Haadisa (Air India cresh in Mangalore dt. 22 may 2010)

by aaina on May 23, 2010, 06:07:53 AM
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Wo to bata rha tha kaii roz ka safar
Zanzeer kheech kar jo musafir uthr gaya(nm)

Jis sehra mai chlte chlte ab
Paaun ke chaale patthar ho gaye hai.n
Jism ki thkaan jab bistar ko chooti hai
To ek bheena sa dard rago pa mai utar jta hai
Magr aaj mere pair is tapti huii
Rait ko maghroor nigaahon se daikh rhe hain
Kyunki mere paaun aaj zameen par nahi
Unko kisi udaan ke pankh lag geye hain
Yahi socha hoga us jhaaz
pe sawaar hone wale ne
Ki jisne apne farz koo nibhate nibhate
Apne jaan de dii
Ye wahi shqs tha ki jiski aankho
Mai nayi subha ka ek sapna tha
Ke jiske chehre pe badi
khush rang lkeerin thin
Jo apne tang dasti mai bhi
khilono ki dukaano se khuch
thaaif khareed laya tha
Ki jisme ek gudya usko
apni bithi si dikhti thi
Jisse ye wahem tha ke kal ka suraj
bhut mehrbaan hoga uspar
Magr afsos ke jo pal khushi ke the
Wahi maatam ke hawaale hain
Wahi.n ussi haath ke barabr
Ek gudia nigaahei.n phaade huway
Kuch daikh rhi hai
Ki usko yahan se koi utha laiga
Aur jahan usko phuchna hai
Wahan usko phucha dega
Jahan kuch umeedein bhari aankhein
Darwaaze pe taq-taqi lagye bhaithi hain
Aaj ki raat bhut bhari hai............







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«Reply #1 on: May 23, 2010, 09:28:39 AM »
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Aaina-ji Bahoot he prompt aur bhavpurn rachna hai aapki...... Applause Applause Applause Applause

Wo to bata rha tha kaii roz ka safar
Zanzeer kheech kar jo musafir uthr gaya(nm)

Jis sehra mai chlte chlte ab
Paaun ke chaale patthar ho gaye hai.n
Jism ki thkaan jab bistar ko chooti hai
To ek bheena sa dard rago pa mai utar jta hai
Magr aaj mere pair is tapti huii
Rait ko maghroor nigaahon se daikh rhe hain
Kyunki mere paaun aaj zameen par nahi
Unko kisi udaan ke pankh lag geye hain
Yahi socha hoga us jhaaz
pe sawaar hone wale ne
Ki jisne apne farz koo nibhate nibhate
Apne jaan de dii
Ye wahi shqs tha ki jiski aankho
Mai nayi subha ka ek sapna tha
Ke jiske chehre pe badi
khush rang lkeerin thin
Jo apne tang dasti mai bhi
khilono ki dukaano se khuch
thaaif khareed laya tha
Ki jisme ek gudya usko
apni bithi si dikhti thi
Jisse ye wahem tha ke kal ka suraj
bhut mehrbaan hoga uspar
Magr afsos ke jo pal khushi ke the
Wahi maatam ke hawaale hain
Wahi.n ussi haath ke barabr
Ek gudia nigaahei.n phaade huway
Kuch daikh rhi hai
Ki usko yahan se koi utha laiga
Aur jahan usko phuchna hai
Wahan usko phucha dega
Jahan kuch umeedein bhari aankhein
Darwaaze pe taq-taqi lagye bhaithi hain
Aaj ki raat bhut bhari hai............







aslam

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«Reply #2 on: May 23, 2010, 03:38:37 PM »
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bahut khoobsurti se likha hai aapne Aslam ji... bahut khoob...!!!
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«Reply #3 on: May 23, 2010, 07:17:55 PM »
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Very touching poem Aslam ji bahut khoob
bahut dhuk hua jab news dekhi .
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«Reply #4 on: May 24, 2010, 12:51:53 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aslam ji..dard ka bahut khubsurati se bayan kiya hai apne llafzo mein...khuda har us shakhs ko himaat de jinhone kisi apne ko us crash mein khoya hai....take cre...
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«Reply #5 on: May 24, 2010, 03:38:40 PM »
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Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Aslam ji.. Bahoot Hi gehre ehsaas ko samet kar likhi gai yea rachna bahoot hi marmik hai..

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«Reply #6 on: May 25, 2010, 08:08:18 AM »
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Kya kahoon AslamJi..

Vaakai Iss Zindagi Ka Koi Bharosa Nahi..Kisse Pata Tha Uss Jahaz par Ke Woh safar Unka Aakhri Safar Hoga..

Bahut Hi Dardnaak Haadsa Hai Yeh..

Aapne Uss Dard Ko Lafzon Mein Bahut Hi Gehrai Se Bayaan Kiya Hai..

Waheguru unn sab ke pariwaar ko hausla de jo iss Haadse ka shikaar hue hai..
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«Reply #7 on: May 26, 2010, 10:52:44 AM »
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Wah Aslam Bhai kya kahene Yaar , Jub ye paheli Baar Us hadse ke fauran baad padi thi maine To bus ankhen namm se ho gayi thi ,, Taqeer ke liye mazrath khaw hon ,, Hazaro dad apki is taqleeq ke nazar ,, allah un sub ke gharwalon ko hausla de..khush rahen hamesha..


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«Reply #8 on: May 27, 2010, 01:52:53 AM »
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koyal ji, kapil ji, Madhuwesh, BBL, Sophi, khwaish sahab aur Qadeer bhai aap sab hi ka bhut bhut shukriya is dard mai sharkart aur tahereer ki pasndagi ka, yu.N hi saath daite rahiye



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