dooriyan na mohabbat ko mita de~~~ SAAHIl

by salil2002 on August 18, 2009, 07:20:14 AM
Pages: [1] 2  All
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 11584 times)
salil2002
Guest
Reply with quote
bahut baar dooriyon kii wajah se rishte main daraarein aa jaati hai..aise hi ek premi jaate waqt apni prmika se wajah maang raha hai,,,,,,vaada karna chah raha hai kii yeh dooriyaan uski mohabbat ko toh kam nahin karegi .magar kya woh bhi mohabbat itni shiddat se nibha paayegi..asha hai aap sabko pasand aayegi


mera intezaar kar aur mujhe karne kii wajah de
tere dil main kya hai yeh aaj bata de
jaana hai mujhe door ,kya tu seh paayegi yeh doori
kya rahegi hai jaisi tu bas itna bata de

nahin chahta main kii hum door ho toh,darmiyaan doori ho
sirf takraar ho, ikraar ho, aur majboori ho
pyaar ho toh magar aise jaise kaahin chhupa hua
rishte main bachi na koi aas aadhoori ho

hai bada muskil rehna door tujhse
yakeen karna tera mujhpe aur mera tujhpe
magar main yeh vaada karta hoon tujhse
meri subah hogi tujhse aur raat tujhpe

meri baatein sun k tujhko hai bharosa toh jata de
door ja raha hoon, mujhe door jaane kii na sazaa de
chahta hoon mohabbat apni khatir hamesha teri nazron main
kaahin yeh dooriyan na mohabbat ko meri mita de
Logged
punam
Guest
«Reply #1 on: August 18, 2009, 07:29:33 AM »
Reply with quote
wah salil bro..bahut hi acha likha hai aap ne.. Applause Applause Applause
Logged
cara
Guest
«Reply #2 on: August 18, 2009, 08:44:40 AM »
Reply with quote
KYA BAAT HAI     SAAHIL JI........

BAS KUCH MAJBOORIYAN HAI,ISILIYE YEH DOORIYAN HAI-JAANAM,
KHAATI HU KASAM LAUT AAUGI,AISE HI NAHIN TERE NAAM KI PAHENI CHURIYAN HAI-JAANAM.

LAGEY GI TOH TERE NAAM KI HI LAGEY GI,MERE MAATHE PE BINDIYAN-JAANAM,
TUNE HI TOH UDAAHI HAI MERE KHWAABON MAIN AAKAR, MERI NEENDIYAN=JAANAM.

MANA EK DOOSRE SE DOORIYAN HOGI,PAR WO KYUN APNI MOHABBAT KO MITA DE-JAANAM,
APNE DIL TOH EK DUJHE KE KARIB HONGE,TU MUJHKO APNE DIL MAIN BITHA DE-JAANAM.
Logged
Rishi Agarwal
Guest
«Reply #3 on: August 18, 2009, 11:19:41 AM »
Reply with quote
Kya bat h sahil ji apki shayari padh kar to dil me ek dard sa uth gya

Mera intezaar kar aur mujhe karne ki wajah de
Tere dil main kya hai yeh aaj bata de
Jaana hai mujhe door ,kya tu seh paayegi yeh doori
Kya rah payoge mere bina, tu bas itna bata de

Nahin chahta main ki hum door ho to, darmiyaan doori ho
Sirf takraar ho, ikraar ho, aur majboori ho
Pyaar ho to magar aise jaise kaahin chhupa hua
Rishte main bachi na koi aas aadhoori ho

Hai bada muskil rehna door tujhse
Yakeen karna aap mujhpe aur mera tujhpe
Magar main yeh vaada karta hoon tujhse
Meri subah hogi tujhse aur raat tujhpe

Meri baatein sun k tujhko hai bharosa to jata de
Door ja raha hoon, mujhe door jaane kii na sazaa de
Chahta hoon mohabbat apni hamesha teri nazron main
Kahin yeh dooriyan na mohabbat ko meri mita de.........

Mitana h to mita dena meri hasti ko, na mita dena mere pyar ko
Kya gunah kiya humne ki apne itni badi saja di mere pyar ko
Kyu rhte ho humse ap dur, kyu saja dete ho ap mere pyar ko
Hum to mohtaz h apke pyar ke, kyu dur le ja rhe ho mere pyar ko
Aajao ap laut ke aur mita do ye duri aur lauta do mere pyar ko
Logged
punam
Guest
«Reply #4 on: August 18, 2009, 11:22:39 AM »
Reply with quote
Bahut khoob Rishi ji... Applause Applause Applause
Logged
Rishi Agarwal
Guest
«Reply #5 on: August 18, 2009, 12:44:58 PM »
Reply with quote
thnx poonam ji
hows u
Logged
Rishi Agarwal
Guest
«Reply #6 on: August 18, 2009, 01:06:58 PM »
Reply with quote
thnx kash ji apka bahut bahut shukriya
Logged
thegrimreaper
Guest
«Reply #7 on: August 18, 2009, 03:07:18 PM »
Reply with quote
bahut khoob sahil sahab
aapki apni hi ek justju hai
Logged
deepika_divya
Guest
«Reply #8 on: August 18, 2009, 03:14:27 PM »
Reply with quote
Kya baat hai Saahil .. Bahoot Bahoot Khoob aur kamaal ka likha hai .. Bahoot Khoob!

Rishi Ji Bahoot Khoob Saath diya hai .. Good Work!
Logged
Roja
Guest
«Reply #9 on: August 18, 2009, 03:16:49 PM »
Reply with quote
Bahut accha likha hai aapne Saahil dear  Thumbs UP

Rishi Agrawal ji.. kafi dino k baad aapko padna bahut accha laga

Quote
Mitana h to mita dena meri hasti ko, na mita dena mere pyar ko
Kya gunah kiya humne ki apne itni badi saja di mere pyar ko
Kyu rhte ho humse ap dur, kyu saja dete ho ap mere pyar ko
Hum to mohtaz h apke pyar ke, kyu dur le ja rhe ho mere pyar ko
Aajao ap laut ke aur mita do ye duri aur lauta do mere pyar ko

Wonderful  Applause Applause
Logged
Roja
Guest
«Reply #10 on: August 18, 2009, 03:17:42 PM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: cara on August 18, 2009, 08:44:40 AM
KYA BAAT HAI     SAAHIL JI........

BAS KUCH MAJBOORIYAN HAI,ISILIYE YEH DOORIYAN HAI-JAANAM,
KHAATI HU KASAM LAUT AAUGI,AISE HI NAHIN TERE NAAM KI PAHENI CHURIYAN HAI-JAANAM.

LAGEY GI TOH TERE NAAM KI HI LAGEY GI,MERE MAATHE PE BINDIYAN-JAANAM,
TUNE HI TOH UDAAHI HAI MERE KHWAABON MAIN AAKAR, MERI NEENDIYAN=JAANAM.

MANA EK DOOSRE SE DOORIYAN HOGI,PAR WO KYUN APNI MOHABBAT KO MITA DE-JAANAM,
APNE DIL TOH EK DUJHE KE KARIB HONGE,TU MUJHKO APNE DIL MAIN BITHA DE-JAANAM.


Too Good Cara ji  Clapping Smiley
Logged
Rishi Agarwal
Guest
«Reply #11 on: August 18, 2009, 04:37:25 PM »
Reply with quote
bahut bahut shukriya sophi ji and roja ji
Logged
salil2002
Guest
«Reply #12 on: August 19, 2009, 06:44:32 AM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: punam on August 18, 2009, 07:29:33 AM
wah salil bro..bahut hi acha likha hai aap ne.. Applause Applause Applause
Quote from: cara on August 18, 2009, 08:44:40 AM
KYA BAAT HAI     SAAHIL JI........

BAS KUCH MAJBOORIYAN HAI,ISILIYE YEH DOORIYAN HAI-JAANAM,
KHAATI HU KASAM LAUT AAUGI,AISE HI NAHIN TERE NAAM KI PAHENI CHURIYAN HAI-JAANAM.

LAGEY GI TOH TERE NAAM KI HI LAGEY GI,MERE MAATHE PE BINDIYAN-JAANAM,
TUNE HI TOH UDAAHI HAI MERE KHWAABON MAIN AAKAR, MERI NEENDIYAN=JAANAM.

MANA EK DOOSRE SE DOORIYAN HOGI,PAR WO KYUN APNI MOHABBAT KO MITA DE-JAANAM,
APNE DIL TOH EK DUJHE KE KARIB HONGE,TU MUJHKO APNE DIL MAIN BITHA DE-JAANAM.

Quote from: @kaash on August 18, 2009, 01:02:20 PM
bahot behatreen likha hai Sahil dear aapne Applause Applause Applause

Rishi dear aapne bhi acha likha hai Applause Applause Applause

very nice work  icon_thumleft
Quote from: thegrimreaper on August 18, 2009, 03:07:18 PM
bahut khoob sahil sahab
aapki apni hi ek justju hai
Quote from: Sophi on August 18, 2009, 03:14:27 PM
Kya baat hai Saahil .. Bahoot Bahoot Khoob aur kamaal ka likha hai .. Bahoot Khoob!

Rishi Ji Bahoot Khoob Saath diya hai .. Good Work!
Quote from: Roja on August 18, 2009, 03:16:49 PM
Bahut accha likha hai aapne Saahil dear  Thumbs UP

Rishi Agrawal ji.. kafi dino k baad aapko padna bahut accha laga


Wonderful  Applause Applause
bahut bahut shukriya punam sis,roja dear,udit bhai, kaash bhai, sophi(billi),and cara dear beautiful lines
Logged
salil2002
Guest
«Reply #13 on: August 19, 2009, 06:47:59 AM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on August 18, 2009, 11:19:41 AM
Kya bat h sahil ji apki shayari padh kar to dil me ek dard sa uth gya

Mera intezaar kar aur mujhe karne ki wajah de
Tere dil main kya hai yeh aaj bata de
Jaana hai mujhe door ,kya tu seh paayegi yeh doori
Kya rah payoge mere bina, tu bas itna bata de

Nahin chahta main ki hum door ho to, darmiyaan doori ho
Sirf takraar ho, ikraar ho, aur majboori ho
Pyaar ho to magar aise jaise kaahin chhupa hua
Rishte main bachi na koi aas aadhoori ho

Hai bada muskil rehna door tujhse
Yakeen karna aap mujhpe aur mera tujhpe
Magar main yeh vaada karta hoon tujhse
Meri subah hogi tujhse aur raat tujhpe

Meri baatein sun k tujhko hai bharosa to jata de
Door ja raha hoon, mujhe door jaane kii na sazaa de
Chahta hoon mohabbat apni hamesha teri nazron main
Kahin yeh dooriyan na mohabbat ko meri mita de.........

Mitana ho to mita dena meri hasti ko, na mita dena mere pyar ko
Kya gunah kiya humne ki apne itni badi saja di mere pyar ko
Kyu rhte ho humse ap dur, kyu saja dete ho ap mere pyar ko
Hum to mohtaz h apke pyar ke, kyu dur le ja rhe ho mere pyar ko
Aajao ap laut ke aur mita do ye duri aur lauta do mere pyar ko
bahut achche rishi bhai
waise pehle pehle toh maine asmjha kii aapne meri hi lines kyun likh di magar baad main dekha
bahut achche
Logged
madhuwesh
Guest
«Reply #14 on: August 19, 2009, 06:50:38 AM »
Reply with quote
Wah wah Saahil ji,bahut khoob mindblowig creation, icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause :clap:bahut pasand aayee.
Rishi ji,and Cara ji aap dono ne bhi bahut khoob likha. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Logged
Pages: [1] 2  All
ReplyPrint
Yoindia ShayariAdab > Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari > Miscellaneous Shayri > Topic: dooriyan na mohabbat ko mita de~~~ SAAHIl
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
User
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
April 25, 2024, 05:52:03 AM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
Jaan Pe Jaan Ko
by Iqtedar
[April 23, 2024, 09:54:09 AM]
Firaaq - A deadly love ta...
by ASIF
[April 22, 2024, 01:50:33 PM]
Sab thik hain? -Charan
by Charanjeet_Kaur
[April 04, 2024, 04:49:28 PM]
Mutthi
by vivekpohre
[April 02, 2024, 12:27:12 PM]
Hifazat - a thriller love...
by ASIF
[March 24, 2024, 04:34:54 AM]
BEDARD - (A Romantic Thri...
by ASIF
[March 24, 2024, 04:30:44 AM]
Anjaan - A THRILL LOVE TA...
by ASIF
[March 24, 2024, 04:26:39 AM]
Geraft - (Sequel to "Beda...
by ASIF
[March 23, 2024, 08:50:46 AM]
Mar gaye Dil- e - Nadaan
by Abul Asad
[March 21, 2024, 07:59:38 PM]
जंगल में शबरी के (C-SET)
by MANOJ6568
[March 17, 2024, 02:01:29 PM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.174 seconds with 24 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8498 Real Poets and poetry admirer