Ek fasana...Geet...

by brokenbyluv on May 18, 2011, 08:20:08 AM
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Tumhe yad hai tumne ek bar mujhse kaha,
ki tumhe merra tanha rehna acha nhi lagta,

aur jawaban mein maine kaha tha,
ki main isi haal mein khush hu,

phir tumne acha kaha aur tum kuch sochne lage,
tum jante ho us din maine tumse jhuth kaha tha,

main tumse sun'na chahti thi ki merre rehte tum tnha nhi rahogi,
ab tanhai ka dard aur nhi sahogi,

per main janti thi ki tum mujhse kuch nhi kahoge,
kyunki khud tumhari zindgi tumhare hath mein nhi hai,

main tumhare sath rehte hue bhi tanha rehne lagi,
chupchap hi har dard ko sehene lagi,

darti thi tumpe zaahir karne se ki merra haal behaal hai,
hamare milan ab b merre liye sawal hai,

tumhari muskurahat mein main apna har gum bhula deti,
muskurahat ka naam dekar apni ankho ko rula leti,

aur aaj dekho na kitni majbur ho gyi hu main,
mhbt mein wafa nibhate nibhate toot k choor ho gyi hu main,

main ab bhi tumse kuch maang nhi rahi hu,
bus apne dil ka haal tumhe bata rahi hu,

tumhare liye merri tou har dum ek hi dua rehti hai,
tum jahan raho khush raho merre dil ki har sada kehti hai...ameen...
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«Reply #1 on: May 19, 2011, 10:08:05 AM »
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geet……
aapki ye post ek letter jaisa laga…
samajhnewale jan payenge ki ye koi shayri nai hai…
bas dil ke zazbat aur ehsaas hain…

bhagwaan aapko khus rakhen…
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«Reply #2 on: May 19, 2011, 04:56:42 PM »
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geet……
aapki ye post ek letter jaisa laga…
samajhnewale jan payenge ki ye koi shayri nai hai…
bas dil ke zazbat aur ehsaas hain…

bhagwaan aapko khus rakhen…


Bahut shukriya nirala ji..
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«Reply #3 on: May 20, 2011, 12:09:09 AM »
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bahut khub geetji.... dil main utar gai aapki rachna.... uff... kya ehasas hai...... khub............
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«Reply #4 on: May 20, 2011, 07:15:26 AM »
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bahut khub geetji.... dil main utar gai aapki rachna.... uff... kya ehasas hai...... khub............

Bahut shukriya manju mann ji...
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«Reply #5 on: May 20, 2011, 07:20:27 AM »
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Eh Nazm Kisi Di Tareef Di mohtaaj nahi Kyonki Eh Dil Diyan gallan Ne..Har lafz Nu Mehsoos Kita Jaa Sakda Hai..

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat!!!!!

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«Reply #6 on: May 20, 2011, 07:32:35 AM »
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Eh Nazm Kisi Di Tareef Di mohtaaj nahi Kyonki Eh Dil Diyan gallan Ne..Har lafz Nu Mehsoos Kita Jaa Sakda Hai..

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat!!!!!

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shukriya khwaish ji..
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«Reply #7 on: May 21, 2011, 11:41:29 AM »
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Bahut Khub Brokenbyluv Ji...


Shad o Aabad Rahiye...

~Shihab~

Bahut shukriya shihab ji..
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