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Diwali ki raat kisi ghar ki dahleej pe timtimate deep se kuch batchit hui meri...uski timtimati lau ki roshni kuch udaas si lagi mujhe..

kyun tumhe apni kshmataon par vishwas nahi hota,
mana ki deep ki lou me chand sa prakash nahi hota

diwali ki raat par aaj bhi hai sirf deepon ka adhikar,
amavasya ki raat me chandni ka ahsaas nahi hota,

mana ki tum mohtaaj ho baati ke, tel ke, par
dastoor hai bina mile-jule jivan ka vikaas nahi hota,

kya chintit ho jeevan ki laghu avadhi ko soch ke,
uplabdhiyon ke bina lamba jivan bhi khaas nahi hota,

patangon ko aaj bhi tumhaari lou me jalte dekha hai,
kya tumhe unki shahadat ka ehsaas nahi hota,

jab prjvallit ho hi gaye ho, to pure josh se do prkash,
jindagi khul ke jeene se jivan ka naash nahi hota

क्यूँ तुम्हे अपनी क्षमताओं पर विश्वास नही होता,
माना की दीप की लौ मे चाँद सा प्रकाश नही होता

दीवाली की रात पर आज भी है सिर्फ़ दीपों का अधिकार,
अमावस्या की रात मे चाँदनी का अहसास नही होता,

माना की तुम मोहताज हो बाति के, तेल के, पर
दस्तूर है बिना मिले-जुले जीवन का विकास नही होता,

क्या चिंतित हो जीवन की लघु अवधि को सोच के,
उपलब्धियों के बिना लंबा जीवन भी ख़ास नही होता,

पतंगों को आज भी तुम्हारी लौ मे जलते देखा है,
क्या तुम्हे उनकी शहादत का एहसास नही होता,

जब प्रज्वल्लित हो ही गये हो, तो पूरे जोश से दो प्रकाश,
जिंदगी खुल के जीने से जीवन का नाश नही होता


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«Reply #1 on: November 08, 2010, 11:14:04 AM »
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mind blowing ...hearttouching and a motivational poem bekaraar ji......
bht bht bht hi pyaari bat chit hai aapki uss diye k sath......yunhi himmat jagate rahiye har niraash aur bujhte diye me.......
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«Reply #2 on: November 08, 2010, 11:17:33 AM »
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mind blowing ...hearttouching and a motivational poem bekaraar ji......
bht bht bht hi pyaari bat chit hai aapki uss diye k sath......yunhi himmat jagate rahiye har niraash aur bujhte diye me.......
bahoot shukriya housala afjai ka anamika ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: November 08, 2010, 11:22:54 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI      BEKARAR JI.......


CHAHE KITNI BHI TARAKI KARE DUNIYA
CHAHE KITNE BHI TARIKO N SE KARE ROSHNIYA
JO ROSHNI KA MAZA AUR EHSAAS DIWALI KI DEEYON MEIN HAI
WOH MAZA BIJILI KE BULBON MEIN KAHAN........
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«Reply #4 on: November 08, 2010, 03:09:32 PM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI      BEKARAR JI.......


CHAHE KITNI BHI TARAKI KARE DUNIYA
CHAHE KITNE BHI TARIKO N SE KARE ROSHNIYA
JO ROSHNI KA MAZA AUR EHSAAS DIWALI KI DEEYON MEIN HAI
WOH MAZA BIJILI KE BULBON MEIN KAHAN........

bahoot shukriya cara ji housala-afzai ke liye
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«Reply #5 on: November 08, 2010, 03:37:26 PM »
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bahaut hi acchhaa bekarar ji. samvedansheelata aur darshan ka sundar milan hai aapki rachana mein.
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«Reply #6 on: November 08, 2010, 03:42:42 PM »
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bahaut hi acchhaa bekarar ji. samvedansheelata aur darshan ka sundar milan hai aapki rachana mein.
rachna ke baare me aapke vichar jaan kar achcha laga Zarra ji shukriya
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«Reply #7 on: November 08, 2010, 05:01:32 PM »
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Diwali ki raat kisi ghar ki dahleej pe timtimate deep se kuch batchit hui meri...uski timtimati lau ki roshni kuch udaas si lagi mujhe..

kyun tumhe apni kshmataon par vishwas nahi hota,
mana ki deep ki lou me chand sa prakash nahi hota

diwali ki raat par aaj bhi hai sirf deepon ka adhikar,
amavasya ki raat me chandni ka ahsaas nahi hota,

mana ki tum mohtaaj ho baati ke, tel ke, par
dastoor hai bina mile-jule jivan ka vikaas nahi hota,

kya chintit ho jeevan ki laghu avadhi ko soch ke,
uplabdhiyon ke bina lamba jivan bhi khaas nahi hota,

patangon ko aaj bhi tumhaari lou me jalte dekha hai,
kya tumhe unki shahadat ka ehsaas nahi hota,

jab prjvallit ho hi gaye ho, to pure josh se do prkash,
jindagi khul ke jeene se jivan ka naash nahi hota

क्यूँ तुम्हे अपनी क्षमताओं पर विश्वास नही होता,
माना की दीप की लौ मे चाँद सा प्रकाश नही होता

दीवाली की रात पर आज भी है सिर्फ़ दीपों का अधिकार,
अमावस्या की रात मे चाँदनी का अहसास नही होता,

माना की तुम मोहताज हो बाति के, तेल के, पर
दस्तूर है बिना मिले-जुले जीवन का विकास नही होता,

क्या चिंतित हो जीवन की लघु अवधि को सोच के,
उपलब्धियों के बिना लंबा जीवन भी ख़ास नही होता,

पतंगों को आज भी तुम्हारी लौ मे जलते देखा है,
क्या तुम्हे उनकी शहादत का एहसास नही होता,

जब प्रज्वल्लित हो ही गये हो, तो पूरे जोश से दो प्रकाश,
जिंदगी खुल के जीने से जीवन का नाश नही होता




Aapki Soch, Aapki Samaj Ko Mera Salaam!!!!!

Aapki kavita Seedhe-Saadhe Aksharo mein Samundar Ki gehrai Li hui hai..

bahut Hi Khoobsurat, Mere tareef Ke Liye Koi lafz Nahi

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«Reply #8 on: November 08, 2010, 06:30:29 PM »
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Ek jaandaar kavita...nirasha me aasha ka deep jalati poem....mazaa aagay padh kar.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley

Insaan ko hona chahiye khud ki akal per bharosa
Na-Mumkin kuchh nahi he bas chahiye thoda housla

Miljul kar he hum Ajoobon ko anjaam de sakte hain
Ek aur ek ho agyara kisi ko bhi maat de sakte hain


Diwali ki raat kisi ghar ki dahleej pe timtimate deep se kuch batchit hui meri...uski timtimati lau ki roshni kuch udaas si lagi mujhe..

kyun tumhe apni kshmataon par vishwas nahi hota,
mana ki deep ki lou me chand sa prakash nahi hota

diwali ki raat par aaj bhi hai sirf deepon ka adhikar,
amavasya ki raat me chandni ka ahsaas nahi hota,

mana ki tum mohtaaj ho baati ke, tel ke, par
dastoor hai bina mile-jule jivan ka vikaas nahi hota,

kya chintit ho jeevan ki laghu avadhi ko soch ke,
uplabdhiyon ke bina lamba jivan bhi khaas nahi hota,

patangon ko aaj bhi tumhaari lou me jalte dekha hai,
kya tumhe unki shahadat ka ehsaas nahi hota,

jab prjvallit ho hi gaye ho, to pure josh se do prkash,
jindagi khul ke jeene se jivan ka naash nahi hota

क्यूँ तुम्हे अपनी क्षमताओं पर विश्वास नही होता,
माना की दीप की लौ मे चाँद सा प्रकाश नही होता

दीवाली की रात पर आज भी है सिर्फ़ दीपों का अधिकार,
अमावस्या की रात मे चाँदनी का अहसास नही होता,

माना की तुम मोहताज हो बाति के, तेल के, पर
दस्तूर है बिना मिले-जुले जीवन का विकास नही होता,

क्या चिंतित हो जीवन की लघु अवधि को सोच के,
उपलब्धियों के बिना लंबा जीवन भी ख़ास नही होता,

पतंगों को आज भी तुम्हारी लौ मे जलते देखा है,
क्या तुम्हे उनकी शहादत का एहसास नही होता,

जब प्रज्वल्लित हो ही गये हो, तो पूरे जोश से दो प्रकाश,
जिंदगी खुल के जीने से जीवन का नाश नही होता



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«Reply #9 on: November 09, 2010, 11:16:37 AM »
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Aapki Soch, Aapki Samaj Ko Mera Salaam!!!!!

Aapki kavita Seedhe-Saadhe Aksharo mein Samundar Ki gehrai Li hui hai..

bahut Hi Khoobsurat, Mere tareef Ke Liye Koi lafz Nahi

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khwaish bro housla afzai ka aapka andaz bahoot khoob hai aur mere liye likhne ki prerana bhi..dil se shukriya..
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«Reply #10 on: November 09, 2010, 11:18:27 AM »
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Ek jaandaar kavita...nirasha me aasha ka deep jalati poem....mazaa aagay padh kar.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley

Insaan ko hona chahiye khud ki akal per bharosa
Na-Mumkin kuchh nahi he bas chahiye thoda housla

Miljul kar he hum Ajoobon ko anjaam de sakte hain
Ek aur ek ho agyara kisi ko bhi maat de sakte hain



bahoot hi khoob char line hain koyal ji daad kabool karen...rachna ko padhne aur sarahne ke liye shukriya
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«Reply #11 on: November 09, 2010, 02:19:13 PM »
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yaar bahut bahut mast...

deeppo ko itna motivate na kijiye sahab
kal chand kya sochega itne sare chand dekhkar~
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«Reply #12 on: November 10, 2010, 10:32:44 AM »
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Bahoot shukriya abhi ji aapki do line bahoot pasand aayin mujhe
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«Reply #13 on: November 11, 2010, 01:23:56 PM »
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buhat aacha likha hai bekarar ji.
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«Reply #14 on: November 11, 2010, 08:38:21 PM »
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shukriya poonam singh ji...........aapke naam se mujhe meri bahan punam ki yaad aa gai jo yoindia pe hi mujhe mili thi aur ab na jaane kahan gum hai.......
fir se shukriya
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