-----/// Firse ek ho jaaoge /// ----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on June 04, 2012, 01:24:29 PM
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«Reply #15 on: June 11, 2012, 03:43:05 PM »
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Thank you soooooooooooooo much Malli ji....!!!

Full of emotions... wow selected wordings.. overall very very nice dil ko chu gayi yeh kalam padkar... daad hazir hai ji
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«Reply #16 on: June 13, 2012, 01:17:21 PM »
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thanks a lot Hasan ji.....!!!

NICE , HRIDAY  ji .
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«Reply #17 on: June 14, 2012, 05:10:33 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Roy ji....!!!

aasaan hai keh dena ki mujhe tumse mohabbat nahi,
par dard me judaai ke tum tut ke bikhar jaaoge,

 Applause Applause Applause Applause

chaahe laakh dukh diye ho usne tumhe pyaar me,
par kya tum usko ek kharonch bhi lagaa paaoge,

Applause Applause Applause Applause


boht khood janab... lajwab
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«Reply #18 on: June 15, 2012, 04:32:46 PM »
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Thanks a lot Shireen ji.....!!!

Nice Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #19 on: June 18, 2012, 06:44:27 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Akash ji.,....!!!

Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!
Bohot acche
Ek rau hajir he
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«Reply #20 on: June 19, 2012, 12:07:15 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Shihab ji....!!!

bahut khun hriday ji...

Shad o aabaad rahiye...

Shihab
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«Reply #21 on: June 19, 2012, 05:58:24 PM »
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thanks a lot K_A ji....!!!

gud
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«Reply #22 on: June 19, 2012, 06:00:59 PM »
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bahut accha likha hai aapne Hriday jee... Applause Applause
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«Reply #23 on: June 26, 2012, 06:41:44 PM »
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bahut bahut shukrikyaa Sf ji....!!!

bahot ache Hriday sahab
bahot sundar poetry ki aapne
daad daad daad
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«Reply #24 on: July 23, 2012, 01:45:34 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Amit ji....!!!

waah... bahut khoob Hriday Ji, yeh Inteh-e-mohabbat hai ki jisme sirf dena hee dena hai, hriday se appkee rachna ka hum istakbaal karte hain aur ek rau bhi aapki nazar karte hain
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«Reply #25 on: July 24, 2012, 12:34:46 PM »
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tum apne pyaar se rooth ke kab tak reh paaoge,
dekh ke uski surat har baar tum pighal jaaoge,

aasaan hai keh dena ki mujhe tumse mohabbat nahi,
par dard me judaai ke tum tut ke bikhar jaaoge,

chaahe laakh dukh diye ho usne tumhe pyaar me,
par kya tum usko ek kharonch bhi lagaa paaoge,

jiski ek aawaaz se tadap uth_te the tum kabhi,
kya tum kabhi uske dil ko chot pahuchaa paaoge,

naraaz ho tum, ye maaloom hoga use bhi lekin,
yakeen hai usko hi tum bahut jald maan jaaoge,

chaahe na maane wo khud se ki galtiyaan uski thi,
tum mohabbat ke khaatir uske seene se lag jaaoge,

ek mulaaquaat zaroori hai fir se mohabbat ke liye,
mit jaayengi duuriyaan aur tum firse ek ho jaaoge...


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kya alfaaz likhu iss nazm ki taarif mein.....ek ek lafj itna behtrin k padhte padhte dil bhi nahi bhar rha..... icon_salut  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley................................
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«Reply #26 on: July 24, 2012, 12:38:13 PM »
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boht khub hridhay ji
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«Reply #27 on: July 24, 2012, 02:49:54 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Suman ji....!!!

bahut accha likha hai aapne Hriday jee... Applause Applause
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«Reply #28 on: July 30, 2012, 02:42:24 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Nikhaar ji... !!!

kya alfaaz likhu iss nazm ki taarif mein.....ek ek lafj itna behtrin k padhte padhte dil bhi nahi bhar rha..... icon_salut  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley................................
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«Reply #29 on: July 30, 2012, 02:42:53 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Saahill ji...!!!

boht khub hridhay ji
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