ek or pal

by mamta bajpai on May 12, 2010, 01:16:32 AM

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mamta bajpai

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JHOOT KA FAREB KA VYAPAR CHAL GAYA
KHOTA SIKKA BHI BAZAR ME CHAL GAYA

JALNA HAI TUJHE TO AGAN KHUD ME KAR PAIDA
YE KYA PATANGA DOOSARON KI AAG ME JAL GAYA

BULAND SARMAYE KI BHI CHOTI SI KAHANI HAI
AAYA JO WAQT WO BHI AAFTAAB SA DHAL GAYA

CHOO KAR GAYEE MUJHE TERE LAMS KI GARMI
MAI MOM KA PUTLA THA MOM SA HI GAL GAYA

KARNA HAI JO TUJH KO IS EK PAL ME KAR
YE SOCHTE HI SOCHTE LO EK OR PAL GAYA


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Re: ek or pal

«Reply #1 on: May 12, 2010, 04:18:00 AM »

CHOO KAR GAYEE MUJHE TERE LAMS KI GARMI
MAI MOM KA PUTLA THA MOM SA HI GAL GAYA

KARNA HAI JO TUJH KO IS EK PAL ME KAR
YE SOCHTE HI SOCHTE LO EK OR PAL GAYA

humto samjhe thhe halaat ne tujhe pathar kardiya..
tere pehloo main magar ek dhadkta dil bhi hai.....
wah mamta saheba aapne to shayeri ke har zimreh main taba aazmai kar rahe hain aur khud ko manwa bhi rahe hain...keep it up.


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Re: ek or pal

«Reply #2 on: May 12, 2010, 08:55:41 AM »

buhat he khoob likha aap ne... hum jinta parh sakay aap ki posts ko.. itna jaana k buhat khoobsurat n narm alfaz jama kar detee hain aap ake jaga...

hamara saraahna kuch meni nahi rakhta.. k hum tu khud bhe jhoot or fareb k vaapaar ka hisa hain.. or khotay sikay ki tarha apnay chal jaanay par naa-dam... lakin phir bhe achha likhte hain aap..


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Re: ek or pal

«Reply #3 on: May 12, 2010, 09:44:45 AM »

Bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Mamta ji... bahut hi khoob...!!!


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mamta bajpai

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Re: ek or pal

«Reply #4 on: May 12, 2010, 01:58:32 PM »

NAZAR SAHEB BAS ITNA JANIYE KI PATTHAR KE SEENE ME AAG BHI HAI OR PAANI BHI.SHAYAD HAMARA QALAAM HAMARI ZINDAGI KI NUMAINDAGI KARTA HAI.AAP KI SARAHNA NE HAMARE HOUSLON KO BULAND KIYA HAI.AAP KA DIL SE HI SHUKRIYA ADA KARTI HOON.


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mamta bajpai

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Re: ek or pal

«Reply #5 on: May 12, 2010, 02:02:41 PM »

VB JI BEHAD SHUKRIYA!AAP NE APNA WAQT MERE QLAAM KO DIYA .AAPKI DAAD KE LIYE TAHE DIL SE SHUKRIYA !


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Re: ek or pal

«Reply #6 on: May 13, 2010, 05:07:08 AM »

Bahut khoob likha hai aap ne Mamta Ji


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Re: ek or pal

«Reply #7 on: May 13, 2010, 12:03:45 PM »

Wah kya baat hai Mamta Bajpai ji.....

karna chaey to kya nahin kar sakhta koi
mumkin sab hai gar karne ki soch rakhe koi
yahan koi kisi ke liye kuch bhi nahi karta hai
apne aap ko hi kuch karne ki himmat karna hai
aur aap hai ki sirf sochne me waqt gawa te hai
karna hai to isi pal kar kyun ki ek ek pal keemti hai
yun hi sochoge to samjho EK OR PAL gawaya hai........


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mamta bajpai

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Re: ek or pal

«Reply #8 on: May 13, 2010, 12:31:50 PM »

WAAH!! CARAJI!!AAP NE THEEK HI KAHA HAI....

HAI WAQT BADA BALVAAN PRABAL PARVAT JHUK JAYA KARTE HAI

KISI KAVI NE KAHA BHI HAI..

DHAR KAR CHARAN VIJIT SHRINGON PAR JHANDA WAHI UTHATA HAI
APNI HI UNGALI SE JO KHANJAR KI JANG CHUDATA HAI


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mamta bajpai

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Re: ek or pal

«Reply #9 on: May 13, 2010, 05:04:56 PM »

DHANYAWAAD SHIHAB SAHEB!!


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Re: ek or pal

«Reply #10 on: May 17, 2010, 10:48:36 AM »

Bahot hi khoob Mamta ji


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Re: ek or pal

«Reply #11 on: May 18, 2010, 08:05:03 AM »

Quote from: mamta bajpai on May 12, 2010, 01:16:32 AM

JHOOT KA FAREB KA VYAPAR CHAL GAYA
KHOTA SIKKA BHI BAZAR ME CHAL GAYA

JALNA HAI TUJHE TO AGAN KHUD ME KAR PAIDA
YE KYA PATANGA DOOSARON KI AAG ME JAL GAYA

CHOO KAR GAYEE MUJHE TERE LAMS KI GARMI
MAI MOM KA PUTLA THA MOM SA HI GAL GAYA

Waah Waah Waah!!!!

Bahut Bahut Khoob Mamata Ji..Bahut Hi khoobsurat peshkash!!!

Likhte Rahiye..


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Re: ek or pal

«Reply #12 on: May 18, 2010, 08:18:49 AM »

Wah bahut hi khoob likha aapne Mamta ji.excellent creation,Vb ji,Cara ji,Nazar ji ,great lines.keep up the good work Hats off to you!


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Re: ek or pal

«Reply #13 on: May 18, 2010, 09:26:51 AM »

bahoth qoob , wah kya kahene mamta saheba , dad hazir hai qubool karen ,allah apko hamesha khush rakhe..

talib a ilm

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Re: ek or pal

«Reply #14 on: May 20, 2010, 07:05:13 AM »

Wah wah Mamta ji bahot shandaar creation hai ye aapki. Ye Sher mujhe sabse achaa laga.

CHOO KAR GAYEE MUJHE TERE LAMS KI GARMI
MAI MOM KA PUTLA THA MOM SA HI GAL GAYA