Hamari jaat aur hai....premdeep

by premdeep on July 04, 2013, 07:20:49 PM
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jin raaston mein besudh chal dete ho tum,
hum chal nahi sakte,
hamari baat aur hai,
aankhon me ashq to hain,
hum rote bhi hain kabhi kabhi,
par tanhaiye ke ashq nahin ye,
ye barsaat aur hai,
wo bhawanre jo bal kha kar,
dal dal ithlate hain,
gulshan gulshan mandarate hain,
har nayi kiran ke sath,
naye phool ka khwaab sajate hain,
humko unse mat taulo,
hamari jaat  aur hai

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«Reply #1 on: July 04, 2013, 08:32:52 PM »
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jin raaston mein besudh chal dete ho tum,
hum chal nahi sakte,
hamari baat aur hai,
aankhon me ashq to hain,
hum rote bhi hain kabhi kabhi,
par tanhaiye ke ashq nahin ye,
ye barsaat aur hai,
wo bhawanre jo bal kha kar,
dal dal ithlate hain,
gulshan gulshan mandarate hain,
har nayi kiran ke sath,
naye phool ka khwaab sajate hain,
humko unse mat taulo,
hamari jaat  aur hai


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«Reply #2 on: July 04, 2013, 10:43:32 PM »
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achcha likhe ho... dheron daad..
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«Reply #3 on: July 04, 2013, 11:15:04 PM »
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bahut khoob premdeep jee..DHero daad..happy9
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«Reply #4 on: July 04, 2013, 11:17:10 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: July 05, 2013, 04:29:01 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: July 05, 2013, 09:00:48 AM »
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jin raaston mein besudh chal dete ho tum,
hum chal nahi sakte,
hamari baat aur hai,
aankhon me ashq to hain,
hum rote bhi hain kabhi kabhi,
par tanhaiye ke ashq nahin ye,
ye barsaat aur hai,
wo bhawanre jo bal kha kar,
dal dal ithlate hain,
gulshan gulshan mandarate hain,
har nayi kiran ke sath,
naye phool ka khwaab sajate hain,
humko unse mat taulo,
hamari jaat  aur hai



wah wah wah ab meharbaani kar ke ye bata do tumhaari kya zaat hai Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard.!
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