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                               dikhaye mohabbat muskura kar to siyaasat jaano,
                               muskuraaye husn  khamoshi se to aafat jaano,

                               bani ghar ki zeenat to roshan jahaan tumhara,
                               nikle jo qadam baahar  to zahmat jaano,

                               hua fanaa wajood, rahe jo mokhaalif apne,
                               hue shahar badar tum to humari sharafat jaano,
                               
                               kho gaya sahil bhi toofan-e-bahr main,
                               bachaa rahaa gharaunda to uski qudrat jaano,

                               hai jeena muhaal muflisi mein bechain..!
                               hain khushaal hum to uski rahmat jaano.
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«Reply #1 on: April 13, 2011, 12:55:59 PM »
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                               dikhaye mohabbat muskura kar to siyaasat jaano,
                               muskuraaye husn  khamoshi se to aafat jaano,

                               bani ghar ki zeenat to roshan jahaan tumhara,
                               nikle jo qadam baahar  to zahmat jaano,

                               hua fanaa wajood, rahe jo mokhaalif apne,
                               hue shahar badar tum to humari sharafat jaano,
                               
                               kho gaya sahil bhi toofan-e-bahr main,
                               bachaa rahaa gharaunda to uski qudrat jaano,

                               hai jeena muhaal muflisi mein bechain..!
                               hain khushaal hum to uski rahmat jaano.
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«Reply #2 on: April 13, 2011, 01:45:40 PM »
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Bahut Khoob.........................
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«Reply #3 on: April 13, 2011, 01:59:49 PM »
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wah kya baat…
superb poetry…
lekin yaha par 3 toook dikh rhe bhai.
daad dil se
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«Reply #4 on: April 13, 2011, 02:16:16 PM »
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Akhri do ashaar toh behad umda hai..
Waise toh pura kalam hi behad khubsoorat hai..
Applause Applause Applause
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #5 on: April 13, 2011, 03:00:36 PM »
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bahut khub Abji...

badiya...
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«Reply #6 on: April 13, 2011, 06:05:19 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: April 13, 2011, 07:29:31 PM »
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bht khoob adil saheb...
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«Reply #8 on: April 16, 2011, 02:43:11 PM »
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Bahut Khoob.........................

thank you ji
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«Reply #9 on: April 19, 2011, 06:41:35 PM »
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wah kya baat…
superb poetry…
lekin yaha par 3 toook dikh rhe bhai.
daad dil se

thank you nirala ji
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bahut khub Abji...

badiya...

thank you manjum ji
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bht khoob adil saheb...

thank you manzil ji
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thank you suresh ji
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