-----/// Firse ek ho jaaoge /// ----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on June 04, 2012, 01:24:29 PM
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tum apne pyaar se rooth ke kab tak reh paaoge,
dekh ke uski surat har baar tum pighal jaaoge,

aasaan hai keh dena ki mujhe tumse mohabbat nahi,
par dard me judaai ke tum tut ke bikhar jaaoge,

chaahe laakh dukh diye ho usne tumhe pyaar me,
par kya tum usko ek kharonch bhi lagaa paaoge,

jiski ek aawaaz se tadap uth_te the tum kabhi,
kya tum kabhi uske dil ko chot pahuchaa paaoge,

naraaz ho tum, ye maaloom hoga use bhi lekin,
yakeen hai usko hi tum bahut jald maan jaaoge,

chaahe na maane wo khud se ki galtiyaan uski thi,
tum mohabbat ke khaatir uske seene se lag jaaoge,

ek mulaaquaat zaroori hai fir se mohabbat ke liye,
mit jaayengi duuriyaan aur tum firse ek ho jaaoge...


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«Reply #1 on: June 04, 2012, 01:30:23 PM »
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bahut khoob Hriday ji dheron daad aur ek rau
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«Reply #2 on: June 04, 2012, 02:02:37 PM »
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Bahut Khub Hriday g
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«Reply #3 on: June 04, 2012, 02:27:49 PM »
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tum apne pyaar se rooth ke kab tak reh paaoge,
dekh ke uski surat har baar tum pighal jaaoge,

aasaan hai keh dena ki mujhe tumse mohabbat nahi,
par dard me judaai ke tum tut ke bikhar jaaoge,

chaahe laakh dukh diye ho usne tumhe pyaar me,
par kya tum usko ek kharonch bhi lagaa paaoge,

jiski ek aawaaz se tadap uth_te the tum kabhi,
kya tum kabhi uske dil ko chot pahuchaa paaoge,

naraaz ho tum, ye maaloom hoga use bhi lekin,
yakeen hai usko hi tum bahut jald maan jaaoge,

chaahe na maane wo khud se ki galtiyaan uski thi,
tum mohabbat ke khaatir uske seene se lag jaaoge,

ek mulaaquaat zaroori hai fir se mohabbat ke liye,
mit jaayengi duuriyaan aur tum firse ek ho jaaoge...


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Full of emotions... wow selected wordings.. overall very very nice dil ko chu gayi yeh kalam padkar... daad hazir hai ji
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«Reply #4 on: June 04, 2012, 03:30:12 PM »
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NICE , HRIDAY  ji .
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«Reply #5 on: June 04, 2012, 04:12:07 PM »
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aasaan hai keh dena ki mujhe tumse mohabbat nahi,
par dard me judaai ke tum tut ke bikhar jaaoge,

 Applause Applause Applause Applause

chaahe laakh dukh diye ho usne tumhe pyaar me,
par kya tum usko ek kharonch bhi lagaa paaoge,

Applause Applause Applause Applause


boht khood janab... lajwab
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«Reply #6 on: June 04, 2012, 05:42:18 PM »
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Nice Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: June 04, 2012, 05:59:59 PM »
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Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!
Bohot acche
Ek rau hajir he
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«Reply #8 on: June 04, 2012, 06:30:33 PM »
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tum apne pyaar se rooth ke kab tak reh paaoge,
dekh ke uski surat har baar tum pighal jaaoge,

aasaan hai keh dena ki mujhe tumse mohabbat nahi,
par dard me judaai ke tum tut ke bikhar jaaoge,

chaahe laakh dukh diye ho usne tumhe pyaar me,
par kya tum usko ek kharonch bhi lagaa paaoge,

jiski ek aawaaz se tadap uth_te the tum kabhi,
kya tum kabhi uske dil ko chot pahuchaa paaoge,

naraaz ho tum, ye maaloom hoga use bhi lekin,
yakeen hai usko hi tum bahut jald maan jaaoge,

chaahe na maane wo khud se ki galtiyaan uski thi,
tum mohabbat ke khaatir uske seene se lag jaaoge,

ek mulaaquaat zaroori hai fir se mohabbat ke liye,
mit jaayengi duuriyaan aur tum firse ek ho jaaoge...


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«Reply #9 on: June 04, 2012, 06:34:42 PM »
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bahot ache Hriday sahab
bahot sundar poetry ki aapne
daad daad daad
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«Reply #10 on: June 05, 2012, 06:26:35 AM »
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waah... bahut khoob Hriday Ji, yeh Inteh-e-mohabbat hai ki jisme sirf dena hee dena hai, hriday se appkee rachna ka hum istakbaal karte hain aur ek rau bhi aapki nazar karte hain
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«Reply #11 on: June 05, 2012, 07:10:42 AM »
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HAMESHA KI TARAH BAHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAI HRIDAY JEE.
DILI DAAD KUBOOL KIJIYE
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«Reply #12 on: June 05, 2012, 07:11:09 AM »
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HAMESHA KI TARAH BAHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAI HRIDAY JEE.
DILI DAAD KUBOOL KIJIYE
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #13 on: June 06, 2012, 06:08:46 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Saini ji.....!!!

bahut khoob Hriday ji dheron daad aur ek rau
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«Reply #14 on: June 08, 2012, 05:48:56 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriyaa Sanjeev ji.....!!!

Bahut Khub Hriday g
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