Ek Phool Ki Kahani

by Meena on May 06, 2005, 09:54:01 PM
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Ek phool tha chota sa, jo ek kone me tha khila,
Apni zindagi ki raha me tha har mausam se mila.

Ayi woh toofani raat jab le gayi usse fiza bohot door,
Gir gaya phool zamee par, ho kar  chur chur.

Uthaya kabhi kisi ladki ne usse baalon me lagane ke liye,
To kabhi koi le gaya apne ghar, apne angan ko sajane ke liye.

Jab bikar gayi uski kushboo aur sukh gaye uske patte,
Phenk diya mali ne usko, aise akhele aur tadapte.

Akhri sans tak ladta raha phool pada zameen pe yuh tanha,
Khuda se pochta raha ke aisa bhi kya kiya tha maine gunah.

Phir ayi ek nayi bahar, rangeeli aur suhani,
Phir ek phool ki hui shuru ek nayi kahani !
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«Reply #1 on: May 06, 2005, 10:13:25 PM »
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Ek phool tha chota sa, jo ek kone me tha khila,
Apni zindagi ki raha me tha har mausam se mila.

Ayi woh toofani raat jab le gayi usse fiza bohot door,
Gir gaya phool zamee par, ho kar  chur chur.

Uthaya kabhi kisi ladki ne usse baalon me lagane ke liye,
To kabhi koi le gaya apne ghar, apne angan ko sajane ke liye.

Jab bikar gayi uski kushboo aur sukh gaye uske patte,
Phenk diya mali ne usko, aise akhele aur tadapte.

Akhri sans tak ladta raha phool pada zameen pe yuh tanha,
Khuda se pochta raha ke aisa bhi kya kiya tha maine gunah.

Phir ayi ek nayi bahar, rangeeli aur suhani,
Phir ek phool ki hui shuru ek nayi kahani !


wow meena.........jabardast  likha  meena.........mere paas  lafz  nahin  hai ........bahot  khoob meena.........

waise  sabhi lines  bahot acchi  hai ......lekin mujhe  yeh  2  lines  bahot achi lagi......

Akhri sans tak ladta raha phool pada zameen pe yuh tanha,
Khuda se pochta raha ke aisa bhi kya kiya tha maine gunah.
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«Reply #2 on: May 06, 2005, 10:27:16 PM »
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Ek phool tha chota sa, jo ek kone me tha khila,
Apni zindagi ki raha me tha har mausam se mila.

Ayi woh toofani raat jab le gayi usse fiza bohot door,
Gir gaya phool zamee par, ho kar  chur chur.

Uthaya kabhi kisi ladki ne usse baalon me lagane ke liye,
To kabhi koi le gaya apne ghar, apne angan ko sajane ke liye.

Jab bikar gayi uski kushboo aur sukh gaye uske patte,
Phenk diya mali ne usko, aise akhele aur tadapte.

Akhri sans tak ladta raha phool pada zameen pe yuh tanha,
Khuda se pochta raha ke aisa bhi kya kiya tha maine gunah.

Phir ayi ek nayi bahar, rangeeli aur suhani,
Phir ek phool ki hui shuru ek nayi kahani !


wow meena.........jabardast  likha  meena.........mere paas  lafz  nahin  hai ........bahot  khoob meena.........

waise  sabhi lines  bahot acchi  hai ......lekin mujhe  yeh  2  lines  bahot achi lagi......

Akhri sans tak ladta raha phool pada zameen pe yuh tanha,
Khuda se pochta raha ke aisa bhi kya kiya tha maine gunah.


thank u waheed !!!!!!!!!!!!!1

 :D
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«Reply #3 on: May 06, 2005, 10:38:26 PM »
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Ek phool tha chota sa, jo ek kone me tha khila,
Apni zindagi ki raha me tha har mausam se mila.

Ayi woh toofani raat jab le gayi usse fiza bohot door,
Gir gaya phool zamee par, ho kar  chur chur.

Uthaya kabhi kisi ladki ne usse baalon me lagane ke liye,
To kabhi koi le gaya apne ghar, apne angan ko sajane ke liye.

Jab bikar gayi uski kushboo aur sukh gaye uske patte,
Phenk diya mali ne usko, aise akhele aur tadapte.

Akhri sans tak ladta raha phool pada zameen pe yuh tanha,
Khuda se pochta raha ke aisa bhi kya kiya tha maine gunah.

Phir ayi ek nayi bahar, rangeeli aur suhani,
Phir ek phool ki hui shuru ek nayi kahani !


wow meena.........jabardast  likha  meena.........mere paas  lafz  nahin  hai ........bahot  khoob meena.........

waise  sabhi lines  bahot acchi  hai ......lekin mujhe  yeh  2  lines  bahot achi lagi......

Akhri sans tak ladta raha phool pada zameen pe yuh tanha,
Khuda se pochta raha ke aisa bhi kya kiya tha maine gunah.


thank you waheed !!!!!!!!!!!!!1

 :D


ur  welcome  meena.......................:lol:
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«Reply #4 on: May 06, 2005, 10:57:41 PM »
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Ek phool tha chota sa, jo ek kone me tha khila,
Apni zindagi ki raha me tha har mausam se mila.

Ayi woh toofani raat jab le gayi usse fiza bohot door,
Gir gaya phool zamee par, ho kar  chur chur.

Uthaya kabhi kisi ladki ne usse baalon me lagane ke liye,
To kabhi koi le gaya apne ghar, apne angan ko sajane ke liye.

Jab bikar gayi uski kushboo aur sukh gaye uske patte,
Phenk diya mali ne usko, aise akhele aur tadapte.

Akhri sans tak ladta raha phool pada zameen pe yuh tanha,
Khuda se pochta raha ke aisa bhi kya kiya tha maine gunah.

Phir ayi ek nayi bahar, rangeeli aur suhani,
Phir ek phool ki hui shuru ek nayi kahani !


gr8 gr8 gr8 gr8 yaar. Usual Smile kya likha hai,kasam se mazaa aa gaya padh ke.
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«Reply #5 on: May 06, 2005, 10:59:37 PM »
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Ek phool tha chota sa, jo ek kone me tha khila,
Apni zindagi ki raha me tha har mausam se mila.

Ayi woh toofani raat jab le gayi usse fiza bohot door,
Gir gaya phool zamee par, ho kar  chur chur.

Uthaya kabhi kisi ladki ne usse baalon me lagane ke liye,
To kabhi koi le gaya apne ghar, apne angan ko sajane ke liye.

Jab bikar gayi uski kushboo aur sukh gaye uske patte,
Phenk diya mali ne usko, aise akhele aur tadapte.

Akhri sans tak ladta raha phool pada zameen pe yuh tanha,
Khuda se pochta raha ke aisa bhi kya kiya tha maine gunah.

Phir ayi ek nayi bahar, rangeeli aur suhani,
Phir ek phool ki hui shuru ek nayi kahani !


gr8 gr8 gr8 gr8 yaar. Usual Smile kya likha hai,kasam se mazaa aa gaya padh ke.


shukriya ji shukriya!!

 :D
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«Reply #6 on: May 07, 2005, 09:20:06 PM »
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Ek phool tha chota sa, jo ek kone me tha khila,
Apni zindagi ki raha me tha har mausam se mila.

Ayi woh toofani raat jab le gayi usse fiza bohot door,
Gir gaya phool zamee par, ho kar  chur chur.

Uthaya kabhi kisi ladki ne usse baalon me lagane ke liye,
To kabhi koi le gaya apne ghar, apne angan ko sajane ke liye.

Jab bikar gayi uski kushboo aur sukh gaye uske patte,
Phenk diya mali ne usko, aise akhele aur tadapte.

Akhri sans tak ladta raha phool pada zameen pe yuh tanha,
Khuda se pochta raha ke aisa bhi kya kiya tha maine gunah.

Phir ayi ek nayi bahar, rangeeli aur suhani,
Phir ek phool ki hui shuru ek nayi kahani !


wah Meena ji... kya baat hai .. Aap jassey achey Sahayar to nhi hai per phir bhi chend alfaaz pesh-e-kidmat hai ...

http://www.yoindia.com/forums/viewtopic.php?p=172662#172662

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«Reply #7 on: May 07, 2005, 10:07:09 PM »
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Ek phool tha chota sa, jo ek kone me tha khila,
Apni zindagi ki raha me tha har mausam se mila.

Ayi woh toofani raat jab le gayi usse fiza bohot door,
Gir gaya phool zamee par, ho kar  chur chur.

Uthaya kabhi kisi ladki ne usse baalon me lagane ke liye,
To kabhi koi le gaya apne ghar, apne angan ko sajane ke liye.

Jab bikar gayi uski kushboo aur sukh gaye uske patte,
Phenk diya mali ne usko, aise akhele aur tadapte.

Akhri sans tak ladta raha phool pada zameen pe yuh tanha,
Khuda se pochta raha ke aisa bhi kya kiya tha maine gunah.

Phir ayi ek nayi bahar, rangeeli aur suhani,
Phir ek phool ki hui shuru ek nayi kahani !


wah Meena ji... kya baat hai .. Aap jassey achey Sahayar to nhi hai per phir bhi chend alfaaz pesh-e-kidmat hai ...

http://www.yoindia.com/forums/viewtopic.php?p=172662#172662

HumTum


reply apki upar wali post me hai, bohot hi pyara likha apne!!!!

 :D
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«Reply #8 on: May 17, 2005, 07:03:51 AM »
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Jis shaam mere lab per tera naam na aaye,
Khuda kare aisi shaam na aaye....
Aai jaane wafa, ye kabhi mumkin hi nahin,
Afsaana likhnu aur tera naam na aaye
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«Reply #9 on: May 17, 2005, 12:22:57 PM »
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Jis shaam mere lab per tera naam na aaye,
Khuda kare aisi shaam na aaye....
Aai jaane wafa, ye kabhi mumkin hi nahin,
Afsaana likhnu aur tera naam na aaye


Khuub...........Fakharenaveed ji........

Jis din tujhe bhula denge
Nahi ek pal bhi zinda rahenge
Tujhe chahenge, tujhe pujenge
Teri khatir hi zindagi tamam karenge

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«Reply #10 on: May 18, 2005, 08:07:32 PM »
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bahut khoob...meena....bahut he bariya likha hai
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bahut khoob...meena....bahut he bariya likha hai
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thanx toshu sis!

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«Reply #12 on: May 26, 2005, 08:25:37 AM »
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Bewafaie ki wajah unhein he malum,
Ki dil sambhal jaye aisa kya karun.
Khuda se ummed lagaie baithey hai,
Iss taraf woh dekhle aisa kya karun.
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«Reply #13 on: September 06, 2011, 03:08:17 PM »
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Quote from: Meena on May 06, 2005, 09:54:01 PM
Ek phool tha chota sa, jo ek kone me tha khila,
Apni zindagi ki raha me tha har mausam se mila.

Ayi woh toofani raat jab le gayi usse fiza bohot door,
Gir gaya phool zamee par, ho kar  chur chur.

Uthaya kabhi kisi ladki ne usse baalon me lagane ke liye,
To kabhi koi le gaya apne ghar, apne angan ko sajane ke liye.

Jab bikar gayi uski kushboo aur sukh gaye uske patte,
Phenk diya mali ne usko, aise akhele aur tadapte.

Akhri sans tak ladta raha phool pada zameen pe yuh tanha,
Khuda se pochta raha ke aisa bhi kya kiya tha maine gunah.

Phir ayi ek nayi bahar, rangeeli aur suhani,
Phir ek phool ki hui shuru ek nayi kahani !

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