Hum, roze tumharay aangan say (by vb)

by vb on November 25, 2013, 07:00:35 PM
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Hum, roze tumharay aangan say
Ik phool chura kar laatay heN
Ash’aar ki soorat likhtay heN
Aur geet banaa kar gaatay heN

Har roze mehektay geetoN ka
Bazaar men mela lagta hay
Koi raahi in ko takta hay
Koi gaahak khushboo leta hay

Tum aa kar in ko dekho ge
Har roze ye hasrat rehti kay
Hum kis aangan ki matti heN?
Har phool ki khushbu kehti hay

Hum roze inheN samjhatay heN
Ik roze tumheN yaaN aana hay
Har khushboo tum ne leni hay
Har phool labon tak laana hay

Is say pehlay, ye murjhaaiN
Gar ho paayay, tum aa jaao
Hum bikhreN, koi baat nahi
Phoolon ka bharam gar rakh paao...


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«Reply #1 on: November 25, 2013, 07:42:33 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: November 25, 2013, 07:43:53 PM »
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Hum, roze tumharay aangan say
Ik phool chura kar laatay heN
Ash’aar ki soorat likhtay heN
Aur geet banaa kar gaatay heN

yeah surely wwe will apprecaiate and critize aswell,
if there is any thing went wrong ,,

but till now it good keep writing
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«Reply #3 on: November 25, 2013, 09:01:18 PM »
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Nazuk ehsaasaat raqam karti hui is khubsurat
nazm ke liye  tah e dil se daad.
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«Reply #4 on: November 25, 2013, 09:37:47 PM »
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thanx...
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«Reply #5 on: November 25, 2013, 09:38:28 PM »
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Hum, roze tumharay aangan say
Ik phool chura kar laatay heN
Ash’aar ki soorat likhtay heN
Aur geet banaa kar gaatay heN

yeah surely wwe will apprecaiate and critize aswell,
if there is any thing went wrong ,,

but till now it good keep writing
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sahal jee.. shukriya aap ka.. hum aisi he tavaqu rakhtay hen..
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«Reply #6 on: November 25, 2013, 09:39:27 PM »
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Nazuk ehsaasaat raqam karti hui is khubsurat
nazm ke liye  tah e dil se daad.

F.H.SIDDIQUI jee! aap say daad paai, hamaari qismat..
buhat shukriya aap ka...
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«Reply #7 on: November 25, 2013, 10:44:24 PM »
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waah waah dheron daad aur dili mubarak baad  aur haan kam se kam main to aapko hameshaa saraahataa hoon
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«Reply #8 on: November 26, 2013, 02:12:53 PM »
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waah waah dheron daad aur dili mubarak baad  aur haan kam se kam main to aapko hameshaa saraahataa hoon

sksaini4 jee! aap ki nawazish hay... kehna sirf ye tha k agar kuchh theek na laga karay tu bhe bata diya kejay...

is namzm ko pasand kiya aap ne... shukriya aap ka...
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«Reply #9 on: November 27, 2013, 10:12:26 PM »
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thanx....
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very nice
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very nice

shukriya aap ka...
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