EK HEE JUNG KE HAIN SAINANI..SOUDAGAR

by soudagar on August 08, 2013, 04:44:26 PM
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SACH HAI DOSTON DESH  AUR DESH MEIN HONE WALE SABHI TARAH KE APARADHON PAR KUCH LIKHNE BAITHO TO SHAYAD KAI PANNE BHAR JAYEIN..AAJ AISI HII EK KOSHISH BAHUT JYADA LINES GAYAB KARNI PADI YAA YUN KAHIYE KI SIRF CHAND LINES HEE LE SAKA UNME SE ..JO AAPSE SHARE KAR RAHA HOON PURA QALAAM BAHUT BAHUT JYADA BADA HO JATA SO ITNA HEE SAHI HAI..


lo dil ke ander aag, chhod do ab aakhon ka paani
nya itihas likhna hai ab likhni hai ek nai kahani

yeh kehna hai ab, teri meri bas ek manzil hai ab
ab to hai hum sab ek ,ek hee jung ke hai sainani

dil mein lagi ye agan jla dein kanto bhara chaman
na lade zurm ke khilaf to bekar hai apni ye jawani

tu kamjor nahi hai jan le apni shakti ka dhyan De
tu shakti hai tu jawala hai tu durga tu hee bhawani

jo nari ka kare blatkar jo nari par kare atyachar
maro.n in saalon ko itna ke ye mang sake na pani

janta ka jo hai pehredar karta hai khud atyachar
jiska farz zulm mitaana mujrim hai uska dost jaani

chor bane jab thanedar janta ko bhi hai yeh adhikar
itna mare itna peete kar naa sake phir wo manmaani

gaddaro.n ki bali chadha shaitan.on ka naam mita

shaan bachani hai TIRANGE  ki ab to hai yeh thaani

yeh kehna hai ab, teri meri bas ek manzil hai
ab to hai hum sab ek ,ek hee jung ke hai sainani















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«Reply #1 on: August 08, 2013, 04:47:26 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: August 08, 2013, 04:58:07 PM »
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bahut achhaa kalaam
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«Reply #3 on: August 08, 2013, 05:48:32 PM »
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Nice Write up & Kudo'ssssssssssss
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«Reply #4 on: August 08, 2013, 05:50:05 PM »
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bahut khoob jaxzbat se bhara kalam

gaddaro.n ki bali chadha shaitan.on ka naam mita
shaan bachani hai TIRANGE  ki ab to hai yeh thaani Applause Applause Applause Applause

BACHANI HAI SHAN TIRANGE KI TO
BAHUT KUCHH MILKAR KARNA HOGA

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«Reply #6 on: August 08, 2013, 07:38:37 PM »
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Bahut Khub Saudagar Bhai..
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«Reply #7 on: August 08, 2013, 08:28:01 PM »
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zurm k khilaaf y jang nayi nahi y jang hai bahot puraani....
milkar ladein agr to jeet jayeinge y sainani..........

bahot hi achchhi kavita....prerna se bharpoor... or haan isi trh chlta raha y silsila agr to bdlaav hoga zaroor....
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«Reply #8 on: August 08, 2013, 09:05:19 PM »
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क्या कहने...भाई वाह...क्या ज़ज्बात पिरोयें है इस कलाम की शक्ल में आपने सौदागर जी...ढेरों ढेरों दाद...
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bahut bahut umda, nek khayalo.N se bhari ye peshkash bahut khoob rahi karan bhai..

Dhero daad iss ujagar karne wale kalaam par..happy9
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«Reply #11 on: August 09, 2013, 12:22:22 AM »
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gaddaro.n ki bali chadha shaitan.on ka naam mita
shaan bachani hai TIRANGE  ki ab to hai yeh thaani

quite inspiring..
Desh ke liye kuch likhna..garv ki baat hai aur aise kalaam ki bhaavna bahut important hoti hai.
Jai Hind, Jai bharat
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