Faryaad

by Sonu on December 07, 2004, 02:26:20 AM
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jaan thi tumhaari ek din
aaj kya hu mai

kho gayi is duniya mai
aaj kaha hu mai...

jaha tum ho
waha dhoondoo mai apne aap ko

ho kaha tum
dhoondoo mai apne khawab ko

kyu pard gayi parchaai mere chaand par
kyu rakh diya khanjhar meri jaan par

phoolo se bhi poocha maine
in hawao mai bhi pukaara tumhe

na suni awaaz meri kisi ne
na suni yeh faryaad meri kisi ne

nadiyo ne bhi gaana chord diya
hai saagar ki lehere bhi khamosh.
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«Reply #1 on: December 07, 2004, 06:59:33 PM »
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jaan thi tumhaari ek din
aaj kya hu mai

kho gayi is duniya mai
aaj kaha hu mai...

jaha tum ho
waha dhoondoo mai apne aap ko

ho kaha tum
dhoondoo mai apne khawab ko

kyu pard gayi parchaai mere chaand par
kyu rakh diya khanjhar meri jaan par

sonu too good...................well written
Yahi Aaj Keh Sakunga Main Tum Se
Keh Meri Khamoshi Tum Se Such Keh Rahi Hai.................
 


phoolo se bhi poocha maine
in hawao mai bhi pukaara tumhe

na suni awaaz meri kisi ne
na suni yeh faryaad meri kisi ne

nadiyo ne bhi gaana chord diya
hai saagar ki lehere bhi khamosh.
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Sonu
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«Reply #2 on: December 08, 2004, 01:01:40 AM »
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shurkay waheed ji bus yeo hee dil ke bat zubha per ah gaye or hatho ney shayri likh dali
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #3 on: December 09, 2004, 05:37:23 PM »
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Usual Smile
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Sonu
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«Reply #4 on: December 10, 2004, 03:30:01 AM »
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ahkhu mey pornur chamak hai
galo per medmsat damak hai
kudrat ko keya dey dala hia?
cheyrey per keya khub namek hai.
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«Reply #5 on: December 10, 2004, 03:13:17 PM »
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ahkhu mey pornur chamak hai
galo per medmsat damak hai
kudrat ko keya dey dala hia?
cheyrey per keya khub namek hai.


wowowowowowowo sonu..............wonderful...............

Ab Bhi Chehra Charaagh Lagta Hai
Bujh Gaya Hai Magar Chamak Hai Wohi...............
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«Reply #6 on: December 11, 2004, 01:22:08 AM »
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shukriya waheed ji...

hateyliyo sey tumahrey ahkhu ki nami tham loo,
ahnchal mey tumahrey dukhu ko smeyt loo,
yakeen kro jo meyra tum,
apney huthu sey tumahrey sarey gum peeloo.
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«Reply #7 on: December 11, 2004, 09:49:45 AM »
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shukriya waheed ji...

hateyliyo sey tumahrey ahkhu ki nami tham loo,
ahnchal mey tumahrey dukhu ko smeyt loo,
yakeen kro jo meyra tum,
apney huthu sey tumahrey sarey gum peeloo.


wowowow  sonu..................bahot bahot bahot khoob........

yoon  ashkon ki baarish se kam hue dil ke ghum
aisa laga mujhe tere lub meri palkon ko chookar nikle.....
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«Reply #8 on: December 12, 2004, 03:42:44 AM »
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shurkriya waheed ji


wonderful bhoot khoob sahyri mey jevab acha deytey hai app
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«Reply #9 on: December 13, 2004, 06:02:02 PM »
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wowoowoowow Sonu, First one is tooooooooo gooooooood!!!!!! bahoot hi acha likha hai. Simple words mai itna dard!!! bahoot khoob!!!!!


Nice waheed_rose ji!!!!

Din raat hai ab, magar wo baat nahi
her baat hai ab, magar wo saaj nahi
her saaj per lagty thy jo preet ke melle
wo saaj hai, magar wo melle nahi!!!

Subah sham hoty thy hum sath
ab sath hai magar wo subah sham nahi!!
bin kahe sunaty thy jo payar ke baty
wo baty hai, magar ab wo payar nahi!!!

meri muskaan thi teri pahchan
pahchan to hai, wo muskaan nahi
teri ankho mai basata tha mera jeewan
wo ankhy to hai, magar ab mujme wo jaan nahi!!!!!
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«Reply #10 on: December 14, 2004, 02:48:26 AM »
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shukrya poja ji...

apney bhi bhoot acha likha hai very nice.
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«Reply #11 on: December 14, 2004, 12:33:42 PM »
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wowoowoowow Sonu, First one is tooooooooo gooooooood!!!!!! bahoot hi acha likha hai. Simple words mai itna dard!!! bahoot khoob!!!!!


Nice waheed_rose ji!!!!

Din raat hai ab, magar wo baat nahi
her baat hai ab, magar wo saaj nahi
her saaj per lagty thy jo preet ke melle
wo saaj hai, magar wo melle nahi!!!

Subah sham hoty thy hum sath
ab sath hai magar wo subah sham nahi!!
bin kahe sunaty thy jo payar ke baty
wo baty hai, magar ab wo payar nahi!!!

meri muskaan thi teri pahchan
pahchan to hai, wo muskaan nahi
teri ankho mai basata tha mera jeewan
wo ankhy to hai, magar ab mujme wo jaan nahi!!!!!


wow ur welcome.................sonu......pooja.........s uperb.......wonderful...........excellent........ ...dono logon ne bahot accha likha........

Jab tak hamari soch main kuch faasla na tha
Woh hamse door ho k bhi hamse judaa na tha
Faasley aesay bhi honge yeh kabhi socha na tha
Saamney baitha tha mere aur woh Mera na tha.................................
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«Reply #12 on: December 14, 2004, 12:42:37 PM »
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waah waah all ..  Usual Smile
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Pooja
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«Reply #13 on: December 14, 2004, 03:33:57 PM »
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wah!!!! bahoot khoob waheed!!!!

Fasale aise bhi hogy yah kabhi socha na tha
samane bath hai mere, aor wo mera na tha!!!!


Gulam Ali ki awaz mai sune yah app.

http://www.emusic.com/album/10841/10841786.html
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«Reply #14 on: December 14, 2004, 03:43:52 PM »
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ur welcome pooja............. pooja bahot acchi site hai......  aisi site mujhe bata diya karo plz............. Usual Smile  tongue3
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