Ek Dil Naam Ki Cheez "Khwaish"

by khwaish on June 27, 2011, 09:24:41 AM
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"Lot's Of Troubles In This World Would
Disappear If People Would Learn To Talk "To" Each Other
Rather Than Talking "About" Each Other"

Samajdhar Log kehte Hai ke Agar Aapke Dil mein ko sawaal Hai Yaa Koi Shikwa To
Ek Duje Se Baat Kar Leni Chahiye, Par Aksar Hum Aisa Nahi kar paate,
Kisi Insaan ke Mooh Par naa kehkar
Hum Uske peeth peeche Uski Baatein Karne Lag jaate Hai..
Aisa Hi vaakya Kal mere saath Beeta
Kuch Dil Ki Baatein Likh Raha Hoon,Apna Waqt zaroor Dijiyega...


Apne Har Pal ka Hisaab Rakhta Hoon
Paas Apne Zindagi Ki Kitaab Rakhta Hoon

Sirf Andhero Mein Rehne Ka Kaayal Nahi Hoon Main
 Apni Nazron Mein Main Aftaab Rakhta Hoon

kisi Ko Rota Dekhkar Main Bhi Ro Deta Hoon!!!
Jaanta Hoon Yeh Ek Aadat Main Kharaab Rakhta Hoon

Main Acha Hoon, Bura Hoon Jo Bhi Hai Mere Saamne Kaho
Chup Rehta Hoon Par main Bhi Dil Mein Sailaab Rakhta Hoon

Auron Ko Dekhkar Hassi Se Khilkhilane Wale
Kabhi Humse Bhi Muskuraakar Mil!!!
Ek "Dil" Naam Ki Cheez Main Bhi Janaab Rakhta Hoon

          ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: June 27, 2011, 09:39:29 AM »
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"Lot's Of Troubles In This World Would
Disappear If People Would Learn To Talk "To" Each Other
Rather Than Talking "About" Each Other"

Samajdhar Log kehte Hai ke Agar Aapke Dil mein ko sawaal Hai Yaa Koi Shikwa To
Ek Duje Se Baat Kar Leni Chahiye, Par Aksar Hum Aisa Nahi kar paate,
Kisi Insaan ke Mooh Par naa kehkar
Hum Uske peeth peeche Uski Baatein Karne Lag jaate Hai..
Aisa Hi vaakya Kal mere saath Beeta
Kuch Dil Ki Baatein Likh Raha Hoon,Apna Waqt zaroor Dijiyega...


Apne Har Pal ka Hisaab Rakhta Hoon
Paas Apne Zindagi Ki Kitaab Rakhta Hoon

Sirf Andhero Mein Rehne Ka Kaayal Nahi Hoon Main
 Apni Nazron Mein Main Aftaab Rakhta Hoon

kisi Ko Rota Dekhkar Main Bhi Ro Deta Hoon!!!
Jaanta Hoon Yeh Ek Aadat Main Kharaab Rakhta Hoon

Main Acha Hoon, Bura Hoon Jo Bhi Hai Mere Saamne Kaho
Chup Rehta Hoon Par main Bhi Dil Mein Sailaab Rakhta Hoon

Auron Ko Dekhkar Hassi Se Khilkhilane Wale
Kabhi Humse Bhi Muskuraakar Mil!!!
Ek "Dil" Naam Ki Cheez Main Bhi Janaab Rakhta Hoon

          ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


bahut khub khawaish ji ache kalaam se bazm ko nawaza hai
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«Reply #2 on: June 27, 2011, 12:10:02 PM »
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Apne Har Pal ka Hisaab Rakhta Hoon
Paas Apne Zindagi Ki Kitaab Rakhta Hoon


Good One ... Khwaish Ji

Chup Rehta Hoon Par main Bhi Dil Mein Sailaab Rakhta Hoon

Vry Nice Line ...... !
Very Impressive Creation ... Dil Se Daad ... Applause Applause Applause

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«Reply #3 on: June 27, 2011, 01:32:22 PM »
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khwahish ji... bahut khubsurat peshkash hai aapki... bahut khoob... yunhi likhte rehiye... khuda aapko khush rakhe...

Intezar !
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«Reply #4 on: June 28, 2011, 08:21:33 AM »
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"Lot's Of Troubles In This World Would
Disappear If People Would Learn To Talk "To" Each Other
Rather Than Talking "About" Each Other"

Samajdhar Log kehte Hai ke Agar Aapke Dil mein ko sawaal Hai Yaa Koi Shikwa To
Ek Duje Se Baat Kar Leni Chahiye, Par Aksar Hum Aisa Nahi kar paate,
Kisi Insaan ke Mooh Par naa kehkar
Hum Uske peeth peeche Uski Baatein Karne Lag jaate Hai..
Aisa Hi vaakya Kal mere saath Beeta
Kuch Dil Ki Baatein Likh Raha Hoon,Apna Waqt zaroor Dijiyega...


Apne Har Pal ka Hisaab Rakhta Hoon
Paas Apne Zindagi Ki Kitaab Rakhta Hoon

Sirf Andhero Mein Rehne Ka Kaayal Nahi Hoon Main
 Apni Nazron Mein Main Aftaab Rakhta Hoon

kisi Ko Rota Dekhkar Main Bhi Ro Deta Hoon!!!
Jaanta Hoon Yeh Ek Aadat Main Kharaab Rakhta Hoon

Main Acha Hoon, Bura Hoon Jo Bhi Hai Mere Saamne Kaho
Chup Rehta Hoon Par main Bhi Dil Mein Sailaab Rakhta Hoon

Auron Ko Dekhkar Hassi Se Khilkhilane Wale
Kabhi Humse Bhi Muskuraakar Mil!!!
Ek "Dil" Naam Ki Cheez Main Bhi Janaab Rakhta Hoon

          ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


bahut khoob khawaish ji



 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: June 28, 2011, 11:54:53 AM »
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bahut khub khawaish ji ache kalaam se bazm ko nawaza hai


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«Reply #6 on: June 28, 2011, 01:26:19 PM »
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bahut achhi hai ye bhi kavita khwaish ji.
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«Reply #7 on: June 28, 2011, 02:33:00 PM »
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excelent creation khwaish ji...
sply last one...
toooo.... good...
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«Reply #8 on: June 28, 2011, 03:50:31 PM »
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Apne Har Pal ka Hisaab Rakhta Hoon
Paas Apne Zindagi Ki Kitaab Rakhta Hoon


Good One ... Khwaish Ji

Chup Rehta Hoon Par main Bhi Dil Mein Sailaab Rakhta Hoon

Vry Nice Line ...... !
Very Impressive Creation ... Dil Se Daad ... Applause Applause Applause



Aapka Teh Dil Se Shukriya Nareshji..

Aapne Apna Waqt Diya Yeh Jaankar Behad Khushi Hui Hai.. icon_flower
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«Reply #9 on: June 28, 2011, 03:55:42 PM »
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Khwaish Bhai aapke Lafzon Ko Taareef Me Kya Likhu.. ab to Alfaaz Bhi Kam Padhne lag gaye Hain.. Phir se ek Umda aur Lajawab Peshkash.. jo sochne par majboor kar de.. Aakhiri Jumla to Bassssss... Dil Chhoo gaya.. Bahut Khooooob..  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft

Daad Kubool karen dil se..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley




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khwahish ji... bahut khubsurat peshkash hai aapki... bahut khoob... yunhi likhte rehiye... khuda aapko khush rakhe...

Intezar !

Aapka Bahuttttt bahutttt Shukriya Intezar Ji..

Yuhi Saath Dete Rahiyega.. icon_flower
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«Reply #11 on: June 28, 2011, 05:53:49 PM »
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excellent creation khwaish ji.....dil me kai dabe ehsason ko zabaan di h aapne........ek dil ko chhuti rachna h ye aapki......
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«Reply #12 on: June 28, 2011, 07:21:13 PM »
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"Lot's Of Troubles In This World Would
Disappear If People Would Learn To Talk "To" Each Other
Rather Than Talking "About" Each Other"

Samajdhar Log kehte Hai ke Agar Aapke Dil mein ko sawaal Hai Yaa Koi Shikwa To
Ek Duje Se Baat Kar Leni Chahiye, Par Aksar Hum Aisa Nahi kar paate,
Kisi Insaan ke Mooh Par naa kehkar
Hum Uske peeth peeche Uski Baatein Karne Lag jaate Hai..
Aisa Hi vaakya Kal mere saath Beeta
Kuch Dil Ki Baatein Likh Raha Hoon,Apna Waqt zaroor Dijiyega...


Apne Har Pal ka Hisaab Rakhta Hoon
Paas Apne Zindagi Ki Kitaab Rakhta Hoon

Sirf Andhero Mein Rehne Ka Kaayal Nahi Hoon Main
 Apni Nazron Mein Main Aftaab Rakhta Hoon

kisi Ko Rota Dekhkar Main Bhi Ro Deta Hoon!!!
Jaanta Hoon Yeh Ek Aadat Main Kharaab Rakhta Hoon

Main Acha Hoon, Bura Hoon Jo Bhi Hai Mere Saamne Kaho
Chup Rehta Hoon Par main Bhi Dil Mein Sailaab Rakhta Hoon

Auron Ko Dekhkar Hassi Se Khilkhilane Wale
Kabhi Humse Bhi Muskuraakar Mil!!!
Ek "Dil" Naam Ki Cheez Main Bhi Janaab Rakhta Hoon

          ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

behtrin khwaish ji....bahut khoob....khuch zyada kehna mushkil hai.....
par khud ko kehne se rok bhi nahi pa rahi...khuch likhne jaa rahi hu.....



Bas ek yahi tha jo hum kar naa paaye
Na koi gila tha na koi shikwa...
Khuch ghar kar gya tha dil mein
Jo tujhe batla naa paaye

Zindagi ki kitaab k chand panne palat kar dekhna
Laal syaa_hi se likhe khuch panne hoge,jinhe hum dobara likh na paaye

Naa zaahir karna khrab aadton k kisse kisi ko
Hairatt hogi jaankar varna, k gairon k sang rone waale...
ek apne k aansu pehchan na paaye

Aaj rang wahi hai,kaagaz wahi hai,kalam wahi hai
Bas badal gaye hai toh panne zindagi ki kitaab k..
Jise ab talak hum palat hi na paaye
Apni hi zidd mein apne sukh-chain gawaaye

Bas ek yahi tha jo hum kar naa paaye
Tere dost bankar bhi tere dil ko samajh na paaye

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«Reply #13 on: June 29, 2011, 08:02:21 AM »
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bahut khoob khawaish ji



 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Aapka tehhhh Dillll Se Shukriya Sheba Ji.. icon_flower icon_flower

Par Aapne Iss Baar Apna Koi Sher Nahi Kaha.Huh?

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«Reply #14 on: June 30, 2011, 07:47:31 AM »
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bahut achhi hai ye bhi kavita khwaish ji.
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Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya Sureshji icon_flower
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