gharz......................A.B

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                            main us ke gham kaa andaaz lagataa rahaa...,
                            wo khaamosh unn hi buss muskurataa rahaa...,

                            chehraa ek,jo kabhi  bhhool nahin saktaa...,
                            jaane  kyon  khayaalo.n  se jataa  rahaa...,

                            maaloom  nahin  kyaa  rishtaa thaa  us se...,
                            binaa gharz taa-umr buss  nibhhataa rahaa...,

                            rukh  hawaa  kaa modne  ki  jurrat jo  ki...,
                            ban  kar  toofaan meri jaanib aataa rahaa...,

                            manzar koi haseen inn aakho.n ne dekhaa kab...,
                            dard  her  pal  aanso.n  se  rulataa  rahaa...,

                            marti rahee.n khushiyaa.n aa-aa kar  durr pe...,
                            hans-hans kar bechain unhein dafnataa rahaa...,
                            

                            
                            
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waah waah waah waah Adil ji, kyaa khoob likhaa hai aapne, ek baar padhaa, do baar padhaa, baar baar padhaa, aur jitni baar padhaa mazaa badhtaa gayaa, aisi rachnaayein Yo par aajkal kam hi dekhne ko milti hain, aasaan se shabdon mein, bhaawpoorn, khoobsoorat rachnaa, bahut achchaa lagaa padh ke, aapki is rachnaa ke liye ek RAU sweekaar kijiye....!!!
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                            main us ke gham kaa andaaz lagataa rahaa...,
                            wo khaamosh unn hi buss muskurataa rahaa...,

                            chehraa ek,jo kabhi  bhhool nahin saktaa...,
                            jaane  kyon  khayaalo.n  se jataa  rahaa...,

                            maaloom  nahin  kyaa  rishtaa thaa  us se...,
                            binaa gharz taa-umr buss  nibhhataa rahaa...,

                            rukh  hawaa  kaa modne  ki  jurrat jo  ki...,
                            ban  kar  toofaan meri jaanib aataa rahaa...,

                            manzar koi haseen inn aakho.n ne dekhaa kab...,
                            dard  her  pal  aanso.n  se  rulataa  rahaa...,

                            marti rahee.n khushiyaa.n aa-aa kar  durr pe...,
                            hans-hans kar bechain unhein dafnataa rahaa...,
                           

                           
                           

waah waah bahut khoob janaab


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