Dil....!!!

by Talat on March 22, 2007, 12:05:26 PM
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Khamosh ae dil, bhari mehfil main chillana nahin achcha
Adab pehla qareena hai mohabbat ke qareenon main

This sher is by the famous Poet Allama Iqbal…now my ashaar are inspired by this sher.


Yoon mehfil main aahain ae dil tu na bhar

Na shikwa kar mehboob se na shikayat kar

Mohabbat main dard sehne ka hai dastoor

Har sitam seh le tu bas khamosh reh kar !!
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«Reply #1 on: March 22, 2007, 02:19:35 PM »
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Very Nice.... =D> Very well said Talat...
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«Reply #2 on: March 23, 2007, 09:57:11 AM »
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Thanks a lot Shikha Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: March 28, 2007, 07:59:20 PM »
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Bohat Khoob Talat!
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«Reply #4 on: March 29, 2007, 04:03:00 AM »
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wah Talat Di.. kya baat hai..

Dil ne aaj kuch kaha mujhse..
na kabar thi mujhe , na khayal aaya..
Dhadkan bad gayi.. yaar ko yaad kar...
mausam b Baharo se cheen noor le aaya
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«Reply #5 on: March 29, 2007, 10:18:29 PM »
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Thanks Ravi and Divs Usual Smile ...Nice one Divs

Yeh dil bhi kitna pagal hota hai
Kachchi mitti par mohabbat ki...
Unchi unchi imaarat banata hai
Aur jab khiskti hai zameen dil ki,
Mohabbat lutne ka ghum manata hai !!
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«Reply #6 on: March 30, 2007, 12:14:45 PM »
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Quote from: "Talat"
Khamosh ae dil, bhari mehfil main chillana nahin achcha
Adab pehla qareena hai mohabbat ke qareenon main

This sher is by the famous Poet Allama Iqbal…now my ashaar are inspired by this sher.


Yoon mehfil main aahain ae dil tu na bhar

Na shikwa kar mehboob se na shikayat kar

Mohabbat main dard sehne ka hai dastoor

Har sitam seh le tu bas khamosh reh kar !!








bahoot khuub Talat ji... bahoot badiya likha hai aapne...



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Dil tutae chahe par aawaz na hone paaye
laakh gire aanson par daaman na gila hone paaye
hua gar aisa, to ruswa hoga pyaar bhi
khayal rahe bas itna, pyaar na ruswa hone paaye..


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umeed hai aapko pasand aayega
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«Reply #7 on: March 30, 2007, 06:32:06 PM »
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very nice talat n alone bad.
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«Reply #8 on: March 30, 2007, 08:14:36 PM »
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Thanks Alone, and Nidhi....!!

Aapne bohot achcha likha hai Alone...!! Hume bohot pasand aaya Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: September 22, 2008, 06:58:33 PM »
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Thankyou ! Yoindia
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«Reply #10 on: October 05, 2008, 03:36:42 AM »
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Talat,
Very nice lines !!!
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«Reply #11 on: October 05, 2008, 02:29:55 PM »
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very good to read celmira  love9
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«Reply #12 on: October 06, 2008, 06:36:22 AM »
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Quote from: Bharat on October 05, 2008, 03:36:42 AM
Talat,
Very nice lines !!!

Shukriya Bharat   notworthy
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«Reply #13 on: October 06, 2008, 06:37:14 AM »
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Quote from: Sonia01 on October 05, 2008, 02:29:55 PM
very good to read celmira  love9

Thank You so much dear Sonia  icon_flower
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«Reply #14 on: October 07, 2008, 03:20:46 AM »
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safina = boat
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