dil bhara bhara sa,khud mai ek khalipan..

by Pooja on May 23, 2008, 06:59:34 PM
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Dil bhara bhara sa, khud main ek khalipan
Ajeeb sannta hai, na jaane kaya chahe yah man
Rone ko bahoot man hai aor rona bhi atta nahi ab
Kaya hue halaat, ki khud ko he na samjhe khud ka man

Chalte jaana hai zindagi aor chalti he jayegi
Kyun pehchan kar bhi na pahchne kisi ko yah man
Na khushi ka ahsaas, na hi gumo se koi dukh
Phir kis duvidha main hai ajj, yah mera man

dil bhara bhara sa, khud mai ek khalipan…….
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«Reply #1 on: May 28, 2008, 07:14:39 PM »
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her pal tujhe chahu, her pal teri yaad aaye
Sun 'O' Piya, Kaya kabhi tera jiya bhi hai ghabraye...

Ankhon mai barsaat, dil mera bhar bhar aaye
Sochu her pal, aise, kaise koi itna nirdai ban jaaye
Sun 'O' Piya, Kaya kabhi tera jiya bhi hai ghabraye...

karu fariyaad apne dil ki suraj, chand taaro se,
to kabhi jameen-asmaan mai tu hi tu bas mujhe najar ayye
Sun 'O' Piya, Kaya kabhi tera jiya bhi hai ghabraye...

Din raat ke issi chakarview mai pal pal jeevan beeta jaaye
Sun 'O' Piya, Kaya kabhi tera jiya bhi hai ghabraye...
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«Reply #2 on: May 28, 2008, 09:08:40 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Pooja, dono hi Kavita bohot achchi likhi hai !
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«Reply #3 on: May 28, 2008, 09:14:56 PM »
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Thanks Celmira, mujhe to laga shayad kisi ko pasand hi nahi aii... First comment after (Read 69 times)  sad5
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«Reply #4 on: May 28, 2008, 09:19:11 PM »
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Aaj hi maine dekhi...din main padha tha pehli waali, par masrufiyat ki wajah se ab likh paayi Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: May 29, 2008, 04:57:10 PM »
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ankhon mai neer, dil mai hai peerd
Shabd her ek kahin mera kho gaya
Sooni ankhein, sooni sooni rahein
Dil kyun sirf ek tere naam ho gaya

Hai sab kuch, aor kuch bhi nahi
Yah kaisa sehma sehma sa alam ho gaya
Tujh main basati hai meri rooh
Phir kaise tu itna anjaana ho gaya

Her khayal main tu, her baat main tu
Jeevan mera, mujhse anjaana ho gaya
Socho ke ghaire main, sochein bhi ho gai goom
Bin tere, her pal, marte jaana ho gaya!!!
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«Reply #6 on: July 22, 2008, 01:49:16 PM »
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(Read 129 times) only one comment sad5
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«Reply #7 on: July 26, 2008, 10:49:31 PM »
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Well done Pooja ji,
Good words created by you in a poem and I am writing few small words after go through your poem.
 
Dil Ki Koi Sunta Kaha,
Wo Begana Hoe Gaya

Per Aap Ki Yeh Poem Padhkar,
Dil Deewana Ho Gaya.

Dil Ki Koi Sunta Kaha,
Wo Begana Hoe Gaya
By harish Pilot(SS)
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«Reply #8 on: July 27, 2008, 05:12:35 AM »
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her pal tujhe chahu, her pal teri yaad aaye
Sun 'O' Piya, Kaya kabhi tera jiya bhi hai ghabraye...

Ankhon mai barsaat, dil mera bhar bhar aaye
Sochu her pal, aise, kaise koi itna nirdai ban jaaye
Sun 'O' Piya, Kaya kabhi tera jiya bhi hai ghabraye...

karu fariyaad apne dil ki suraj, chand taaro se,
to kabhi jameen-asmaan mai tu hi tu bas mujhe najar ayye
Sun 'O' Piya, Kaya kabhi tera jiya bhi hai ghabraye...

Din raat ke issi chakarview mai pal pal jeevan beeta jaaye
Sun 'O' Piya, Kaya kabhi tera jiya bhi hai ghabraye...

Sun 'O' sathia kyun tujhko tere per aitbaar na ayye
kyun kare usko yaad,  jo kabhi sath he na nibhaye

ankhon main khumar, kyun dil mai bahar na ayye
kyun sochein itna nirdai ko, jis ko yaad na kabhi teri ayye
Sun 'O' sathia kyun tujhko tere per aitbaar na ayye

Na kar koi fariyaad, dil behlaane ki baatein hai
kyun ajj bhi tujhko haqiqat samjh na ayye
Sun 'O' sathia kyun tujhko tere per aitbaar na ayye

apne khayalo ke chakerview main kyun tu dhansti jaaye
Sun 'O' sathia kyun tujhko tere per aitbaar na ayye


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«Reply #9 on: July 31, 2008, 04:15:37 PM »
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Thanks Harish ji... magar lagta hai baki yoindians ko yah rachnaye kuch khas pasand nahi aai.. sad5

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«Reply #10 on: August 05, 2008, 03:42:14 PM »
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Ashaq bhari ankhon main, ansoo simat jaate hai
Khawab bhari nigah main, khayal bilakh jaate hai

Zindagi ke dukho sukho main pata bhi nahi chalta
Kab kaha Insaan, zindagi main bhatak jaate hai

Kuch palo ka sukh, umar-bhar ka gum
Na jaane kis tarah, insaan, insaan ko de jaate hai

Khud main kaha tak samete koi yah dard
Kitna bhi ro lo, yah dard ander he kahi rah jaate hai

Ashaq bhari ankhon main, ansoo simat jaate hai
Khawab bhari nigah main, khayal bilakh jaate hai!!
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«Reply #11 on: August 05, 2008, 03:47:22 PM »
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wah pooja ji ek se badkar ek
kis ki taarif karu kis ki nahi
ye to hum hi duvidha mai pad gaye

sach pooja ji aap ki jitni taarif ki jai wo kam hai





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«Reply #12 on: August 05, 2008, 03:55:18 PM »
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bahoot bahoot shukaria baadal ji!! waise lagta nahi ki is thread ki posts kisi ko pasand aa rahi hai.. app pata nahi galati se kaise yaha aa gaye sad5

magar apni yah poems mujhe pasand hai Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: August 05, 2008, 03:56:37 PM »
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ankhon mai neer, dil mai hai peerd
Shabd her ek kahin mera kho gaya
Sooni ankhein, sooni sooni rahein
Dil kyun sirf ek tere naam ho gaya

Hai sab kuch, aor kuch bhi nahi
Yah kaisa sehma sehma sa alam ho gaya
Tujh main basati hai meri rooh
Phir kaise tu itna anjaana ho gaya

Her khayal main tu, her baat main tu
Jeevan mera, mujhse anjaana ho gaya
Socho ke ghaire main, sochein bhi ho gai goom
Bin tere, her pal, marte jaana ho gaya!!!

khoob dil se likha hai ji aapne nice lines pooja ji
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«Reply #14 on: August 05, 2008, 03:58:24 PM »
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galti se kabhi baadal nahi aate pooja ji
sach mai bahut aache post hai  icon_salut




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