Dil mai dabe Zakham

by Pooja on July 06, 2009, 01:38:52 AM
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kalam mai qaid shabd pharpharate hai
dil main dabe zakham tadap jaate hai

Likhe bhi insaan to kaha tak kaya kaya likhe
likhte likhte bhi armaan seham jaate hai

tol kar likho, soch kar likho, apni he ek had tak likho
zisam main qaid sannatte, lahu main mil ubal jaate hai

zindagi ki jayot jheelmilati hai meri nazmo main
jise likhte likhte ajj bhi ashaq tapak jaate hai

kalam main qaid shabd pharpharate hai
dil main dabe zakham tadap jaate hai....
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«Reply #1 on: July 06, 2009, 01:45:39 AM »
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 :clap:very nice pooja ji,,,very gud Applause
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«Reply #2 on: July 06, 2009, 02:35:46 AM »
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Shukaria Anita ji
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«Reply #3 on: July 06, 2009, 02:48:58 AM »
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Bahut dard hai aapke is poem mein Pooja ji.excellent, Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:very nice and beautiful creation.
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«Reply #4 on: July 06, 2009, 02:53:07 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on July 06, 2009, 02:48:58 AM
Bahut dard hai aapke is poem mein Pooja ji.excellent, Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:very nice and beautiful creation.

shukaria Madhu ji
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«Reply #5 on: July 06, 2009, 04:56:53 AM »
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Pooja Ji,
Bahut dard chhalk raha hai aapki is rachna mein! Ek baar phir se bahut acha likha hai!  Bahut Bahut Khoob! Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: July 06, 2009, 05:08:29 AM »
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wah bhut khub....poojaji....

dil mein dabbe zakham bhar lana hi hoga,
zindagi bhi ek kalam hai,use chalana hi hoga.
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«Reply #7 on: July 06, 2009, 05:14:29 AM »
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 GUD WORK POOJA JI sunny
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«Reply #8 on: July 06, 2009, 08:27:56 AM »
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Nice One Pooja Ji.
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«Reply #9 on: July 06, 2009, 10:26:54 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Pooja Ji
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«Reply #10 on: July 06, 2009, 03:31:49 PM »
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Quote from: Deepati on July 06, 2009, 04:56:53 AM
Pooja Ji,
Bahut dard chhalk raha hai aapki is rachna mein! Ek baar phir se bahut acha likha hai!  Bahut Bahut Khoob! Applause Applause

Quote from: cara on July 06, 2009, 05:08:29 AM
wah bhut khub....poojaji....

dil mein dabbe zakham bhar lana hi hoga,
zindagi bhi ek kalam hai,use chalana hi hoga.

Quote from: adil bechain on July 06, 2009, 05:14:29 AM

 GUD WORK POOJA JI sunny

Quote from: Sammual on July 06, 2009, 08:27:56 AM
Nice One Pooja Ji.

Quote from: @kaash on July 06, 2009, 09:28:34 AM
Behad hi achi aur dard se bhari ghazal likhi hai aapne Pooja ji,awesome poem

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on July 06, 2009, 10:26:54 AM
Bahut Khoob Pooja Ji

Bahoot bahoot shukaria Deepti ji, Cara ji, Sunny ji, Sammual ji,  Kaash ji and Rajesh ji!!

Ajj kal likhne mai sath nahi milta aor agge kuch kikhna mushkil sa ho jaata hai!! Jab koi bhi kuch likhta hai to likhne ke baad se comments ki wait shuru ho jaati hai... magar mujhe comments ke sath meri kavita ko parr kar, kaya kavita ya lines man main aai unhe jan.ne ki icha rahti hai...chahe wo do lines he kyun na ho...

kyun ki wo do lines phir mere liye agge likhne ki prairna banati hai!!
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«Reply #11 on: July 07, 2009, 10:48:44 PM »
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Quote from: cara on July 06, 2009, 05:08:29 AM
wah bhut khub....poojaji....

dil mein dabbe zakham bhar lana hi hoga,
zindagi bhi ek kalam hai,use chalana hi hoga.

kalam likhe na likhe, zindagi likhti chali jaati hai
kahne ko zinda nahi zisam mai kuch, per zindagi chalti he jaati hai
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«Reply #12 on: August 12, 2009, 09:58:52 PM »
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aor zakhmo ki jagah ab kaha se laaye
zakham dene wale yah bhi samjhate jaaye

milte hai ban kar dost aor zakham de jaate hai
fidrat-e-dunia, samjh kar bhi, kyun nasamjh ban jaaye..
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«Reply #13 on: September 07, 2011, 10:43:18 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on July 06, 2009, 01:38:52 AM
kalam mai qaid shabd pharpharate hai
dil main dabe zakham tadap jaate hai

Likhe bhi insaan to kaha tak kaya kaya likhe
likhte likhte bhi armaan seham jaate hai

tol kar likho, soch kar likho, apni he ek had tak likho
zisam main qaid sannatte, lahu main mil ubal jaate hai

zindagi ki jayot jheelmilati hai meri nazmo main
jise likhte likhte ajj bhi ashaq tapak jaate hai

kalam main qaid shabd pharpharate hai
dil main dabe zakham tadap jaate hai....

Bahut Bahut Khooob Pooja...

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«Reply #14 on: September 07, 2011, 10:51:02 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on July 07, 2009, 10:48:44 PM
kalam likhe na likhe, zindagi likhti chali jaati hai
kahne ko zinda nahi zisam mai kuch, per zindagi chalti he jaati hai

Zindagi ne To Hardum Chalna Hai
Bahaar Mile Ya Pathjad Har Haal mein Guzarna Hai

Jeeo To iss kadar Jeeo Ke Koi Tumhe Dekhkar jeena seekha
Gham Mein Doob-Doob Kar Marna Bhi Kya Koi marna Hai

Zindagi Ne To Humrdum Chalna Hai.......
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