Guzre waqt k parindon ko udaana hoga....

by tamanna.pt on June 07, 2010, 10:38:17 AM
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                           Guzre waqt k parindon ko udaana hoga,
                           Kadam ye mushkil hai magar,uthhaana hoga.

                           Kab tak paaloge ye ranj mayaan-e-dil me,
                           Talwaar-e-sukoon rakhne ko ranj hataana hoga.

                           Khushnuma cheeze zeheni deewaro pe sajaate hai,
                           Ye to deemaq hai,isko to hataana hoga.

                           Surkh kumkum ko maathe se laga rakhte hai,
                           Ye to raakh hai,isko to bahaana hoga.

                           Chaah rakhte ho gar khushi ki narm chhaon ki,
                           Beej chahat ka bhi khud ko hi lagaana hoha.

                           Zindagi jeene ka bhi ek saleeqa hota hai,
                           Khushi baantoge to ghum me bhi muh dikhaana hoga.

                           Gile-shikwoon k sahaare ye umr to guzar jayegi magar,
                           Aakhiri waqt pe chaar kaandhon ko jutaana hoga.




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«Reply #1 on: June 07, 2010, 11:58:33 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khoob Tamannaji..

Kya Kehne!!!! Har ek Ashaar Lajawaab!!!har Lafz Insaan Ko Kuch seekhata Hua..

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«Reply #2 on: June 07, 2010, 12:54:05 PM »
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Subhan_allah Tamanna Jee jitni tareef ki jaye kam hai, mujhe to aapke is sher ka andaaz bohat pasand aaya bilkul naya khayaal laga mujhe...

Kab tak paaloge ye ranj mayaan-e-dil me,
Talwaar-e-sukoon rakhne ko ranj hataana hoga.


Bohat khoob Ghayel ki daad kabool kare....

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«Reply #3 on: June 07, 2010, 02:19:27 PM »
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bahut umda gazal pesh ki hai aapne Tmannaji!
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«Reply #4 on: June 08, 2010, 03:23:01 AM »
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tamanna saheba bahoot khoob aur sajid bhai ne jis shair ko saraha hai,wohi shair mujhe bhi bahot pasan aya.bahut hi umda aur naya andaz ....bhot khoob
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«Reply #5 on: June 09, 2010, 06:44:35 AM »
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     Bahut bahut shukriya Khwaish ji, Aapki daad k har lafz ne yakeenan mere hausle ko badhaya hai.Shukriya. Usual Smile
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Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khoob Tamannaji..

Kya Kehne!!!! Har ek Ashaar Lajawaab!!!har Lafz Insaan Ko Kuch seekhata Hua..

Zabardast peshkash.. Thumbs UP

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«Reply #6 on: June 09, 2010, 06:56:14 AM »
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Subhan_allah Tamanna Jee jitni tareef ki jaye kam hai, mujhe to aapke is sher ka andaaz bohat pasand aaya bilkul naya khayaal laga mujhe...

Kab tak paaloge ye ranj mayaan-e-dil me,
Talwaar-e-sukoon rakhne ko ranj hataana hoga.


Bohat khoob Ghayel ki daad kabool kare....


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«Reply #7 on: June 09, 2010, 06:59:29 AM »
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tamanna saheba bahoot khoob aur sajid bhai ne jis shair ko saraha hai,wohi shair mujhe bhi bahot pasan aya.bahut hi umda aur naya andaz ....bhot khoob
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«Reply #8 on: June 09, 2010, 07:01:54 AM »
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  Kalaam ko pasand karne k liy bahut-bahut shukriya Mamta ji. wave

bahut umda gazal pesh ki hai aapne Tmannaji!
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«Reply #9 on: June 13, 2010, 06:33:13 PM »
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«Reply #10 on: June 14, 2010, 06:35:01 PM »
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Wah Tamanna-di superb likha hai.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Ye khayaal itna sunder hai Tamanna-di
Isko tou har shaks tak pahuchana hoga

Beej naye bo k mohabaat ka ped lagana hoga
Phal jab lagenge to hum sabko khilana hoga




                 

                 
 Guzre waqt k parindon ko udaana hoga,
  Kadam ye mushkil hai magar,uthhaana hoga.

 Kab tak paaloge ye ranj mayaan-e-dil me,
 Talwaar-e-sukoon rakhne ko ranj hataana hoga.

 Khushnuma cheeze zeheni deewaro pe sajaate hai,
 Ye to deemaq hai,isko to hataana hoga.

 Surkh kumkum ko maathe se laga rakhte hai,
 Ye to raakh hai,isko to bahaana hoga.

                           Chaah rakhte ho gar khushi ki narm chhaon ki,
                           Beej chahat ka bhi khud ko hi lagaana hoha.

                           Zindagi jeene ka bhi ek saleeqa hota hai,
                           Khushi baantoge to ghum me bhi muh dikhaana hoga.

                           Gile-shikwoon k sahaare ye umr to guzar jayegi magar,
                           Aakhiri waqt pe chaar kaandhon ko jutaana hoga.


                         

                                  ----Tamanna----
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«Reply #11 on: June 15, 2010, 04:35:16 AM »
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«Reply #12 on: June 16, 2010, 11:48:51 PM »
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Bahot khoob Tamanna ji. Nice creation.
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«Reply #13 on: June 21, 2010, 06:25:51 AM »
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  Bahut bahut shukriya Khamosh ji. Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: June 21, 2010, 06:27:29 AM »
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  Thank u Koyal sister. wave
Wah Tamanna-di superb likha hai.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Ye khayaal itna sunder hai Tamanna-di
Isko tou har shaks tak pahuchana hoga

Beej naye bo k mohabaat ka ped lagana hoga
Phal jab lagenge to hum sabko khilana hoga




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