ek din aor tanha nikal gaya.....

by Naya_Daur on April 15, 2007, 04:52:50 AM
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gir rahe the ashQ ,jab dekha maine ke haseen najara
mehndi lagwa rahi thi koi,pass mein tha uska mehboob payaara

jaise jaise uske hathon mein mehndi sajje ja rahi thi
uske dilbar ke chehre par hassi khilli ja rahi thi

ek pal toh yeh sab dekh kar main mann hi mann khoob khila
lekin hosh aate hi,khud ko maine duniya mein khud ko akela gina

bas gir gaye ashQ ,phir na sambhal payi iss hijar ki dhara
akele phir aage chala gaya,ek din aor tanha nikal gaya humara....
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«Reply #1 on: April 15, 2007, 05:03:27 AM »
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wonderful....full of emotions.... good job ND JI
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«Reply #2 on: April 15, 2007, 09:08:01 AM »
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nice writings ND!!
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«Reply #3 on: April 15, 2007, 04:26:27 PM »
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Thanks Pooja n Ricky !!!
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«Reply #4 on: April 16, 2007, 03:38:39 AM »
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Tanha hai tu wahan, tanha yaha bhi din raat hai
sath rah mere sathia, lambi abhi bahoot yah raat hai
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«Reply #5 on: April 16, 2007, 03:57:30 AM »
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sach kaha pankhuri ji ...


Lambhi raatein akele gujar nahi hoti
bina hath thame,har baat poori nahi hoti

mushkilein bohaat hai, kuch teri taraf,kuch meri taraf
par bina sath ke koi bhi uljhan ,suljhan nahi hoti
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«Reply #6 on: April 16, 2007, 04:00:58 AM »
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bahoot sahi kaha BD ji.....

sulajh jayegi her uljhan, bas sath rahe
hai farz kai jeevan ke, bas yah yaad rahe
kat jayega her rasta, ykin ka sath rahe
main hu teri, tu hai mera, bas yah vishwaas rahe
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«Reply #7 on: April 16, 2007, 04:16:40 AM »
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Farz tujhe nibhane se kabhi maine nahi roka
hai kuch rishta bhi apna aaisa,jo hoga nahi undekha
karu yakeen tujh par wohi,kuch aaisi baat kar
manga nahi saboot tere payaar ka,par mujhse tu izhar kar
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«Reply #8 on: April 16, 2007, 04:22:10 AM »
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Ikraar-e-izhaar, her pal tujhko samjh ayega
shabdo ka hai khail, dil se pard, samjh ayega
ruthna na mujhse kabhi, yah dil toot jayega
imtihaan hai yah tera-mera, waqat nikal jayega
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«Reply #9 on: April 16, 2007, 04:25:43 AM »
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imithan ka lamha tere vishwash par nikalega
main hu sirf tera,yeh na jaane tu kab samjhega
nadaani mein na jaane kitne zakhm diye tumne
har zakhm bharne mein ,kuch toh waqt bhi lagega
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«Reply #10 on: April 16, 2007, 04:33:43 AM »
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wah.. bahoot khoob..

her jakham aa tera mita du
bhula duniya ko, tujko gale laga lu
kuch der sune sirf dhadkano ki juban
her ek doori ko ajj mitta du
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«Reply #11 on: April 16, 2007, 04:37:17 AM »
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GOOD JOB BD ji and Pankhuri !!
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«Reply #12 on: April 16, 2007, 05:43:49 AM »
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ND aur Pankhuri

Too good !

Mazaa aa gaya padh kar ! Wah =D>
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«Reply #13 on: April 16, 2007, 08:40:00 AM »
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Thanks Pooja ji... Rajbir ji :D
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«Reply #14 on: April 17, 2007, 03:27:48 PM »
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wow bohat hi acha likha ND ji n pankhuri,gr8 work guys.
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