Eh Mere Janam-Daata Mujhe Humesha Saath Rakhna "Khwaish"

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Yeh Kavita har uss Maa-baap Ke Liye Hai
Jo Kabhi-Kabhi Apne Bete Aur Beti  mein Fark Kar jaate hai..
meri Sache Dil Se Yeh Ardaas Hai Aur yeh benti hai har ek Se  ke Beta Aur Beti mein
Kabhi koi Insaan Fark Naa Kare..Main iss kavita Ko Ek Beti(Ladki) Ki
nazar se Likh Raha Hoon..Yeh uske Dil Ki Baatein hai..
Iss kavita Ko zaroor Padhiyega..


Mujhe Apne Godd mein Khilaane Wale
Mera Haath thaam kar mere saath Chalne Wale
Meri Ek muskaan par Khud Ko Lutaane wale
Mere Aansuo par khud bhi Ro jaane Wale
Aur Koi nahi Mere Maa-Baap Hi Hai
Main Jo Bhi Hoon Sab Aap Dono Ke sadke
mere Liye Sab Kuch Aap Hi Hai....

          Par..

Dil mein Mere Yeh Baat Aati hai
Beta-Beti mein Duniya Fark kyon kar jaati hai
Main Sochti hoon Agar Aisa Ho Ke Beta Ghar Aangan Chodd Kar jaaye
Aur Ek Beti Hi ghar Ko Chalye
To kya Ek Bete Ko paraya Dhan Kaha Jaata
Aur Kya Ek Beti Ko Bete Jaisa Apnaya jaata
Iss Baat par Mujhe Duniyadaari par Ek Sharm Si Aayi
Ek Beti Hi kyon Hai sab Ke Liye paraai....


Mere Haathon par Jab Kisi Ke Naam Ki Mehndi Lagti Hai
Meri Zimmedariyan,Meri Duniya Pal-pal Mein Badalti hai

Ek Ladki Hi Hai Jo Paraye Ghar Ko Apna samajkar usse Basaati Hai
Kisi Ki Beti kisi Ke Ghar Ki Bahoo Bankar Izzat kamati Hai

Par Eh Maa Tu Naa Kehna Mujhe Kabhi Parai
Kitna Bhi Door Rahoon Par Keh Laaungi sirf Teri Hi Parchai...

Main Door Rehkar Bhi Aap Sab Se Door Nahi
Meri har Soch,har Pal mein Aap Sab Shaamil Ho!!!
Kya Aisa Koi Shaks Hai jo Waqt Ke Haathon Majboor nahi

Bas!!! Meri Itni Si ek Baat Yaad Rakhna!!!
Eh Mere Janam-Daata mujhe Humesha Apne Saath Rakhna..

Iss Soch Ke Liye..Thankyou Soooooooo much Pooja!!!!

                   ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: October 04, 2010, 12:55:42 PM »
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i hav no words to say anything Khwaish ji......aise hi khuch zazbaaton k saath maine khuch din pehle ek poem likhi thi......KYu hu mai praayi Maa......wo saare zazbaat....wo dard chalak raha hai iss poem mein.....i dnt knw k mai iss poem ki taarif karu ya aapka shukriya ada karu......such...i hav no words....this time,tears in my eyes....abhi waqt ki kami hai ,yha likhungi zarur....
really a awsme creation.....
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«Reply #2 on: October 04, 2010, 02:05:16 PM »
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Khwaish Dost, bahaut gehre jazbaat aur dil choone wale ehsaas likhein hai apne iss nazm main..Ap hamesha sach likte ho, kuch alag likte ho..bahaut bahaut khoob..Haan kash duniya wale balke maa-baap beta beti main fark na karein..BAhaut khoob..

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«Reply #3 on: October 04, 2010, 02:11:40 PM »
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khwaish ji..aapki ye kavita padhkar kuch sawaal mere man me bhi uthe..yahan pesha karti hun shaayd jawab mil ajyen.......

Uljhe uljhe se kuch ankahe se sawal hain mere
Bachpan  se jo mere dil me palte rehte hain
Pehle bhi aksar main khudse pucha karti thi
Jawab kabhi nahin mujhe magar mil pate hain..??

Maa paa ki main laadli rahi dil ki rani bani rahi
Har pal unke pyaar k chhaon me hi to main pali
Bhaiya bada shararati tha satata rehta tha sabko
Lekin fir bhi kyun usko kabhi kisiki dant nahin padi..??

Raat raat bhar bahar ghumta doston sang batiyata
Mobile k bill se uske papa ka sir ghum ghum jata
Lekin mere sirf mahine me ek bar picture chale jane se
Fizul kharchi kaise ho jati… ye main kabhi samjh nahin pati..??


Bhaia to jo chaahe khaye uski pasand ka bane sab kuch
Mujhe sabji na bhaaye to kyun mujhe sasural me mushkil hogi
Bhaiya to tha padhai me dabbu fir bhi usko the milte gift
Main to har bar hi awwal aati fir bhi kyun kabhi shabashi milii nahin..??


Mera bhi dil karta main bhi padhun aur sikhun kuch alag
Lekin keh diya gaya teri shaadi me karenge sab kharch
Bhaiya ki ichcha na thi fir bhi use bheja padhne London
Uski iss naakami pe bhi dosh meri kundli me hi aaya nazar..??

Bhai pe bhari hai ye kehke mujhe hamesha tana diya
Daadi ne na kabhi mujhe bhaiya jitna ek bar bhi sneeh diya
Dadaji hi the jo mujhe chahte, karte the wo meri badaai
Lekin yahan bhi dadi meri unko kehti na bigado ise
Aakhir  to ye apni nahin.. hai ye to hamesha se parai..!!


Jana hai ise duje ghar aur sikhne hain unke reeti riwaaz
Rehne do ise aise hi na chadhao ise apne sir pe sarkaar
Par uss pal to main thi na unki apni.. chhoti si nanhi si jaan
Fir kyun shaadi k pehle hi paraya kar diya tha tumne mujhe maa..??


Ye hi kuch sawaal hain mere man me jo kai saalon se uthte hain
Nahin inka matlab koi par fir bhi dil me bht ye chubhte hain
Koi na de sakega inn sawalon ka mujhko jawab ye janti hun main
Fir bhi maa paa main aapse ek bar  puchhna chahti hun main....


Kyun hun main aapke liye paraayee jab aapke hi khun se bani hun main…?Huh?


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«Reply #4 on: October 04, 2010, 02:50:39 PM »
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Khawahish jee Aadaab!

Feelings and expression are realy mindblowing...
Hume padhte waqt aisa kahiN bhi nahi laga ke yeH feelings kisi male ki likhi hai.....

Aapne behad khoob likha hai daad kabool kijiye...

Likhate rahiye....
Khush rahiye.....
Khuda Hafez...... Usual Smile         

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«Reply #5 on: October 04, 2010, 04:08:08 PM »
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i hav no words to say anything Khwaish ji......aise hi khuch zazbaaton k saath maine khuch din pehle ek poem likhi thi......KYu hu mai praayi Maa......wo saare zazbaat....wo dard chalak raha hai iss poem mein.....i dnt knw k mai iss poem ki taarif karu ya aapka shukriya ada karu......such...i hav no words....this time,tears in my eyes....abhi waqt ki kami hai ,yha likhungi zarur....
really a awsme creation.....


 Thankyou ! Thankyou ! Thankyou !

Pooja, Aapne Isse Dil Se padha, yeh Jaankar Bahut Khush Hoon..
Pooja, Iss Soch Par main Jo bhi kuch likh Paaya Hoon, Aapki Hi Badaulat,Aap Jaante Hai..bas Ek baar kahunga ke Isse padhkar Roye Naa..Yeh kavita ke Ehsaas Ko Samajhne ke liye Aap Ka Tehhhhhhhhhh dillllllllll Se Shukriya icon_flower

Besabri se Intezaar rahega aapke Lekhni ka..zyaada intezaar naa Karwayiega tongue3
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«Reply #6 on: October 04, 2010, 04:25:51 PM »
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Khwaish Dost, bahaut gehre jazbaat aur dil choone wale ehsaas likhein hai apne iss nazm main..Ap hamesha sach likte ho, kuch alag likte ho..bahaut bahaut khoob..Haan kash duniya wale balke maa-baap beta beti main fark na karein..BAhaut khoob..

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Bahut Bahut Shukriya Bhai rahum,Humesha se saath Nibhaate rehne ka..aapne inn ehsaas ko mehsoos kiya..wahi bahut hai..

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«Reply #7 on: October 04, 2010, 04:29:35 PM »
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khwaish ji..aapki ye kavita padhkar kuch sawaal mere man me bhi uthe..yahan pesha karti hun shaayd jawab mil ajyen.......

Uljhe uljhe se kuch ankahe se sawal hain mere
Bachpan  se jo mere dil me palte rehte hain
Pehle bhi aksar main khudse pucha karti thi
Jawab kabhi nahin mujhe magar mil pate hain..??

Maa paa ki main laadli rahi dil ki rani bani rahi
Har pal unke pyaar k chhaon me hi to main pali
Bhaiya bada shararati tha satata rehta tha sabko
Lekin fir bhi kyun usko kabhi kisiki dant nahin padi..??

Raat raat bhar bahar ghumta doston sang batiyata
Mobile k bill se uske papa ka sir ghum ghum jata
Lekin mere sirf mahine me ek bar picture chale jane se
Fizul kharchi kaise ho jati… ye main kabhi samjh nahin pati..??


Bhaia to jo chaahe khaye uski pasand ka bane sab kuch
Mujhe sabji na bhaaye to kyun mujhe sasural me mushkil hogi
Bhaiya to tha padhai me dabbu fir bhi usko the milte gift
Main to har bar hi awwal aati fir bhi kyun kabhi shabashi milii nahin..??


Mera bhi dil karta main bhi padhun aur sikhun kuch alag
Lekin keh diya gaya teri shaadi me karenge sab kharch
Bhaiya ki ichcha na thi fir bhi use bheja padhne London
Uski iss naakami pe bhi dosh meri kundli me hi aaya nazar..??

Bhai pe bhari hai ye kehke mujhe hamesha tana diya
Daadi ne na kabhi mujhe bhaiya jitna ek bar bhi sneeh diya
Dadaji hi the jo mujhe chahte, karte the wo meri badaai
Lekin yahan bhi dadi meri unko kehti na bigado ise
Aakhir  to ye apni nahin.. hai ye to hamesha se parai..!!


Jana hai ise duje ghar aur sikhne hain unke reeti riwaaz
Rehne do ise aise hi na chadhao ise apne sir pe sarkaar
Par uss pal to main thi na unki apni.. chhoti si nanhi si jaan
Fir kyun shaadi k pehle hi paraya kar diya tha tumne mujhe maa..??


Ye hi kuch sawaal hain mere man me jo kai saalon se uthte hain
Nahin inka matlab koi par fir bhi dil me bht ye chubhte hain
Koi na de sakega inn sawalon ka mujhko jawab ye janti hun main
Fir bhi maa paa main aapse ek bar  puchhna chahti hun main....


Kyun hun main aapke liye paraayee jab aapke hi khun se bani hun main…?Huh?



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«Reply #8 on: October 04, 2010, 04:44:23 PM »
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Bahut bahut Aur bahut khoob Anuji..aisa laga jaise ek zindagi khud chal rahi hai mere saamne..Par maine aapka abhi ek comment padha ke yeh aapne kabhi mehoos nahi kiya bas yeh ek kalpana hai..Ek kalpana Hokar Bhi bahut Suljhi hui peshkash hai yeh Anuji.. bahut Ache. Thumbs UP

haan khwaish ji ek kalpana ko ruup dena bht aasan hai lekin aap beeti pe likhna bht hi mushkil..kyunki aap samjh nahin paate k kin ehsaason ko bayaan karne se aapko zyada dard hoga...isly kalpana ko easily likha ja sakta hai...
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«Reply #9 on: October 04, 2010, 04:56:21 PM »
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True feelings from the heart... Khwaish Ji.. Very true feelings..
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«Reply #10 on: October 05, 2010, 08:03:53 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI    KHWAISH JI.....

EH MERE JANAM-DAATA MUJHE HAMESHA SAATH RAKHNA
BETI SAMAJH KAR BIDAI KE BAAD MUJHSE RISHTA TOD MAT DENA

MANA ME AAPKA BETA NAHI BETI HOON PAR MUJHE PARAYI MAT SAMJHNA
AAP SE DOOR RAHE KAR BHI AAPKE DIL ME HOON KABHI YAAD KARKE DEKHNA

BETA AAPKE SAATH RAHE KAR BHI AAPKO SAATH NAHI DETA
BETI AAPSE DOOR RAHE KAR BHI AAPKE SAATH HAI CHAHE AAZMAKAR DEKHNA

EH MERE JANAM-DAATA MUJHE HAMESHA SAATH RAKHNA
BETI SAMAJH KAR BIDAI KE BAAD MUJHSE RISHTA TOD MAT DENA....
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«Reply #11 on: October 05, 2010, 08:05:43 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI    KHWAISH JI.....

EH MERE JANAM-DAATA MUJHE HAMESHA SAATH RAKHNA
BETI SAMAJH KAR BIDAI KE BAAD MUJHSE RISHTA TOD MAT DENA

MANA ME AAPKA BETA NAHI BETI HOON PAR MUJHE PARAYI MAT SAMJHNA
AAP SE DOOR RAHE KAR BHI AAPKE DIL ME HOON KABHI YAAD KARKE DEKHNA

BETA AAPKE SAATH RAHE KAR BHI AAPKO SAATH NAHI DETA
BETI AAPSE DOOR RAHE KAR BHI AAPKE SAATH HAI CHAHE AAZMAKAR DEKHNA

EH MERE JANAM-DAATA MUJHE HAMESHA SAATH RAKHNA
BETI SAMAJH KAR BIDAI KE BAAD MUJHSE RISHTA TOD MAT DENA....

Bahut bahut Khoob Caraji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #12 on: October 05, 2010, 08:15:44 AM »
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hmm ek achha topic par likhi he apne khwaish bhaii..
or bahut achhi ttarah jajbaton ko rang diyaa..

woh sab to theek he ki maa baap apne bachcho me bhoole se kabhi fark kar jate he...par shayad ham-me -se kabhi kisine ye socha he ki ham jaan boojhkar maa- maa me fark kar baithte hein...

misaal ke liye ek mahashay maa durga ki pooja kar rahe the mandir me ..or door khadi unki mata unhe kuchh puchh rahi thi..aap soch sakte he ek taraf ek maa ki pooja kar rahe the or dusri taraf dusri maa ko bahut buri tarah jawaab diya tha .....

chaliye badhiya..apne achha likha he~
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hmm ek achha topic par likhi he apne khwaish bhaii..
or bahut achhi ttarah jajbaton ko rang diyaa..

woh sab to theek he ki maa baap apne bachcho me bhoole se kabhi fark kar jate he...par shayad ham-me -se kabhi kisine ye socha he ki ham jaan boojhkar maa- maa me fark kar baithte hein...

misaal ke liye ek mahashay maa durga ki pooja kar rahe the mandir me ..or door khadi unki mata unhe kuchh puchh rahi thi..aap soch sakte he ek taraf ek maa ki pooja kar rahe the or dusri taraf dusri maa ko bahut buri tarah jawaab diya tha .....

chaliye badhiya..apne achha likha he~


Abhi Ji Aapka Teh Dil Se Shukriya Mere Bhai Jo Apane Inn Jazbaaton Ko samjha..Par mere Bhai, Mujhe Aapki likhi Baat Samaj nahi Aayi..Aapne Baat Ko wahi Rok Diya..Umeed Karta Hoon aap apni baat ko kuch samjha payenge..shukriya
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«Reply #14 on: October 05, 2010, 08:44:24 AM »
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Abhi Ji Aapka Teh Dil Se Shukriya Mere Bhai Jo Apane Inn Jazbaaton Ko samjha..Par mere Bhai, Mujhe Aapki likhi Baat Samaj nahi Aayi..Aapne Baat Ko wahi Rok Diya..Umeed Karta Hoon aap apni baat ko kuch samjha payenge..shukriya
samajhne ko kuchh raha nhai khwaish bhaii..

ek maa ki pooja karo or dusri maa ko jawab do ...maa ko maa se alag samajhne kya matlab he...maa to maa he naaa fir chahe kisi ki bhi hoo..poore sansar ki ya apki apni~
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