Gaaon ki yaad........................................................Quateel

by Quateel Ahmad on May 10, 2012, 06:35:12 AM
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Chuk chuk karti rail gaadi chali gayee
Puk puk karti thi chakki ab chali gayee

Jhar jhar gehun ki danvaai chali gayee
Thak thak chawal ki kutaai chali gayee

Band hua miljul kar gudadi ka silna
Chaar aane ki mithai chali gayee

Bhor ki wo datuan todaai chali gayee
Saanjh ki chara-chunii bhi chali gayee

Hukke ki chiilum chadhai chali gayee
Ghar ki gobar lipai chali gayee

Bartan ki wo raakh majaai chalii gayee
Bhoonje dana wo bharsaiin chali gayee

Jaadon mein wo ras peraai chali gayee
Saath uske rasiyaav ki handia chali gayee

Sikahar ki wo dahi malai chali gayee
Palang ki nivaad kasaii chali gayee

Debari ki tel bharaai chali gayi
Aandhi mein baagh rakhaii chali gayee

Ek alag duniya hi thi jo chali gayee
Ab uski yaad bhi jaise chali gayee
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«Reply #1 on: May 10, 2012, 06:50:30 AM »
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bahut hee laajwaab pesh kash dheron daad aur ek rau qubool kare
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«Reply #2 on: May 10, 2012, 07:04:18 AM »
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Chuk chuk karti rail gaadi chali gayee
Puk puk karti thi chakki ab chali gayee

Jhar jhar gehun ki danvaai chali gayee
Thak thak chawal ki kutaai chali gayee

Band hua miljul kar gudadi ka silna
Chaar aane ki mithai chali gayee

Bhor ki wo datuan todaai chali gayee
Saanjh ki chara-chunii bhi chali gayee

Hukke ki chiilum chadhai chali gayee
Ghar ki gobar lipai chali gayee

Bartan ki wo raakh majaai chalii gayee
Bhoonje dana wo bharsaiin chali gayee

Jaadon mein wo ras peraai chali gayee
Saath uske rasiyaav ki handia chali gayee

Sikahar ki wo dahi malai chali gayee
Palang ki nivaad kasaii chali gayee

Debari ki tel bharaai chali gayi
Aandhi mein baagh rakhaii chali gayee

Ek alag duniya hi thi jo chali gayee
Ab uski yaad bhi jaise chali gayee



Waah Waah Waah!!!!

Bahut Bahut Khoooob Quateel Ji..

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«Reply #3 on: May 10, 2012, 07:25:01 AM »
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bahut hee laajwaab pesh kash dheron daad aur ek rau qubool kare

Shukraguzaar hoon Saini Bhai!
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«Reply #4 on: May 10, 2012, 07:28:42 AM »
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Waah Waah Waah!!!!

Bahut Bahut Khoooob Quateel Ji..

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Bahot Shukriya, Khwaishji!!
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«Reply #5 on: May 10, 2012, 07:53:50 AM »
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Aapne to aaj gaanv ki yaad dil di bhai quateel........ bahut khub yaar...

Seher ke aage bebas pade hain  gaanv
Wahan chalti un hawaon ki.
mushkhurate chali gayi
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«Reply #6 on: May 10, 2012, 10:37:18 AM »
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Waah  bhai  Quateel saheb . Jawaab naheen . Eik  pal ke  liye  us  khubsurat  mahaul mein  le gaye jis ko taraste taraste abb bhool chuke  hain . Bahut  bahut  shukriyaa . 'Aandhi mein  bagh  rakhai ...'  waah  kitni  yaadein  taaza ho  gayeen . phir se  hukriya .
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«Reply #7 on: May 10, 2012, 06:44:03 PM »
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Aapne to aaj gaanv ki yaad dil di bhai quateel........ bahut khub yaar...

Seher ke aage bebas pade hain  gaanv
Wahan chalti un hawaon ki.
mushkhurate chali gayi

Bahot Shukriya Pramod ji!
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«Reply #8 on: May 10, 2012, 06:46:22 PM »
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Chuk chuk karti rail gaadi chali gayee
Puk puk karti thi chakki ab chali gayee

Jhar jhar gehun ki danvaai chali gayee
Thak thak chawal ki kutaai chali gayee

Band hua miljul kar gudadi ka silna
Chaar aane ki mithai chali gayee

Bhor ki wo datuan todaai chali gayee
Saanjh ki chara-chunii bhi chali gayee

Hukke ki chiilum chadhai chali gayee
Ghar ki gobar lipai chali gayee

Bartan ki wo raakh majaai chalii gayee
Bhoonje dana wo bharsaiin chali gayee

Jaadon mein wo ras peraai chali gayee
Saath uske rasiyaav ki handia chali gayee

Sikahar ki wo dahi malai chali gayee
Palang ki nivaad kasaii chali gayee

Debari ki tel bharaai chali gayi
Aandhi mein baagh rakhaii chali gayee

Ek alag duniya hi thi jo chali gayee
Ab uski yaad bhi jaise chali gayee

quateel sahab,
 janaab waise mujhe gaao.n ki zindagi ka koi tajurba to nahin hai. haan aap ne aapne tajurbe ko jis bakhoobi qalmband kiya hai aur usmein apne jazbaat ki jhalak dikhaayi hai wo qabil-e tarif hai...!


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«Reply #9 on: May 10, 2012, 06:48:55 PM »
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Waah  bhai  Quateel saheb . Jawaab naheen . Eik  pal ke  liye  us  khubsurat  mahaul mein  le gaye jis ko taraste taraste abb bhool chuke  hain . Bahut  bahut  shukriyaa . 'Aandhi mein  bagh  rakhai ...'  waah  kitni  yaadein  taaza ho  gayeen . phir se  hukriya .

Bahot shukriya Hasan Sahab!
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«Reply #10 on: May 10, 2012, 06:52:07 PM »
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 Bahot bahot shukriya Shebaji!
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«Reply #11 on: May 11, 2012, 07:05:27 AM »
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bahut sundar....

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«Reply #12 on: May 11, 2012, 01:55:33 PM »
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bahut sundar....

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Shukriya Dollyji!!
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«Reply #13 on: May 11, 2012, 02:12:12 PM »
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bahut achhe quateel ji, maja aa gaya bachpan ko yaad karke,ek ek line jaise yadon ki parat kholti gayee bahut bahut badhai aur shukriya humse share karne ke liye
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«Reply #14 on: May 13, 2012, 03:30:32 PM »
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bahut achhe quateel ji, maja aa gaya bachpan ko yaad karke,ek ek line jaise yadon ki parat kholti gayee bahut bahut badhai aur shukriya humse share karne ke liye
ghansham das ahuja

Shukriya Ghanshamji, aapko achchi lagi ye baat achchi lagi!
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