//-----dhuan door tak gaya hoga-----// Advo.RavinderRavi"Sagar"

by Advo.RavinderaRavi on October 21, 2013, 06:55:13 AM
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Dil jala hai mera dhuan  bahut door  tak gaya hoga.!
Yaqinan teri gali-muhalle  charcha mera chala hoga.!!

Tujhe naaz gar apne husn  par mujhe faqar wafa par.!
Husn wale to kai hain meri wafa par  falsfaan hoga.!!

Teri muhabbat ka maara hun is bat se  nahin inqaar.!
Chahne wale to kai mileinge jaan dene wala na hoga.!!

Tanha akele jine ki aadat daal le abhi se mujh bin.!
Ek din tu bhi tarsegi mujhko par mera sath na hoga.!!

Bahut chaha hai "Ravinder" ne tujhe Khuda ki kasam.!
Aaj ke bad mera naam hoga par mera wajud na hoga.!!




दिल जला  है  मेरा धुआँ बहुत दूर तक गया होगा.!
यक़ीनन तेरी गली-मुहल्ले में चर्चा  मेरा चला होगा.!!

तुझे नाज़ गर अपने हुस्न पर  मुझे फक़र वफ़ा पर.!
हुस्न वाले तो कई हैं मेरी वफ़ा पर फ़लसफ़ान होगा.!!

तेरी मुहब्बत का मारा हूँ  इस बात  से नहीं इनक़ार.!
चाहने वाले तो कई मिलेंगे जान देने वाला ना होगा.!!

तन्हा अकेले जीनेकी आदत डालले अभी से मुझ बिन.!
एक दिन तूभी तरसेगी मुझको पर मेरा साथ ना होगा.!!

बहुत चाहा है "रविंदर" ने  तुझ को खुदा की कसम.!
आज के बाद मेरा नाम होगा पर मेरा वजूद ना होगा.!!
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«Reply #1 on: October 21, 2013, 07:33:28 AM »
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Dil jala hai mera dhuan  bahut door  tak gaya hoga.!
Yaqinan teri gali-muhalle  charcha mera chala hoga.!!

Waah .... Khoob .... Daad Ravinder ji ....
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«Reply #2 on: October 21, 2013, 02:03:56 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: October 21, 2013, 03:06:59 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: October 21, 2013, 06:00:42 PM »
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Waaaaaaaaaah ravi ji... bahut bahut khooooooob... hazaron daaaaaaaad..

Teri muhabbat ka maara hun is bat se  nahin inqaar.!
Chahne wale to kai mileinge jaan dene wala na hoga.!!

Tanha akele jine ki aadat daal le abhi se mujh bin.!
Ek din tu bhi tarsegi mujhko par mera sath na hoga.!!
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: October 21, 2013, 06:15:36 PM »
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wha wha...
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«Reply #6 on: October 21, 2013, 07:03:05 PM »
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waah waah bahut bahut khoob Ravi ji.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: October 21, 2013, 09:20:58 PM »
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behad khooobsurat likhe ho bhai...
Teri muhabbat ka maara hun is bat se  nahin inqaar.!
Chahne wale to kai mileinge jaan dene wala na hoga.!!

Tanha akele jine ki aadat daal le abhi se mujh bin.!
Ek din tu bhi tarsegi mujhko par mera sath na hoga.!!
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: October 21, 2013, 11:14:41 PM »
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«Reply #9 on: October 22, 2013, 04:24:20 AM »
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«Reply #10 on: October 22, 2013, 06:36:21 AM »
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Quote from: zarraa on October 21, 2013, 07:33:28 AM
Dil jala hai mera dhuan  bahut door  tak gaya hoga.!
Yaqinan teri gali-muhalle  charcha mera chala hoga.!!

Waah .... Khoob .... Daad Ravinder ji ....
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«Reply #11 on: October 22, 2013, 06:37:14 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on October 21, 2013, 02:03:56 PM
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«Reply #12 on: October 22, 2013, 06:38:03 AM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on October 21, 2013, 03:06:59 PM
bahut khoob
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«Reply #13 on: October 22, 2013, 06:38:58 AM »
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Waaaaaaaaaah ravi ji... bahut bahut khooooooob... hazaron daaaaaaaad..

Teri muhabbat ka maara hun is bat se  nahin inqaar.!
Chahne wale to kai mileinge jaan dene wala na hoga.!!

Tanha akele jine ki aadat daal le abhi se mujh bin.!
Ek din tu bhi tarsegi mujhko par mera sath na hoga.!!
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Pasand karne ke liye shuqriya.
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«Reply #14 on: October 22, 2013, 06:39:38 AM »
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Quote from: RAJAN KONDAL on October 21, 2013, 06:15:36 PM
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