haadsaa...........A.B

by adil bechain on March 04, 2016, 05:55:20 PM
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                             khaa kar  zahr  jeene  ki tarkeeb  bataa gyaa...,
                             rahna bach kar dosto.n se, raqeeb bataa gayaa...,

                             badal sakte  ho shakal meri  apni  koshish se...,
                             aa  kar  mere khawaab mein naseeb bataa gayaa...,

                             be-parwaah   si  zindagi yunn hansti rahi per...,
                             ek  haadsaa  maut  ko mere qareeb bataa gayaa...,

                             hoon  main  bhi paresha.n  dawaa aur maraz se...,
                             karo  khud  ilaaj  apnaa,  tabeeb bataa gayaa...,

                             hai qaatil jaan jise,chhupa phirtaa hoon main...,
                             ek  khanjar  use  meraa  habeeb  bataa  gayaa...,

                             todna,  sheeshe  se  pathhar namumkin saa hai...,
                             ye hunar  mujhe 'bechain' ajeeb  bataa  gayaa...,

                             
                             
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«Reply #1 on: March 04, 2016, 11:57:38 PM »
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bahut bahut Khoobsurat waah.
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: March 05, 2016, 12:54:44 AM »
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waah  laajawaab ghazal  dher saaree daad  rau baad men
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«Reply #3 on: March 05, 2016, 09:23:52 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause :clap:wah wah laajawaab
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«Reply #4 on: March 06, 2016, 05:56:37 AM »
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Waaah !!!! Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: March 06, 2016, 06:28:27 AM »
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Bahot khoooob waaaaah waaah  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: March 06, 2016, 09:29:32 PM »
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Bechain Sahab Aadaab ... !

Kia kahne janab waaH bahut khoob behad laajawab kalaam kahi hai...
Matle se lekar maqte tak ke ahsaas O khayaal ka safar bada hi khoob raha har sher apne aap meiN behad khoob huaa hai janab...

Is khoobsurat aur pur asar kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhte rahiye... bazm ko roshan o aabaad karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez ...

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«Reply #7 on: March 19, 2016, 09:28:11 AM »
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bahut bahut Khoobsurat waah.
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


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«Reply #8 on: March 21, 2016, 06:59:34 PM »
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«Reply #9 on: March 31, 2016, 07:11:11 AM »
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waah  laajawaab ghazal  dher saaree daad  rau baad men


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