~ Hawao Ka Rukh ~

by Matrix Guy on February 01, 2011, 01:55:28 PM
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! Hawao Ka Rukh !

Intzaar Karne Walo Ko Utna Hi Milta He
Jitna Koshish Karne Wale Chod Dete He

Banna He To Tufaan Ban Kar Dekho
Jo Hawao Ka Rukh Mod Dete He

Mukkadar Hatho ki lakiro me nahi hausle me he
Ghar Ban Hi Jata He Jo Tinka Tinka Jod Lete He

Faulad Me Wo Taqat Nahi Jo Apne Hatho Me He
Hath Hi He Jo Faulad Bhi Tod Dete He

Hum Wo Nahi Jo Waqt Ke Sath Mit Jaye
Hum  Wo Zakhm He Jo Jate Jate Nishan Chod Dete He


 Thankyou !





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«Reply #1 on: February 01, 2011, 02:15:16 PM »
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mast poem MG..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Hawao ka rukh mat badalnaa plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Bahut dino baad innka rukh huaa hai ess taraf

NASEEBON SE LADD KAY KAB JEETA HAI KOI
BINAA HATHEEYAAR K KAB TAK LADDTA KOI

Himmat tou bahut thee jigar mai mere
Baarood bhi kasam se kam nahi thaa
Par saamnaa jinse  hua mera ay khuda
Wo koi aur nahi mera he janak tha.....

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«Reply #2 on: February 01, 2011, 03:43:08 PM »
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waahhhhhhhh ji kya baat kahi hai last stanza mastam hai ji.....maza aagaya ji ye poem padhkar....

mast mast ji
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«Reply #3 on: February 01, 2011, 03:43:27 PM »
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gudduuuuu mastam reply re....bht achcha likha hai
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«Reply #4 on: February 01, 2011, 04:11:47 PM »
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! Hawao Ka Rukh !

Intzaar Karne Walo Ko Utna Hi Milta He
Jitna Koshish Karne Wale Chod Dete He

Banna He To Tufaan Ban Kar Dekho
Jo Hawao Ka Rukh Mod Dete He

Mukkadar Hatho ki lakiro me nahi hausle me he
Ghar Ban Hi Jata He Jo Tinka Tinka Jod Lete He

Faulad Me Wo Taqat Nahi Jo Apne Hatho Me He
Hath Hi He Jo Faulad Bhi Tod Dete He

Hum Wo Nahi Jo Waqt Ke Sath Mit Jaye
Hum  Wo Zakhm He Jo Jate Jate Nishan Chod Dete He


 Thankyou !




Good One ....... !

Very Nice Creation ....... dil se daad !
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«Reply #5 on: February 01, 2011, 06:02:55 PM »
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NICE

! Hawao Ka Rukh !

Intzaar Karne Walo Ko Utna Hi Milta He
Jitna Koshish Karne Wale Chod Dete He

Banna He To Tufaan Ban Kar Dekho
Jo Hawao Ka Rukh Mod Dete He

Mukkadar Hatho ki lakiro me nahi hausle me he
Ghar Ban Hi Jata He Jo Tinka Tinka Jod Lete He

Faulad Me Wo Taqat Nahi Jo Apne Hatho Me He
Hath Hi He Jo Faulad Bhi Tod Dete He

Hum Wo Nahi Jo Waqt Ke Sath Mit Jaye
Hum  Wo Zakhm He Jo Jate Jate Nishan Chod Dete He


 Thankyou !





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«Reply #6 on: February 01, 2011, 07:24:38 PM »
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MG jee Aadaab!

Kia baat hai janab... Kafi gehrai tale jaakar aisaas o khayal bayaaN kiye hai aapne..

Sabhi ashaar Masha Allah behad khoob rahe..
Puri kalaam par dil se daad kabool kijiye... Usual Smile

Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez .... Usual Smile         

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«Reply #7 on: February 02, 2011, 05:05:35 AM »
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thx koyal ji for ur lovely reply....bahot aacah reply diya he apne......thx alot........

anamika ji apko meri koshsih pasand ayi ye khushi ki baat he......but apke andaaj me reply kaha he ji ?.....

naresh ji apki daad dil se kubul karta hu......shukirya jo apne hausla badaya........

manoj ji apne waqt diya us ke liye apka abhari hu........ese hi sath dete rahiye........

headmaster ji "parwaj ji" apki wah wahi mil gayi ab muje aur kya chahiye........muje mera inaam mil gaya........ese hi encouragement dete rahiye.......

once again thx all
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«Reply #8 on: February 02, 2011, 05:08:04 AM »
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bahut khub matrixji...

 Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: February 02, 2011, 05:41:43 AM »
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rajaji reply karungi sab post pe par aajakl likha nahin ja raha ji..so plzz wait ji...jaise hi likhte banega wil reply....
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«Reply #10 on: February 02, 2011, 05:48:36 AM »
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Matrix ji--
lajawaab creation aapka.
bas ek sikayat kar rha hun--
poore poem me aapne ek Gazab ki seekh di hausle se bharpoor. jo sabke liye tha.
lekin last wala line jo mast h aisa laga ki aapne kisi ko indicate kiya jaise ki Aapne khud par ya jo padhe uss par.
bas ye mera sochna hai--
aapke iss post par dil se daad.
kgus rahiye
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«Reply #11 on: February 02, 2011, 09:41:51 AM »
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Ban k toofaan badla jo tune hawao ka rukh
Udd gaye unkey bhaav aur shabd ab tou ruk

Likhna bahut hai unhe,dil mai uthta hai vichaaron ka gubbaar
Ginnte hain lekin wo tere diye har zakhm k nishan reh-reh kar

rajaji reply karungi sab post pe par aajakl likha nahin ja raha ji..so plzz wait ji...jaise hi likhte banega wil reply....
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«Reply #12 on: February 02, 2011, 10:20:49 AM »
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mere dil ke zakhmo ki ginti main nain kar sakta
koi dawaa nahin aisi ke zakham bhar nahin sakta
hai dil mein aisi soch ke likh jaoun main pano par
kya karun magar dil ka haal share aam likh nahin sakta
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«Reply #13 on: February 02, 2011, 10:41:53 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
hamesha ki tarah damdaar peshkash....har sher ko dheron daad  Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: February 02, 2011, 10:49:39 AM »
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intezaar wo karte hain
jo kosiso se darte hain

hawaon ka rukh mod de wo
saanson me aisi jo hawa bharte hain

lakeeron me kismat dhundte hai wo
hausle se pastt hote hain jo

faulaad se wo kahan darrte hain
haathon me jo apna zigar rakhte hain

ghar bhi ban jaate hain unke
neele aakas tale jo so sakte hain

zakhmo ke nishaan bhi khanroch daale
wo aisa khanzar rakhte hain
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aapki lajawaab poetry bahut hi jhakashhh hai yaara--
kamaal likhte ho bhai--: meri naadani me likhi baato ka don mind
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thanx
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hum aisi
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