ek nai Paribhasha

by Pooja on January 20, 2007, 07:32:42 AM
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hua man chanchal, dil mai chai udasi hai
na jaane ajj mere dil, kaya karne ki thani hai

door tak hai andhera, mashal bujhane chali hu
na jaanu ajj khud se ya duniya se takraane chali hu

samjh saki na jab kuch, khud ko bahkane chali hu
ho raha hai ant, ek nai paribhasha banane chali hu
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«Reply #1 on: January 20, 2007, 11:47:07 PM »
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very  nice Pooja sis........
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«Reply #2 on: January 25, 2007, 03:13:08 PM »
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poooja good
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«Reply #3 on: January 25, 2007, 11:12:49 PM »
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thanks waheed and paani!!
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«Reply #4 on: February 05, 2007, 12:49:13 AM »
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Puja good work

Here, some thing for u


Mere is chanchal man ne kuch karne ki thani hai
Door udas  duniya se aik nayee duniya banani hai

Ghamoon ke is sager main khushyoon ki naw chalani hai
andheroon main duniyan ke aik naiye shama jalani hai


Yeh tera yeh mera tum kaun aur main hun kaun
har koi hai apna aaj aik naiye paribhasha banani hai
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«Reply #5 on: February 06, 2007, 05:30:30 PM »
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Bahut achha likha hai Pooja di...
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«Reply #6 on: February 06, 2007, 06:20:35 PM »
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Sorry to Interupt you Javed ji... Lekin aapne jo Pooja ji ki poem ko naya roop diya  uss se toh poora theme hi change ho gaya...

Unki poem ka matlab mujhe kuch aor matlab lagg raha hai.. aor aapki ka kuch aor...
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«Reply #7 on: February 07, 2007, 04:46:11 AM »
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u r rt
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«Reply #8 on: February 07, 2007, 04:47:08 AM »
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mani udasi ki chader hata de hai
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«Reply #9 on: February 07, 2007, 08:44:54 PM »
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Puja good work

Here, some thing for u


Mere is chanchal man ne kuch karne ki thani hai
Door udas  duniya se aik nayee duniya banani hai

Ghamoon ke is sager main khushyoon ki naw chalani hai
andheroon main duniyan ke aik naiye shama jalani hai


Yeh tera yeh mera tum kaun aur main hun kaun
har koi hai apna aaj aik naiye paribhasha banani hai


Hota jo her koi apna, yah dard ka sawan na hota
payaar hota jo dunia main, her koi gum ki chader mai na hota

Duniya ki haqikat se shayad app ajj bhi anjaan hai
socho kabhi akele main, kyun her ek insaan itna preshan hai

sath chal kar dekh liya, ab akele hi jeevan bitaana hai
sochi hai jo paribhasha, ussi ko such banana hai
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«Reply #10 on: February 07, 2007, 08:47:31 PM »
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thanks Shikha,

Jeet,


kavita ka arth koi badal sakta nahi
kisi ke man mai hai kaya, her koi to jaan sakta nahi
badala arth wapis bhi badala jaata hai
Yoindian nanmunh kayun itna preshan hua jaata hai!!!
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«Reply #11 on: November 26, 2008, 09:35:45 AM »
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badla na kuch ajj bhi wahin kahani paai hai
tanha hai jeevan, sath sirf apni he parchai hai
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«Reply #12 on: February 12, 2009, 11:46:15 PM »
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shabd bhi jhoothe wo her ek pal bhi jhooth tha
zindagi ka her lamha tera, mere sath jhooth tha

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