ek kavita dhundta hun

by AbhiTamrakar on October 22, 2010, 09:16:33 AM
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Ab tak aap sabne "Abhi" ko ek shayar ke roop me padha aaj pehli baar apni ek kavita aapke samne rakh raha hun ...shayad pasand aaye~


एक अनूठी प्यास
मेरे अंतर मन को छेड़ती
अौर मुझसे पूछती
किसे ढूढ़ते हो रैन के आंगन में
चंदा के दामन में, आंसू के मोती में
नैनों की ज्योति में
पतझड़ से मुरझाए पत्तों की उदास आंखों में
खिलते हुए फूलों की नन्ही मुस्कान में
किसी बच्चे की अठखेली में
ममता के आंचल में, प्रीत के बादल में
कभी किसी की ज़ुल्फों की छांव में
कभी खेतों में, गांवों में
गरीब की भूख आैर खाली रखी थाली में
जवां मस्तानों की मस्ती में
आैर धुंए मे घुलती जिंदगी की परतों में
मजदूर की बहती मेहनत में
नेता की कुर्सी के लालच में
आैर धूल चढ़ती संस्कार की किताबों में
जाने क्या है जो ढूढ़ता हूं
फिर एक आवाज़ आती है
“अभि” एक कविता ढूढ़ रहा हूं ।
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«Reply #1 on: October 22, 2010, 09:29:50 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut bahut khoob likha hai apne Abhi ji....!!!
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«Reply #2 on: October 22, 2010, 09:39:18 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Abhi ji..

Ek Dilchasp kavita Likhi hai Aapne Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: October 22, 2010, 09:41:19 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut bahut khoob likha hai apne Abhi ji....!!!

shukriya kapil jiii....
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«Reply #4 on: October 22, 2010, 09:41:58 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Abhi ji..

Ek Dilchasp kavita Likhi hai Aapne Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


bahuit bahut shukriya apka khwaish bhaiii...hosla afjaii yunhi karte rahiyega~
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«Reply #5 on: October 22, 2010, 09:55:47 AM »
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Kaviji aapka ye roop pasand aaya humein........achhi kavita hai aapki......aur hindi lipi ne char chand lagaa diye...... Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley

Haan sach hai hum aksar roj-marra ki zindagi main
Kuchh dhundte hain jo chhuta hai mann ko hamaare

Haan wo hakikat hoti hai jo roj ghati hai jeevan me
Bas usse he sahee shabdo me pirona hoti hai kavita



Ab tak aap sabne "Abhi" ko ek shayar ke roop me padha aaj pehli baar apni ek kavita aapke samne rakh raha hun ...shayad pasand aaye~


एक अनूठी प्यास
मेरे अंतर मन को छेड़ती
अौर मुझसे पूछती
किसे ढूढ़ते हो रैन के आंगन में
चंदा के दामन में, आंसू के मोती में
नैनों की ज्योति में
पतझड़ से मुरझाए पत्तों की उदास आंखों में
खिलते हुए फूलों की नन्ही मुस्कान में
किसी बच्चे की अठखेली में
ममता के आंचल में, प्रीत के बादल में
कभी किसी की ज़ुल्फों की छांव में
कभी खेतों में, गांवों में
गरीब की भूख आैर खाली रखी थाली में
जवां मस्तानों की मस्ती में
आैर धुंए मे घुलती जिंदगी की परतों में
मजदूर की बहती मेहनत में
नेता की कुर्सी के लालच में
आैर धूल चढ़ती संस्कार की किताबों में
जाने क्या है जो ढूढ़ता हूं
फिर एक आवाज़ आती है
“अभि” एक कविता ढूढ़ रहा हूं ।
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«Reply #6 on: October 22, 2010, 10:02:23 AM »
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Kaviji aapka ye roop pasand aaya humein........achhi kavita hai aapki......aur hindi lipi ne char chand lagaa diye...... Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley

Haan sach hai hum aksar roj-marra ki zindagi main
Kuchh dhundte hain jo chhuta hai mann ko hamaare

Haan wo hakikat hoti hai jo roj ghati hai jeevan me
Bas usse he sahee shabdo me pirona hoti hai kavita



shukriya koyal...sath rehena yunhi tabhi to achha likh paugaa~
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«Reply #7 on: October 22, 2010, 10:25:14 AM »
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bhtttttttttttt hi pyari kavita abhi...
mast hai ekdum ....
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
wanna see more of this kinda poems from you....
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«Reply #8 on: October 22, 2010, 10:37:00 AM »
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Nice abhi...
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«Reply #9 on: October 22, 2010, 10:40:11 AM »
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thnx anu ji and geet di
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«Reply #10 on: October 22, 2010, 01:06:15 PM »
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kya kahen ek dam naye andaaj me likha hai jise samjhna aasaan hai

bhut maja aaya padh ke

likhte rahooooooooo

miss u "abhi" bhai
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«Reply #11 on: October 22, 2010, 01:07:35 PM »
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Abhi bahut achchha likhte ho...ek choti see guzarish hai kavitaa ki talaash band na ho.......bahut khoob!
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«Reply #12 on: October 23, 2010, 09:31:52 AM »
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kya kahen ek dam naye andaaj me likha hai jise samjhna aasaan hai

bhut maja aaya padh ke

likhte rahooooooooo

miss u "abhi" bhai
thnx rahii ji
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«Reply #13 on: October 23, 2010, 09:35:54 AM »
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Abhi bahut achchha likhte ho...ek choti see guzarish hai kavitaa ki talaash band na ho.......bahut khoob!
Mamta ji namaskaar,

dhanyawad sabse pehle to ki apne pasand kiya is chhoti si kavita ko...
haan jahan tak likhne ka sawaal hai me marte dam tak likhuga ...kyun ye shayad me bhi nahin janta ...
aap apna sath is chhote bhai ke sath barkaraar rakhiyega .....
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«Reply #14 on: October 25, 2010, 05:26:04 PM »
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mai bhi apne khawon ko sabdo mai likhna chahta hun.par lagta hai sabdo ki kami hai hume . tum to bahut sunder likh leti ho.............wel come
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