~ Hawao Ka Rukh ~

by Matrix Guy on February 01, 2011, 01:55:28 PM
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«Reply #15 on: February 02, 2011, 11:07:04 AM »
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wahhhhhhhh nirala ji maja aa gaya........apne jo explain kiya he har sher ko bahot aacha he ...thx dear ...

bekarar ji aapko ye pasand aya wo mere liye khushi ki baat he.....sab apke sath aur encouragement se hi hota he...thx alot........

KB ji........jo apne kaha wo sahi he ....but exactly last para na to mujse related he na kisi aur se ....it is just a part of this potery....thx KB ji for this encouragement........

sahil ji......bahot hi umda lines likhi he apne ....bahot hi meaning ful.....but ek baat kahna chahunga ki shayad apne galat jagah post kar di he kyuki poetry se iska koi relation samaj nahi pad raha........wese hum sabka to fayda hi hua he kyuki apki lkihi itni sundar lines jo padne ko mili........thx dear apne waqt diya......thx a lot
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«Reply #16 on: February 02, 2011, 11:15:51 AM »
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jaankar khusi hui ki aapko bura nahi laga--
kyunki abhi thodi der pahle Sahil ji bura maan gaye the mere ek reply se.
ab to darr sa lagta hai koi comnt dene me ki meri Mazakiya baato se kisi ko bura na lag jaye.
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thanx
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«Reply #17 on: February 02, 2011, 12:28:33 PM »
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very inspirational poem mg......
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«Reply #18 on: February 02, 2011, 12:31:53 PM »
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! Hawao Ka Rukh !

Intzaar Karne Walo Ko Utna Hi Milta He
Jitna Koshish Karne Wale Chod Dete He

Banna He To Tufaan Ban Kar Dekho
Jo Hawao Ka Rukh Mod Dete He

Mukkadar Hatho ki lakiro me nahi hausle me he
Ghar Ban Hi Jata He Jo Tinka Tinka Jod Lete He

Faulad Me Wo Taqat Nahi Jo Apne Hatho Me He
Hath Hi He Jo Faulad Bhi Tod Dete He

Hum Wo Nahi Jo Waqt Ke Sath Mit Jaye
Hum  Wo Zakhm He Jo Jate Jate Nishan Chod Dete He


 Thankyou !






waah kya andaz-e matrix hai. bahut acha
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SURESH SANGWAN
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«Reply #19 on: February 02, 2011, 12:44:44 PM »
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very motivating....................
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«Reply #20 on: February 02, 2011, 12:48:18 PM »
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Bahut khoob utkarsh ji bahut achi lagi mujhe apki kavita...nice reply by all..
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«Reply #21 on: February 05, 2011, 01:47:21 PM »
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Bahut Khub Matrix JI And Nice Reply Nirala JI
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«Reply #23 on: October 03, 2020, 06:55:31 PM »
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