ki tarah, mujhe ajmata raha..

Usne kara tha kya, ek zakham hi tha diya..
Par wahi zakham, meri rooh ko jalta raha..

Jiske naam ki khatir, kabhi hum the mite..
Wahi mehboob meri, yaad bhi mitata raha...

Raahe uski ho gayi, us hi ki ho gayi ‘Manzil’
Main raah ka tha pathar, dhool khata raha…..
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«Reply #1 on: May 09, 2011, 09:26:50 AM »
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Rafta rafta hua yakeen, junun jata raha..
Meri haar ki khabar, karwan pata raha...

Pahle hua mushkil, fir namumkin hua
Wo bhi khuda ki tarah, mujhe ajmata raha..

Usne kara tha kya, ek zakham hi tha diya..
Par wahi zakham, meri rooh ko jalta raha..

Jiske naam ki khatir, kabhi hum the mite..
Wahi mehboob meri, yaad bhi mitata raha...

Raahe uski ho gayi, us hi ki ho gayi ‘Manzil’
Main raah ka tha pathar, dhool khata raha…..


bahut khoob manzil
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«Reply #2 on: May 09, 2011, 02:32:37 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Priyaji

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«Reply #3 on: May 09, 2011, 02:56:56 PM »
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rafta rafta…sukoon dil ka jata rha
haar ki khabar par teri…mai muskurata rha!!

na ho jaaye tu mayus kahin…
muskurakar tujhe hansata rha
pehle hua muskil…fir namumkin hua
dekar dilaasa tujhe manzil…khud ko behlaata raha!!

usne kara tha kya…ek zakham hi dia tha
bhula kar dard ko apne…tere hi zakham sahlaata rha!!

jiske naam ki khatir manzil…kabhi mile the hum
dosti wahi sachchi…mai nibhata rha!!

rahen urki or usi ki…dil se tu ho gai manzil
pathar tha me rah ka dhool sama…pathiko ko thokaro se bachataa rha
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«Reply #4 on: May 10, 2011, 08:08:11 AM »
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shukria sheba ji...

bahut khoob manzil
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«Reply #5 on: May 10, 2011, 08:09:11 AM »
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thanx alot khwaish ji...

Bahut Bahut Khoob Priyaji

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«Reply #6 on: May 10, 2011, 08:10:32 AM »
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very nice reply nirala ji....
thanx for such a beautiful reply....

rafta rafta…sukoon dil ka jata rha
haar ki khabar par teri…mai muskurata rha!!

na ho jaaye tu mayus kahin…
muskurakar tujhe hansata rha
pehle hua muskil…fir namumkin hua
dekar dilaasa tujhe manzil…khud ko behlaata raha!!

usne kara tha kya…ek zakham hi dia tha
bhula kar dard ko apne…tere hi zakham sahlaata rha!!

jiske naam ki khatir manzil…kabhi mile the hum
dosti wahi sachchi…mai nibhata rha!!

rahen urki or usi ki…dil se tu ho gai manzil
pathar tha me rah ka dhool sama…pathiko ko thokaro se bachataa rha
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«Reply #7 on: May 18, 2011, 05:46:51 PM »
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very nice reply nirala ji....
thanx for such a beautiful reply....

kyun iss naachij ki tariff kar rahi aap?

aapke post par kuch na kuch ajeeb baate likh hi dalta hu mai …
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«Reply #8 on: June 01, 2011, 01:09:56 PM »
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Mai raah kaa tha patthar dhool khaata rahaa....
bahut khoob Priyaa!
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«Reply #9 on: June 05, 2011, 05:41:54 AM »
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bht bht shukria mamta di...

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Mai raah kaa tha patthar dhool khaata rahaa....
bahut khoob Priyaa!
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