<>*FIr ek baar*<>

by *KasaK*....Dil Ki on October 15, 2010, 05:52:02 AM
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<>*FIr ek baar*<>


Tere honthon pe jab naam mera aya hoga
Koi sun na le ye soch k ghabraya hoga

Soch k apne hi iss pyaar bhari harkat pe
Tu man hi man tab haule se muskuraya hoga

Machal gaya hoga tu fir ek baar mujhe chhune ko
Mera chehra teri nazron me fir se samaya hoga

Nahin nahin wo mahin mil sakti tujhe ee dil
Tune fir ek baar apne iss dil ko samjhaya hoga

Tadapkar dil ne fir khuda ko duhai di hogi
Fir aaj tune dua k liye hath uthaya hoga

Kar de meri mahobbat mere naam yaa Rubba
Tune Parwardigaar ko fir ek bar manaya hoga

Na chala hoga bas tera iss deewane dil pe
Aur tadapkar tune mujhe phone lagaya hoga

Sunkar awaaz meri bharra gaya hoga tera gala
Shabd ek bhi na zabaan se nikal paya hoga

Kaisi hai ye majburi kyun ye duri hai sanam se
Tune fir ye sawaal apne Maula k samne uthaya hoga…!!!
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«Reply #1 on: October 15, 2010, 06:16:23 AM »
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bahut khoobsurat ehsaas pesh kiye hain aapne har baar ki tarha... kuch naya naya sa.. aapne apne mehboob ke dil ki bechaini ko badi khoobsurti se shabdon me sajaaya hai... agar wo aapke is rachna ka jawaab dete to shayad kuch is tarha dete....



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«Reply #2 on: October 15, 2010, 06:21:54 AM »
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waahhh hriday ji waahhhhhhh kya mast likha hai aapne...
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mud fresh fresh ho gya padhke......
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reply dungi par brk k baad......
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«Reply #3 on: October 15, 2010, 06:53:07 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Kasak ji... aapke jawaab ka waiting room rahega mujhe... waise mere naam ke saath aapko "Ji" lagaane ka right kisne diya Huh?
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«Reply #4 on: October 15, 2010, 07:02:07 AM »
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<>*FIr ek baar*<>


Tere honthon pe jab naam mera aya hoga
Koi sun na le ye soch k ghabraya hoga

Soch k apne hi iss pyaar bhari harkat pe
Tu man hi man tab haule se muskuraya hoga

Machal gaya hoga tu fir ek baar mujhe chhune ko
Mera chehra teri nazron me fir se samaya hoga

Nahin nahin wo mahin mil sakti tujhe ee dil
Tune fir ek baar apne iss dil ko samjhaya hoga

Tadapkar dil ne fir khuda ko duhai di hogi
Fir aaj tune dua k liye hath uthaya hoga

Kar de meri mahobbat mere naam yaa Rubba
Tune Parwardigaar ko fir ek bar manaya hoga

Na chala hoga bas tera iss deewane dil pe
Aur tadapkar tune mujhe phone lagaya hoga

Sunkar awaaz meri bharra gaya hoga tera gala
Shabd ek bhi na zabaan se nikal paya hoga

Kaisi hai ye majburi kyun ye duri hai sanam se
Tune fir ye sawaal apne Maula k samne uthaya hoga…!!!

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Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoob Anuji..Bahut Hi khoobsurat peshkash!!!

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«Reply #5 on: October 15, 2010, 08:40:57 AM »
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Ufffffffffffffffff kasak ji ye kya likh gye ji...merre ankahe jazbaat apne apni kavita mein likha daale...bahut shukriya ji bada sukoon mila padhkar...sach mein tajub hota hai ki apka aur merre dil ka haal bilkul ek sa hai...shukriya ji aur bahut hi khoob likha hai...
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«Reply #6 on: October 15, 2010, 06:32:07 PM »
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Bahaut bahaut bahaut khubsoorat ehsaason ko joda hai Anamika di..
Akhri shaer bahaut zada khubsoorat hai aur kahin na kahin mere dil ki awaz hai..
bahaut bahaut khoob..

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«Reply #7 on: October 15, 2010, 08:30:29 PM »
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Kasak Jee Aadaab!

Bahut khoob likha hai jee ... behad achcha
Sabhi ashaar khoob lage hume daad hazir hai daad... Usual Smile

Aise hi likhate rahiye......
Khush o Aabaad rahiye........
Khuda Hafez....... Usual Smile       



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