Ek gulab ki hasrat...Geet...

by brokenbyluv on March 02, 2011, 10:18:49 PM
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Adaab dosto,

Yu tou har gulab ki tehni mein kante hote hai per merri ye kavita zindgi k ek pehelu ki hai jise maine gulab ki chaht aur kanto ki chhubhan k dard se bayan kiya hai..umeed hai aap sab ko pasand aayegi..





Merri hasrat ek aese gulab ki hai,
jiski tehni mein kante hi kante hai,

jab bhi hath badha kar use chhune jati hu
ek na ek kanta mujhe chubh jata hai,

jab tak main us kante k dard se ubharti hu,
vo gulab apni khubsurati se mujhe phir lubhata hai,

haule se apni pankhudiyo se chhukar,
merre dard ko thodi raahat pahuchata hai,

main uske ehsas mein kuch waqt kho jati hu,
per hawa sang beheta merra nasib mujhe sach ka aaina dikhata hai,

uski hifazat k liye bane kante merri raah rok lete hai,
sach bhi tou hai kanto k bina gulab adhura nazar aata hai,

us gulab ki khushbu mujhe chhuti har fiza se aati hai,
jo siwae merre har mehfil ki raunak badhata ha.........





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«Reply #1 on: March 02, 2011, 10:24:41 PM »
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geet uffffffffffffffffff laajawaab crewation hai ye tumhari ab tak ki best post lagi ye mujhe........
waise bhi roses meri kamzori hain aur aaj unke bare me jo meri soch hi wahi yahan padhkar ajeeb sa ehsaas hua bht ajeeb......

sach me tumse to milna hoga..koi insaan itna eksa kaise soch sakte hain yaar.......
hats off to u for this wonderful poem....
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«Reply #2 on: March 02, 2011, 10:29:08 PM »
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geet uffffffffffffffffff laajawaab crewation hai ye tumhari ab tak ki best post lagi ye mujhe........
waise bhi roses meri kamzori hain aur aaj unke bare me jo meri soch hi wahi yahan padhkar ajeeb sa ehsaas hua bht ajeeb......

sach me tumse to milna hoga..koi insaan itna eksa kaise soch sakte hain yaar.......
hats off to u for this wonderful poem....


Bahut bahut shukriya kasak ji zindgi ne chaha tou zarur aur jald hi apse mulaqat hogi..take care...
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«Reply #3 on: March 03, 2011, 01:17:11 AM »
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BAhut Khub Geet Ji Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: March 03, 2011, 11:17:10 AM »
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lajawab peshkesh geet ji.....
bht bht khoob.....
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«Reply #5 on: March 03, 2011, 04:05:52 PM »
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mai bhi aaj hi ek bilkul aisa hi post likhunga--fir aapdono mujhse milne aana.
mai to ab soch rha ki issi post ko copy karke post kar dunga ab.
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be happy always
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«Reply #6 on: March 03, 2011, 05:10:52 PM »
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badiya hai geet....

acha laga.....
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«Reply #7 on: March 03, 2011, 05:48:18 PM »
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Mast Poem Geet-di......tum roz ek nayi poem kaise likh leti ho yaar........ hello hello wave Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Gulaab ko tou  kaanton se he rubaab aataa hai....
Usski he sugandh se mera khawaab sajjtaa hai......

Jab gulaab ki pankhudiyon se wo mere Gaal sehlaate hain
Sharm se Sakhee gulaabi-gulaabi mere Gaal ho jaate hain





Adaab dosto,

Yu tou har gulab ki tehni mein kante hote hai per merri ye kavita zindgi k ek pehelu ki hai jise maine gulab ki chaht aur kanto ki chhubhan k dard se bayan kiya hai..umeed hai aap sab ko pasand aayegi..





Merri hasrat ek aese gulab ki hai,
jiski tehni mein kante hi kante hai,

jab bhi hath badha kar use chhune jati hu
ek na ek kanta mujhe chubh jata hai,

jab tak main us kante k dard se ubharti hu,
vo gulab apni khubsurati se mujhe phir lubhata hai,

haule se apni pankhudiyo se chhukar,
merre dard ko thodi raahat pahuchata hai,

main uske ehsas mein kuch waqt kho jati hu,
per hawa sang beheta merra nasib mujhe sach ka aaina dikhata hai,

uski hifazat k liye bane kante merri raah rok lete hai,
sach bhi tou hai kanto k bina gulab adhura nazar aata hai,

us gulab ki khushbu mujhe chhuti har fiza se aati hai,
jo siwae merre har mehfil ki raunak badhata ha.........






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«Reply #8 on: March 03, 2011, 05:52:51 PM »
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Hamaari khwaaishyein bhi kitni milti hain.......Anu-di  love9   hello hello hello wave
mujhe bhi aap dono se milnaa hai.....ess khawaab ko pura karnaa hai..... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower


geet uffffffffffffffffff laajawaab crewation hai ye tumhari ab tak ki best post lagi ye mujhe........
waise bhi roses meri kamzori hain aur aaj unke bare me jo meri soch hi wahi yahan padhkar ajeeb sa ehsaas hua bht ajeeb......

sach me tumse to milna hoga..koi insaan itna eksa kaise soch sakte hain yaar.......
hats off to u for this wonderful poem....

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«Reply #9 on: March 04, 2011, 06:31:42 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya nirala ji,manju mann ji aur koyal...

koyal  n nirala ji kismat mein hua tou zarur milenge...
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«Reply #10 on: March 04, 2011, 06:32:55 PM »
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Hamaari khwaaishyein bhi kitni milti hain.......Anu-di  love9   hello hello hello wave
mujhe bhi aap dono se milnaa hai.....ess khawaab ko pura karnaa hai..... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower



Poori koshish rahegi koyal terra ye khwab poora karne ki jab kabhi mumbai aaungi tujhe aur kasak ji dono ko bata dungi phir zarur milenge...take care sweetu....
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hume unke ghar jana chorh diya hai
pyar mohabbat jatana chorh diya hai

jiski hansee pe mar mite the kabhi hum
aaj usee ne hume dekh kar muskurana chhorh diya hai...
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